The Swordsman Who Walks the Heavens

Come on, I'm giving you two monthly passes. The author's ideas are very good. I don't want to wait in each world until the peak of the world before changing the world like other similar books. It is also very organized. To be honest, I just came in with the intention of taking a look at it, and then I fell in. It will not give some readers who have not read the original work a feeling of being blinded, because I have not read it, but it does not affect my understanding of what the author wants to express. Anyway, come on, as long as it doesn't collapse and I dare not say it, at least more readers will know you.

Are you serious about what Meng Qi calls the protagonist Xian'er in the new life? I really feel disgusted by this title.

Dou Po can be replaced. To be honest, I didn't want to read the original work after reading more than half of it, and the fanfic is even worse.

The main character's name is really annoying. Shi Hao, Xiao Fan is much better than you.

The main character's name is really nice. I won't tell you anymore. I'm going to do my summer homework.

The exchange value of the Zhuxian Sword is equal to 400 times the Dugu Nine Swords... What does the author think?

After watching the first two worlds, let's not talk about the Lord of the World. After all, this world is relatively new, but Dou Po feels completely lackluster. Judging from the introduction, the protagonist should be a well-educated swordsman who learns, uses and masters the sword step by step. However, from the beginning of the article, the sword feels like a simple weapon to the protagonist. If it is replaced by a knife, a gun or other weapons, there is no violation. The name of the protagonist is a big drawback. This type of name feels like it should have appeared in the Long Aotian era. Moreover, the protagonist's personality is not outstanding and has no charm, and the setting of Goldfinger is also very old-fashioned. The beginning of the chapter is simple, with good power, weapons, and techniques all arranged well, but it feels like an ordinary person has gained power, but does not have enough mood. He only follows the ups and downs of the original plot, pretending to be the original protagonist and supporting characters, and the plot is originally bland, emmmmm. It can only be said that this type of novel was written many years ago. I hope there will be progress in the future.

Let's change the name of pig's feet! So embarrassing

After watching a few worlds, I feel that the sword that the protagonist learns is just the skills of sword and sword moves. The so-called becoming stronger only means that the strength becomes stronger and the skills of swordsmanship increase. In my mind, Kendo is described more clearly in the book Mu Shen Ji. First, practice the basic sword postures, and you can evolve all the sword techniques with the basic sword postures. After all, the so-called sword techniques are just moves, the angle of the sword, and the change of speed. No matter how good the sword technique is, it is just a swordsman who knows how to use the sword. After that, there is the intention to have the sword heart and sword. The so-called sword heart and sword intention are not only the clear mind and the ability to instantly understand the enemy's sword skills, but the strength of the sword. With the sword, there is a heart and a will. Just like a flying sword, what the opponent sees is not a move but a powerful sword immortal who is invincible. Just like grass, wood, bamboo and wood can be affected by the sword. The enemy is just like the God of Shepherd's sword that opens the tribulation and the sword is all-pervading. Kendo should use the sword to understand all things, just like the runes in fantasy novels and mathematics in the real world. It requires self-learning and understanding. Everyone is different, but they are all in the process of understanding all things. A sword can create mountains, rivers, the sun and the moon, shape the universe, time and space, and change the cycle of life and death.

I rushed the protagonist to Doupo to lick Xiao Yan, and I gave up decisively.

I just looked at a few pictures and found so many loopholes! First of all, the author's cousin couldn't tell the difference. Second, since the system comes from the prehistoric world, why not apply the prehistoric settings? Third, the weapon level of Xuanyuan Sword is more powerful than the Four Swords of Zhu Xian! Fourth, Kung Fu Settings The top Kung Fu technique in the prehistoric times, the Eighty-Nine Mysterious Gong, costs 5,000 points, but the Dugu Nine Swords costs 3,000 points. Are you bragging about Jin Yong! Fifth, the protagonist's name is too middle-class and too dramatic!

Swallowed is written like a running account, you should just ruin it.

Nowadays, all Dou Po Cang Qiong fandoms are all Xiao Yan's cousins, which makes me sick. Now when I encounter this kind of people who are reborn and travel to the Xiao clan, they all ps.

To be honest, the protagonist's name is not a normal name. Can't we just persuade him to quit in one chapter and give him a normal name? Even if he is called King of Glory, it is better than Ye Dixian. Your name is the familiar name of Killer Matt and Dragon Aotian 😒. Do you have this last name? When you go to the police station, the police will laugh at you and ask you to think of a normal name. Our country has regulations on names. You can choose your first name casually, but you cannot change your last name randomly.

This name has the feeling of Long Aotian, Nangong Beiming Ximen Dongfang, banished to immortality? Why aren't you a super ghost?😅

The book looks okay, but it's a little bit immersive. Since I'm a swordsman, I don't feel that it's related to the swordsman. It's like playing a game to level up. There's no feeling of understanding the sword yourself. The protagonist just uses a sword.

Another diaosi protagonist, a dog licker, extremely childish

Write it well and swallow it. This fanfic is relatively rare and easy to get popular. If there are too many people writing like Zhetian, it will be difficult to write. If you are not careful, you will be trolled.

I couldn't stand it after reading one chapter. Xuanyuan Sword is more expensive than the Four Swords of Zhuxian, 6666 you are awesome

Isn't the Eighty-nine Mysterious Skills a body-training technique? I was confused. Is the body of Monkey King Erlang Shen fake?

The protagonist's name is very good, right? (Ye Qingxian?) Ye Banxian! It's just that the Taoist name is a bit off, too casual and the name is the same! There are very few people writing about this world of Wild Desolation. Come on, author!

Two monthly passes, please give me a try

In the Swallowing Starry Sky, Luo Feng's Star Tower and the Nine Tribulations Secret Book were all packed up and taken away. I didn't know if I left some substitutes behind and left. In the future, who will solve the catastrophe of the human race and the catastrophe of the world beasts?

It's a bit strange. You must have become an immortal in The Wilderness, right? I haven't seen anything yet, so I'm just asking: Devouring the Starry Sky and participating in the Genius Battle? That's a star level. You have to look at your strength when you download a dungeon.

This introduction looks a bit familiar. Did you write it, All Heavens Sword Ancestor?

Why do I feel bad when I see the name of pig's feet? Can I change it?

After reading three chapters, I am convinced to quit! ! !

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

I couldn't understand what was going on at the beginning. The master god of the time-travel system came out of nowhere and forced someone to arrange it.

You are just like him in the picture