Dry Building

The writing in this extra chapter is much better than the main text.

Already collected. Please collect and return for a visit. The writing is good. Keep up the good work.

I have liked it for several days. The writing style is very deep. If I hadn't learned a lot from Fuwuche, I might not have been able to understand it. Come on, look forward to the story behind 🙏🙏🙏🙏

Lausanne

Come on, let me give you a little suggestion: don't have too many narrations, especially don't connect long paragraphs together. If you must have a lot, try to divide it into more paragraphs and add some dialogue or emotional description 🎁🎁🎁🎁

Come on, it's awesome👍👍👍

Awesome, keep going. I read the content and found that the idea is actually good, the content is unique, and the writing is not bad either. The problem is that the text is not refined enough, paragraphing, punctuation, etc. The other thing is the names of the people in it. If you change them to Chinese names, it will be much smoother.

Why can't I invest in this book? Also, the author is really amazing and can write for so long.

I haven't voted for you recently, I forgot, I'll give you another one now

The author is so powerful. I was frightened when I saw it. I definitely couldn't write that much!

I can't hold on, so I'll give you the ticket.

Recommend a book

I brought a small stool over to take a look. I brought my own food and water.

Gorgeous words, first-class writing, and a pulpy plot