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Preliminary score: 72 points Number of words read: 50,000 words + 30 chapters Type of work: Fairy Tales Status of work: Contracted, serialized Reviewer: Zhile Travel Book title introduction(14.5/20) Book title (7/10) This name is direct and clear, and goes straight to the core of this article. Introduction (7.5/10) This introduction is very concise. It not only explains the background of the story, but also introduces the direction of the story. It also sets up suspense, which can effectively arouse readers' interest. Three Golden Chapters(15/20) Chapter 1 Cause The author uses the contradictory existence in the opening chapter to catch the reader's attention. The eldest daughter of the Zhang family, who is dressed luxuriously but has many holes in her little hands; Zhang Ruoxi, who is in trouble but still helps the young Zhang Ruoxi; the mother and daughter of the Zhang family who are famous but have failed; Liu Taoist, who is highly cultivated but wanders around the world; and the patron saint who reacts but cannot break through, all attract readers to follow. Chapter 2 Cause and Effect Revolving around the IKEA heirloom (probably amber), the Zhang family's conspiracy is in full swing, and its viciousness is fully revealed. Zhang Ruoxi's life hangs by a thread amidst all kinds of torture. Chapter 3 Conclusion The truth is always so unbearable. Liu Daozhe rescued Zhang Ruoxi and found that she was the one he had been searching for for hundreds of years. The Zhang family lost Liu Daozhe's protection and fell rapidly. Zhang Ruoxi was at a loss when she saw all this. Story(14.5/20) Zhang Ruoxi, the eldest daughter of the Zhang family, was killed by her stepsister and was rescued by Liu Daozhe when she was about to die. From then on, he changed his name to Yu Xi, worshiped the Taiyuan Sect, took Liu Dao as his teacher, and embarked on the road of cultivating immortality. Advantages(16/20) 1. The author's writing style is fresh and naturally full of tension, making the description full of pictures and immersive. 2. The characters are vividly depicted, full of flesh and blood, and have an online IQ. Especially the persistence of the Tao and the open-mindedness of the things expressed by the heroine, it is quite a state of "even if there are thousands of people, I will go there". 3. The plot develops neatly and neatly, without any sloppiness. The daily life of the heroine in the sect is full of warmth, and the description of Juyuan is even more beautiful. Coupled with the promotion of foreshadowing, it adds a charming color to the novel. 4. The book title, cover and introduction are all very good, echoing each other, giving people a fresh and refined feeling, and the effect of attracting sunshine should be good. The biggest highlight(12/20) 1. This article is in line with the elegant temperament of Xianxia novels, and the meaning between the lines is high-spirited. It is quite good as a training game for newbies. 2. The several foreshadowings in the article are very natural. Disadvantages 1. The overall novel is a bit thin, the writing style is not sophisticated enough, and some scenes are handled very roughly. For example, the master and apprentice have been together for a long time, but lack the necessary interaction. 2. The image of the heroine's master Liu Daozhe is relatively vague, and his characteristics are not outlined. 3. The novel lacks enough highlights to really stand out among similar works. However, the situation in classical fairy tale novels is similar now. ​Summary: This is a very refreshing novel about a female protagonist cultivating immortality. The author outlines for us the story of a lady from an official family who should be pampered and pampered, and moves forward bravely on the road to cultivating immortality. I wish the author will write more wonderful books.

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No male protagonist? Why do you think this introduction is a bit confusing?

Uh, real person in Yuanying stage? A Taoist in the golden elixir stage? Are you sure you wrote it correctly?

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I passed by and took a look at the collection. It was completed within a week of being put on the shelves?