Konoha's Cold Wind

You are already a mature author. It's time to think about updating at least two times a day.

According to my 9 years of reading experience, I have read a lot of books, from the martial arts at the beginning to the cool novels now. , I can't bear it when I see someone criticizing this book today. First of all, the plot setting is very strict. As for the weak protagonist, if you want to read a novel like Long Aotian, please go out and turn left. The protagonist needs a transitional stage to become stronger, and it cannot be done all at once. Just be invincible from the beginning. If you want to write this, first of all, if you don't talk about anything else, it will be difficult to develop the plot if you write it like this. This book is mainly written around the world of Naruto. If you want to force progress, you need to go to other worlds, and the biggest feature of this book is to become stronger in the world of Naruto.

Let's talk about the book Sealing Fire. Although I shouldn't be too picky about the world setting made by the author, I really feel that cloning is too perverted. It's so perverted that I think this setting is completely unreasonable.

I have four glasses of wine. One cup to Baoqiang, one cup to Yufan, one cup to Nailiang, and one cup to everyone here who doesn't like it.

I suddenly looked at the collection of Senju Hashirama Ninjutsu at Station B today. I found that no matter what ninjutsu the first generation used, they put their hands together and called out their names. Author, you asked the first generation of the dirty earth to demonstrate over and over again what kind of seals they put together, put their hands together and call out their names? ? ? Hahahahahahaha... Is this a bug?

The first time I read a paid novel, the first monthly pass in my life, I posted a post to commemorate it, the author left me a message to celebrate 😁😁😁

Let's complain about some things that can be complained about. I believe that in the later part of this book, everyone will have felt that it is either water or forced wisdom. Water can be used daily. Let it be easier for everyone to watch, but what's the point of saying something useless? You are so confused that you team up with Terumi Mei for cp. Anyway, I can't see the sense of cp between the two of them. Another point, after the protagonist opens the reincarnation eye, other plug-ins are added, not to mention the peak of the ninja world. At least he has the strength of Ban's peak period, and his intelligence is not as good as that of a jounin who trains two younger brothers all day long. Orochimaru's appearance rate and boss feeling far exceed that of Akatsuki Nagato, Obito. In the end, I don't want to say anything about the ending. I just can't write it down and just give an explanation at random. The most frustrating part is that I wrote so many vests before. Each vest's strength has a shadow level, right? There is also a fictional abyss organization. Where is this organization? At least they have to show up for the decisive battle. When the Five Shadows can't support them, it's not too much to have the vests of the Abyss Organization come to save the situation. Otherwise, what's the use of spending so much time describing the waistcoat. Overall, this book is a lot worse than the previous one, especially the later updates which were delayed and showed no sincerity. I guess the author is also planning to close the book, so let's stop here.

My girlfriend was so embarrassed that she forced one out of nowhere. Later in the game, you start the game with a magical outfit and plug-ins. As a result, the opponent steals crystals from home three to four times, and you and the super soldiers on the opposite side in the middle are fighting back and forth happily. He also forced the opponent's output to become invincible. Well, that's how it feels in the later stages.

Author: Are you a fan of Orochimaru? There is a suture monster. The protagonist opens the reincarnation eye and adds sage mode. He flies directly to the God of Thunder and Orochimaru is gone. Are you afraid of destroying Konoha? Afraid of Orochimaru escaping, why don't you just come to the tree world? Even if Konoha Fang has any objections to Wood Release, you can just push it to the Abyss Experiment. What do you have to be afraid of if you even got the reincarnation eye? Orochimaru seems to be very strong now, but as I said, there is only one suture monster, strong on the outside and weak on the inside. When encountering a strong character, he only loses. I just wrote it. After all, I only have one Naruto fanfic written by you on my bookshelf, so I'll just leave it at that. But you showed off your power in Ryūchi Cave, which is really annoying. But after I said so much, I guess you won't read it, because I think you, the author, are just enjoying yourself.

I think this book is quite good. The plot is very different from the original work, and I didn't find any bad points. Why isn't it popular? Especially after looking at the novels of the same type ranked above this book, I feel that the performance of this book should not stop here.