I Don't Know How Safe You Are

The author is a novice. If there are any deficiencies, please feel free to raise them. If there are any typos, please point them out. This book is more everyday, literary and artistic, not very sweet or very cruel. Updates slowly, readers can save it for now and read it later. But! I will try to write more articles!

Hmm... School is about to start... Maybe we won't be able to update daily in the future, but every two days? Update every three days? It's possible... There will be updates occasionally on weekends! You have a lot of ambition but not enough energy. You understand the hard work of the students! Right? My readers are very understanding 484? 😘

I've read Chapter 18. I'm late because I'm a slow reader and my eyes have been inflamed for the past few days. Let me tell you my overall feelings! First, youth campus articles always give people a sense of freshness and refinement, and the author's large articles give me the same feeling. However, the more fresh and refined the articles, the harder it is to express them in words. If they are plain words, they will appear a bit mediocre, and if they are too gorgeous, they will be a bit out of place. Therefore, I think writing youth articles is not an easy task. The author handles this well, but needs to be improved in terms of writing style. Second, there are some typos in the text, but they are okay, not many, and have no impact. Third, regarding the content, the author most likely wants to use the frame-by-frame scene changes that are common in TV dramas. My suggestion is not to do it too frequently, otherwise it will give others a confusing feeling. Fourth, regarding character description, it is recommended to describe more to highlight the character's personality. There should not be too many characters in one scene, and the primary and secondary characters should be distinguished, so as to highlight the personal characteristics. Everything else is great! I hope the author will continue to work hard. If you have any questions, you can always ask me in my comment area. Collect my articles and don't delete them. I'm working hard to achieve the achievement of 300 collections. I hope you will support me greatly!