American Comic Monster

This novel is beautifully written! The story is compact? I spent 12 hours watching Ultron appear! Well,,,, I found the whole novel very interesting! ! ! Uh,,,,, vomit, vomit,,, I'm sorry I couldn't bear it anymore! vomit vomit vomit vomit vomit vomit vomit vomit vomit vomit vomit vomit vomit vomit vomit vomit vomit vomit vomit vomit vomit vomit vomit vomit vomit vomit vomit vomit vomit vomit vomit vomit vomit vomit vomit vomit he.

It was originally well-written and promising, but if you have to come up with a power system, do you think a world where Captain America can fight Thanos with his hammer can talk about a power system? In a movie world, the power system is mainly to accommodate the plot and highlight the world of the protagonist. If you insist on setting a standard, well, it will collapse! A dragon is only one level higher than a basilisk. The basilisk is so awesome. It takes so much effort to fight an alien vegetable, and it is even more disgusting and beating! The so-called higher life forms, the so-called power that can destroy civilizations on several planets, cannot withstand nuclear bombs. How did you do it? The earth is still far away from the interstellar age!

It was amazing at the beginning, but in the later stages when the power system was upgraded, the environment began to gradually collapse. No new environment has been added, and the protagonist has already been assimilated into this world. He walked from a detached position to the front desk, but he has lost his original intention of going home. Nagini also gradually lost her resistance to the system. In fact, Nagini never woke up, but fell deeper and deeper into one goal after another. In the final analysis, what Nagini is pursuing is just a bubble. But his humanity is losing bit by bit, and his so-called bottom line is more like paranoid obsession. Why is Samantha called a devil by Falcone? If it is a cathartic behavior derived from the fear of Nagini, I think it does not fit in with the author's portrayal of Falcone. Could it be that Samantha's true identity is similar to OAA. Why does the Angel Orphanage adopt so many demons? Why did Nagini get the golden finger? What is his golden finger? He never thought that his desire would become more and more intense. I think back on it, there's no pie here that doesn't pay a price. All gifts in destiny have already been marked with a price. His efforts seem to us just a joke, something to kill time. What does Nagini stand for? Or what is the supreme system of monsters? Jormungandr, Nidhogg, Satan, etc. That is, Original Sin and Destruction. Note that monsters represent the concept of inhumanity in the setting of this article. Because I noticed in the book that there are elves in the monster card, Nagini's final path is likely to be the integration of non-human beings, infinite dimensionality, destroying all illusions, and destroying the world. The world of Marvel is very good. If New York is destroyed, Nagini will basically start the Five Gods and OAA Gang. Does Nagini really love Sam? Snake blood is cold and rational and ruthless. The dragon's blood is too hot for mortals to live in for long. Sam is destined to be a passerby. Nagini is destined to undergo transformation again and again before she can truly carry this power. I hope the author will not write a mindless and cool article that shows off his strength.

Anyway, after reading the two newly updated chapters, I still feel quite disappointed. Actually, I don't want to give up, because I'm still waiting to see Godzilla's atomic breath sweep the city. But now that I see it, there are still some things I don't feel comfortable saying. Let me make it clear first that I don't often write long reviews, so please forgive me if I miss anything. It should be said that 80% of those who came to read this book came for the word "monster", especially a monster that wants to destroy New York where the heroes of the Marvel world gather. Well, this is very interesting. This is a "gimmick" that can catch people's attention. As long as nothing unexpected happens, it should be a good book. However, such a story does not conform to mainstream values. I cannot comment on whether the author was under such pressure, because the author has not communicated with us. In terms of character creation, there are many outstanding ones. Jin Bing, Mama Fa Ke Xia, the old woman, and even the dean who has no role, it is easy for people to remember their characteristics. But I still have to say that after the Marvel Aunt episode, there are no more outstanding characters, and the few that appear are template characters. The characterization is also extremely blunt. Like Viper Raymond, because there is a prototype, when the author directly describes "this is a sinister and cunning person", readers can know what kind of person this character is. But your original characters are not good. You said he has a city, so what about the events that can show him having a city? You said he has a high IQ, but has this person done anything that would make readers slap their thighs and shout, "Fuck, there is another way"? In terms of plot, the setting that integrates other worlds in the early stage is indeed great. It can appropriately advance the main plot and open a copy for the protagonist to upgrade. However, success is also a failure, and the author's writing power is completely unable to control such a huge world view. As for the four worlds that have appeared so far, Fast and Furious only provides a "warmth of home" and can be ignored for the time being. Anaconda made a movie and there was no follow-up. Blood Orchid is so awesome that no one from Marvel has studied it. The three worlds that merged at the same time, Pacific Rim, have not yet appeared. Why, the protagonist must complete the plot of one world before entering the next one (now that the plot of Men in Black has been completed, Raymond has completely offline). It would be better for you to directly attack the Pacific Rim monsters in the next chapter than to successfully obtain the right of pardon for the protagonist. At least this way the dramatic conflict will be greater. As for other things, I can't think of them for a while, so I'll just say this for now. In fact, if the author is really afraid of 404, he can write something like: New York has lost a few people and a few buildings have collapsed, but I don't know who did it; well, why the system has added some rewards, it's really strange... This way, instead of directly describing the scene of killing people and demolishing buildings, it allows the readers to guess. Couldn't the readers guess it? And they didn't directly say who did it, isn't that nice? Above. I hope the author can slap me in the face with the plot in this Men in Black chapter.

