Rong Qing

I saw the author's self-recommendation in a forum a long time ago, and accidentally came across this article on Douban. I stayed up late to read it. In the early stage, it was indeed a bit frustrating and stereotyped (for example, women who work hard in sword training can't endure hardship, so there are fewer women in sword sects). It was a bit uncomfortable to read later. It's really cool that the heroine is slowly getting stronger🥰As for the heroine and Zhong Xiu, to be honest, I was a little confused at first as to how they liked each other, but Lily is my cute point~ (bl❌ of course) and the men related to the heroine are all C, which is really good 👍

The four men in the script are ridiculously strong. When the heroine needs something, they come to give it to her. When the heroine's life or death is at stake, they come to save her. They knew and had predicted all the heroine's actions. It was really frustrating to feel that no matter how strong the heroine was, she was just jumping around in their back garden. It's a pity that I finally found such a wonderfully written orthodox fairy tale.

1. The heroine's sweetheart is a bit of a tool. It feels like it was set up to let the heroine show that she "already loves someone else and has no feelings for the sword masters". The relationship between the heroine and her is too shallow and superficial, with no soul resonance. The heroine's care and love for her are like the sword master's protection for the heroine. Because the gap between the two parties is too large, it seems that the one who gives is too lighthearted. Mortal emotions, why do they have to be love, friendship, family affection, or even the emotion of grasping the life and death of mortals, as long as the heroine's mentality changes and she is determined on the path of self-improvement. 2. The heroine's emotions towards the sword master are too complex, with too much dependence and trust. Every time she asks questions unceremoniously, and makes natural requests and reliance, these are combined together. It cannot be said that the heroine does not know the sword master's tolerance and even love for her. Know and use it, and praise the heroine for her mastery of human nature; know and then reject it, and appreciate the heroine's indifference and tenacity. But the heroine is neither. She doesn't seem to know, but she does it very well in bullying others. What does the heroine think of them? 3. I like this article, but I don't read it as a purely immortal article about the heroine's path to self-improvement. In fact, I read it a bit as the heroine Mary Sue (Sword Cultivation Attractor). The part about cultivating immortals is very interesting, and the relationship between the heroine and the sword cultivator is even better. Frankly speaking, I don't like reading about heartthrobs falling in love, and I don't like straightforward stories about the love between a cold immortal and a weak female cultivator. I just like to find restrained, rational, and obscure emotions in complex and huge plots. 4. I have only read Chapter 208 now. There may be hidden threads behind it that have not been developed. I don't understand the author's conception and thoughts. I am not saying this to shake your heart or question the author's writing. It is just my opinion. I hope you don't mind. I will delete it if it offends you.

The heroine's sweetheart is a concubine? Lily?😂

I stayed up late for two days to finish reading it. The writing is really good. The more I read, the better it gets. This is an orthodox fairy tale, and I really like the various settings in it! I like this world of immortality created by Da Da. Rong Rong is also very charming, and I would not be disobedient at all if someone likes her!

Shen Zhanyan is such a miserable cannon fodder. She didn't hesitate to kill the clan sister in order to seize fortune, but ended up giving the heroine a chance Of course, from the heroine's point of view, it's normal for her to kill Shen The worst thing is the clan sister, the cannon fodder among cannon fodders I hope the author will create more good female characters and less cannon fodder female supporting roles In addition, this book is really well written

This novel is so good. I can't find anything like it on this website. It's just so unpopular.

I don't know why I can accept gay men but not Lily.

I still like men and women together, but I don't like women and men. Is the heroine in this movie with a woman?

The portrayal of the heroine is quite interesting, except that the deep affection of the Lily Line heroine is too abrupt and makes people full of questions.

Originally, I didn't dislike Lily Line, mainly because it was a bit too abrupt, and it felt like it was going in both directions out of nowhere? ! I just encouraged the heroine when she was in a fragile state of mind. Did the heroine fall in love with her? I don't understand. Later, after the heroine started to become stronger, she kept pulling on such an ordinary mortal woman. I felt that it was dragging down the heroine. I am a heroine, and I would rather see the heroine cultivate honestly 😢

I specially registered the starting number to see it. It makes me sick 🌹🌹

Very nice! Although the front part is a little inferior and a bit stereotyped, it made me give up several times. But the back part is really exciting, a strong traditional fairy tale, and the men's single arrows are quite fun to watch. The heroine just doesn't like them. She is always alone and loves no one. No one loves her and she is too lonely. This is just right. The needle does not poke.

After reading ten chapters, I found it very interesting. The author's writing style and the heroine's character were very to my liking.

Does the author still update? Please update quickly😭😭😭

Can anyone who has watched it tell me whether Zhongxiu lived until the end 🥵🥵? I saw the tweet saying that she died very young before watching it.

Wow, I'm so vulgar, when I think of Chongyun and Chongji training together with the heroine. . . . Well, can you please write more?

Come on, author, don't be pigeonholed, one or two chapters a month is fine, this is a series in my lifetime 😆

Come on author, please update 😢

Woo hoo, author, I finally found you. I saw this book when I was in junior high school, but unfortunately I couldn't find it later. I went to college this year and finally found you. At 0 o'clock on New Year's Day this year, I finally found you. For 6 years, I have been looking for you on various book-finding platforms. You don't know how I spent these 6 years. Every time I read a novel, I thought of this book but I couldn't find it. I really, really, really, really like this book you wrote, about various causes and effects of time. The logic is very good. I really hope that the story of this book can be finished. At the end, I really feel that the whole story has just come to the surface. The world view is really big. I really hope to see the complete story. This book is really in my heart. Top 3 articles, looking forward to the author's update 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