Hong Kong Island Time and Space

Chapter 21: A policeman is required to help criminals cover up their crimes? ? ? Just because she is a woman? Is it because my breasts are big or my breasts are tight? ? ?

I think the author must be experimenting with which poisonous point has the most obvious effect of dissuading people. There is no other explanation other than this. First, commit suicide after seeing through the world in the past life; Second, the system deletes the memory; Third, if there is nothing wrong, electrocute the abuser. I have only read less than 5 chapters, and there are so many typical poisonous points gathered together. How can you make people read it?

The original purpose of time travel is to foresee the plot and then create the maximum benefit for yourself based on the plot. It is meaningless to build a system to enhance yourself and forget the plot. You might as well change it to travel to the mirror world. There is no need to set up a movie world. Anyone who has watched the movie knows the plot and you still need to write it. I hope the author can improve it.

I deleted my memory when I saw Chapter 4. Um, is this convenient for following the TV movie to follow the entire plot? Then why should I read this book? Wouldn't it be more exciting to watch the movie again?

I was short of books at first, so I wanted to find some good novels to read, but I ended up reading less than 40 chapters. My poison resistance was relatively low, and I couldn't bear it anymore. I said goodbye.

I hope the author will write more rigorously about the promotion of the protagonist and learn more about the Hong Kong Island Police Department. Don't be like that book where a senior superintendent can be the head of the general department. The criminal department is at the same level as the O secretary. This can be found out with a single investigation. Without prior arrangements, chaos will follow.

I thought this book would become the Three Heroes of the Hong Kong Police Force, but in the second chapter, I was persuaded to quit. As a time traveler, I directly said that my memory has been erased, which is funny.

Don't let any ghosts appear! Just have superpowers!

In 1985, Hong Kong showed a five-pointed star on the left chest of its clothes to become a police officer? Do you think the book is a dull one or does the author have unique ideas? How dare you read the first chapter with confidence like this! Is it difficult to change a few words?

Let's not talk about your poisonous point of deleting memories. You can't tell anything about your writing style. I won't talk about your various harems in the future. You are the author and you are the biggest, but at least you arranged things reasonably! You had a girlfriend and met your parents, and then you opened a newspaper and then retired directly. Then you fell in love with someone you met, and then all kinds of women posted about it. Well, is this what a handsome, talented man has to be like? The harem is outdated and no one can see it, right?

One of the characteristics of the novel is erasing memory! This kind of setting can't be imagined without having a cerebral thrombosis in ten years. If the plot takes a long time and you can't remember a sentence, it's better than pretending to have amnesia!

The memory of the pig's feet in this book was deleted to force him to quit. The author just pretends to be confused while pretending to understand. No matter how good you are at pretending, it won't be natural for him. You, a book writer, can't write about nature, so what do you want readers to do? After reading so many time travel fics, every writing method of selective amnesia will not do well. This is not a point to watch, this is the author making it more difficult for himself to write. Plant a nail in the reader's mind first, and then use unnatural plot to eliminate it. How can you eliminate it. I don't know which stupid author came up with this kind of selective amnesia first. Anyway, I felt awkward wherever I saw it, and I had absolutely no motivation to continue reading.

Because he was born wonderful, he deleted the host's memory. If I don't have relevant memories, why should I watch Time Traveler?

What rubbish, I really can't stand it after reading Chapter 37! Surrender yourself early! The police have closed the case and everyone is happy, but the Shabi plot has to arrange an inexplicable surrender? It makes his sister unable to hold her head high in her husband's family, and it puts a stain on the protagonist's resume. After all, he took advantage of the protagonist, and no matter how he excused himself, as long as he surrendered, even if he concealed the protagonist's actions objectively, the protagonist was objectively an accomplice, and the plot was even worse as a police officer! Perhaps it was because of her so-called uneasy conscience that she brought shame to the people in the police station and put herself in jail? Let so many people pay for her! In addition, the value of the poison points at the beginning is disgusting. Can you please stop taking advantage of Hong Kong's popularity? Reading beautiful articles is like eating delicious food, which is a kind of enjoyment. Reading stupid articles is like eating garbage and suffering. Reading stupid plots that suddenly appear in beautiful articles is like a fly suddenly appearing in the delicious food, or biting half of it and swallowing it in your mouth. It's so disgusting that I can't help but curse! !

Why write a fanfic if you have no memory? Why do "people" read fan fiction? Didn't the author think about it before writing the book?

