Konoha Twins

I want to know why Kakashi's mana can be used as a counting unit

I have been thinking, if Minato sealed both Nine-Tails in his son, does that mean that Minato did not use the corpse seal, and Orochimaru could summon the fourth generation when Konoha collapsed?

Directly to Chapter 81: Dad's sadness. Detailed explanation there.

Original supporting characters,,, this thing will basically drive away 70% of readers

I can even subscribe to books about ninjas at the top of the food chain, who play the role of Hokage, but I just can't stand the plot. The world has obviously changed a long time ago, but the plot is the biggest reliance, and I secretly give the third generation of information about Konoha's plan to destroy Konoha. You have it!

Naruto is really dark. The fourth generation contributed so much to the village, but in exchange his son was treated like this. It would be more normal if a normal person rebelled and destroyed Konoha 🤫

When Minato was a child, the protagonist should have been more like his father than Naruto... . . . . .

The biggest problem 1. Every time you make a seal, you have to get a drink of water 2. Where does the protagonist get so much information? He spits it out like pouring beans. Are the others mentally retarded? They don't consider the issue of intelligence Other aspects are quite satisfactory. Similar settings have been done a long time ago.

Damn it! It's only 300,000 words before the decisive battle with Akatsuki. The pace is so fast! What does the author plan to write next? Could it be that the book has been completed with less than 500,000 words?

When I saw this book, I immediately thought of Yuta and Naruto as two 9-tailed characters beating two pillars.

It would be perfect if she could be a girl like this (ಡωಡ)

In fact, it's quite uncomfortable to read. You might as well just write about other people. When you write about Naruto's younger brother, let him be his younger brother. Don't always use Naruto to highlight how stupid the protagonist is. The writing is also average. No wonder your book's scores are so poor.

The author doesn't know enough about the world of Naruto, so what he writes is really bad in the eyes of senior Naruto fans. I'm sorry for the bad words...

Adding a group of whirlpool jounin will cause Konoha's failure

I'm not bragging, this book is well written. I think the only unreliable part is the protagonist's intelligence. He talks about everything and the NPCs don't respond at all. It's quite indifferent. (I saw the Sannin meeting for the first time and felt that there were too many flaws, so I will vomit one first. Don't be angry, the author, and don't be excited, the reader. My original intention was to read this book carefully and recall my youth during the Hokage period, but the difficulty is that the more I read it, the more it looks like a cool novel, so don't be angry.) Three generations don't care, the old man is curious, and it's easy to say anything as long as it doesn't endanger the village. Orochimaru is very strange, you seem to know everything, but I don't care, and I don't want to arrest you and ask for information. Tsunade, I am too lazy to care. Jiraiya, even if I knew he had read the script, I wouldn't be interested. It's not as good as the book I wrote.

I've read seven or eight chapters and it's well written, but why do I have a weird feeling? Let's just run away.

When will the new book be released? It's almost the end of March

There is no highlight, it completely follows the plot, and adds some supporting characters with many flaws. What I want to see is the protagonist leading Naruto to betray Konoha.

I have saved dozens of chapters of the new book. I originally planned to release it in April, but I have been playing games recently, so... If I want to save a little more, I will definitely send it out before July. The new book will try its best to avoid the pitfalls that were stepped on in the previous book, and efforts will be made to correct the problem of weak emotional description. In short, readers will see a big change.

I think the protagonist should be much more mature than Naruto

Who is the heroine? Is she going to fall in love with his brother? After all, I only see Hinata as beautiful in Naruto

Wow, I came here to congratulate you for becoming a big shot. I remembered that I haven't watched it much since I invested. I'll watch it again when I find time.

What the hell did the author write? I feel like he just wrote it based on his own feelings.

This book opens up a lot of ideas. It's a pity that you didn't write it well. If you did, it would be a great book.

I sent out a new book in the morning, but it's still being reviewed... I don't know when it will be approved.

Naruto's younger brother shares the Nine Lamas with Naruto The plot is flow The writing is passable and the plot is good The emotional description is too brief The bland description ruins this good outline The image of the protagonist is a bit unsustainable. It is the easiest way to just post a mental description of the protagonist talking to himself at a certain time; you can also find a gay friend for the protagonist, because only if you have similarities can you I came in and wanted to see the interaction with Naruto and the Nine Lamas, etc., But there were not many related plots and no Detailed enough For example, in the chapter about the master-disciple night talk, you can add a lot more expressions to describe the environment and describe the protagonist's heart, but it is too dry If the main story of Naruto alone is emotionally written well, a million words are still okay For example, the forehead protector in Sasuke's defection has been something that has appeared in Boruto; and other people's gifts to the protagonist during the farewell. It would be too unsentimental not to have a close-up.

This book is really good to read, the plot is tactful and vivid, and the overall picture is very strong, and the links are linked one after another. It can be said to be a masterpiece. Although I have not read it, it does not affect my blind recommendation of another book "Building Konoha with You".

Author, what exactly do you want to write, what is the main line, I don't understand

Does the announcement mean that updates will be discontinued?