The Sword Returns to Qingcheng

There is nothing wrong with the plot, and it can be said to be relatively good, but there is one thing I don't understand particularly. Someone bullies me, and then the protagonist blocks it, and then the thing is over? It comes across as too cowardly. Someone tries to touch your girlfriend for no reason, but someone tries to stop your girlfriend, and you get beaten up. You wait for someone to hit you hard, and then you step in and block it. Then they say hello to you, and nothing happens to you? Then I sleep with your wife and wait until I let your wife have my child and let her divorce you. Then you come up to stop her. I apologize to you very politely. You are so generous, and then you help me raise the child?

Let's warm each other up. The martial arts area is really deserted. The beginning of the article is good. The rhythm alone is very good. There is nothing to tell about the plot later.

It's so miserable. To write these 250,000 words, I'll stamp out 8 tickets first.

No wonder no one is watching. Is such a mean protagonist here to disgust people?

What I wrote in the front is okay, but what I wrote in the back is nothing. I was so drunk that I wasted the previous part.

What a wonderful work! Collected! Take your time and watch! Learn, learn! Come on update! Welcome to visit us for advice!

What I wrote above is so baffling that I don't want to continue reading.

I also read the martial arts I wrote before. I originally thought that going to the spaceship was just a copy, and then I never subscribed. I wanted to wait for this copy to end, and I waited for several months. If you want to write about cultivating immortality, just read another book. Anyway, entering that spaceship Hanshanyuan became more and more puzzling.

I just read the beginning and it's very well written, better than me👍, keep up the good work! Learn from experience!

The writing is very good, but why is there no one?

I was rejected because I wrote so much and my grades were so bad. I only came across this novel after it was recommended on the Internet.