Help from the Black Car (Poisoned Milk)

Deleting memories is really poisonous. If the author doesn't want the protagonist to have memories of the case, there is really no need to go to such trouble. After all, who the hell remembers the plot of the TV series that I watched many years ago, and even if there are, it is only a minority. I think many readers can accept this reason, why bother to use such a poisonous trick? In addition, the TV series is well written, and suddenly it is changed to a movie. It is really lazy. The movie is 90 minutes, and the TV series has dozens of episodes.

I didn't read the book, so I read the comments first, and they all talked about the problems of the Hong Kong film world system: To be honest, the world of Hong Kong films is very dangerous, and gun battles and assassinations are commonplace. An ordinary person can live an ordinary life as long as he is not particularly unlucky and avoids dangers. However, if an ordinary person becomes the protagonist after time traveling, he cannot remain ordinary. Who reads novels with ordinary protagonists? Unless you were a great person before time travel, it would be too difficult to become successful after time travel, so the system was created. Of course, the simpler the system, the better. It is best not to have intelligence, and it can continuously improve the physical fitness of the protagonist, and the level of gun combat and combat reaches the human limit. Don't be too perverted and develop super powers. The data of the system must also be simple, otherwise it will be annoying to look at a lot of digital skills.

The cool thing about film and television fans is that they are foresighted, and there is a memory deletion at the beginning, which is very poisonous.

It's so disgusting. Zhang Dayong has reminded him of what happened to him. He found new evidence and said it without hesitation. Is this pig's feet and brain made of tofu? This kind of thing should be avoided in the first place. Who knows what reporters will write. If the plot is revealed, it will be like a psychological crime. There is a plot in it, the evidence is leaked to the reporter, the reporter directly writes down the modus operandi and tools, and a copycat murder case directly occurs. Will the evidence revealed in the article definitely allow the murderer to take precautions, etc. It is too poisonous. Did the author deliberately make the protagonist low? Suicide time travel has already discouraged a large number of people Then there is a low-level system. To be honest, what is the use of such a system? It proves that you are a slave of the system? Then plot a reporter, to be honest, at least three-fifths of them will be persuaded to quit here. Point 4: Delete part of the memory. This is even more embarrassing. Which TV series do you remember this person from? Since this is the case, it is better to write about the TV series if you don't understand it, and there is nothing wrong with extending it step by step. It is much better than forcibly reducing intelligence. The previous article also wrote about why Zhang Dayong couldn't be promoted? What's the difference between you and him? You don't have your family background. Your experience with him is not much better. Classmate Zhou Xingxing, do you have any background? No, then you should take the blame.

If I were reborn in this kind of world to be a police officer, of course I would have to gather seven Jiaxin, seven Xiaoxian, seven Shuzhen, seven Zhilin, plus a few Bixia Li Zhen Hai Mei Zi Mei. This is the only way to gather several identical goddesses. What kind of noble thing can I do?

After reading most of the comments, I also saw the author explaining in the comment area many times that he worked very hard to make changes in the later stages. However, the first few chapters are too toxic and the plot to persuade you to quit is too dense. Most people will not be able to see your later changes.

The memory of the film and television world is too poisonous. I can't remember the old movies and forget about them. You have to write down some of them. I doubt you are good at numbers.

Is it necessary to delete the memory? I have watched so many Hong Kong movies, and I still enjoy watching them again now, not because of how good the filming is, but because as time goes by, I have forgotten the plot, such as criminal investigation files, and I can only remember which actors played it. If you ask me about the plot now, I can only say that Hong Kong movies are about solving crimes. . Just watch it again, follow the plot, and remember a few impressive cases. It would be good.

Gao Jie is the heroine? To be honest, there are so many Hong Kong movies, but I really don't think Guo Keying is particularly beautiful. It would be better to have another female lead or multiple female protagonists.

After reading two chapters, my writing and language skills convinced me to quit

There are so many movies in Hong Kong, how can you bring it in if you have an unknown beginning? If you haven't seen it before

There are more than 600 chapters, all of which are Hong Kong movies. I really don't understand what's good about Hong Kong movies and why I still write so many. No wonder it's not popular and I can just write one or two copies. How can I write too many? I deserve the death of being thrown into the street.

There are more than 600 chapters, all of which are Hong Kong movies. I really don't understand what's good about Hong Kong movies and why I still write so many. No wonder it's not popular and I can just write one or two copies. How can I write too many? I deserve the death of being thrown into the street.

There are more than 600 chapters, all of which are Hong Kong movies. I really don't understand what's good about Hong Kong movies and why I still write so many. No wonder it's not popular and I can just write one or two copies. How can I write too many? I deserve the death of being thrown into the street.