I feel that the writing is a bit verbose, like the water-filled writing I read at Qidian a few years ago. A lot of boring explanatory narration makes the reading experience extremely poor. For example, in Chapter 99, the protagonist fainted, and then a man came out and said that the protagonist's physical parameters were normal. But this sentence has been expanded into a thousand words, with a lot of narration about Lu Dan's personal feelings for the protagonist added in the middle. Shouldn't this part be left to the readers to feel based on the context of the novel?

It's a rubbish novel. I don't recommend reading it at all. It was a bit interesting in the early stages, but later on when the author couldn't continue writing, he started forcing people to push the plot and force people to be black.

It's best not to eat people because of feces, urine, second brother, white liquid, AIDS, skin diseases, hemorrhoids, smelly feet, not bathing, runny nose, etc. It's scary to think about it.

I regret not reading the book review. Now I am too poisoned and there is no hope 😰

It's good in the early stage, but it's too poisonous later on. The author is like a little girl, writing all the words about the Internet. It's very uncomfortable

To be honest, I like this book very much. I ignored some of the poisonous points in the front But when I saw my wife dying, even if it was foreshadowing, there was no superhero to support the protagonist. Just think about it and I knew there must be something fishy in it. What about Odin and Ancient One? How could it be possible that my wife and children would die, but it was too dissuasive When I saw this, I was upset and couldn't stand it at all Other authors of this kind of plot didn't write the foreshadowing. They would also write it together, otherwise they would reveal some clues. Anyway, if there was a heroic friend who was willing to come forward at that time, I would feel much better. As for the friendship I wrote about before, I have eaten it all. Even if it is for ideals, I will not struggle in my heart. It seems that all superheroes have lost their feelings. Superheroes are also human beings! Not a machine! For the sake of all mankind and the conflict between friends' feelings! They must struggle too! It's hard for me to think of it as a real world and push it forward. I also feel extremely uncomfortable. I rarely write book reviews, but after seeing this, I don't know whether to keep it or abandon it...😞😞😞 It's so painful.

The author is great I don't know if you have noticed Now the review style of your book seems to have changed? I remember at the beginning the book club was full of praise for this book I also fell into the trap because of this —"The writing is smooth, and the characterization of the characters is very delicate and in place" This is the most common comment I saw when I first entered the trap I used to agree with this sentence very much But now . . . . . Why do you feel pity or ridicule for this book when you first read it ? Big, we believe in you But please think more when writing the next plot. I really don't want to see a masterpiece go downhill like this Please! ! ! (The above represents only my personal opinion)

👉🐴☠️ 👊🙂👉🐷 I'm so disgusting🤚🤚

The author's writing style has completely changed since then. It's so watery that it makes people uncomfortable to read.

The author 147_149 is a bit stupid~ Some things cannot be touched. The real poisonous point is not to say that the audience has different preferences, and the dark Madonna, bitch, and Xiaobai... Are not just their own preferences... Some things can be metaphorized, so why write them directly? ? ? Is it possible for you to write about a child under ten years old and then act ruthlessly as the protagonist? ! It is not impossible to use children as a rocker to shock people's hearts. There are many novels in the Liao Zhai genre that I have read, in order to bring out the dire straits of the people in this era, innocence and loveliness, the heart of a child, and the light and darkness of human nature. Almost all of them are shocking! But the protagonist is always involved from the side. Look at the protagonist of our book, use your family and a 6-year-old girl as comparison objects? Haha, I believe those of us who have received 9 years of compulsory education know that the protagonist's family is not worthy. So why do we force readers to accept such a disgusting outlook on such a protagonist and let us continue reading? ? ? It's really not even as good as a novice. The alien missile section was downplayed so well before, but here it is... Sometimes reading can be said to be about different things but not the same thing! How can it still put you in a good mood to read a book if your three outlooks are not harmonious?

I feel like my writing style has changed a bit recently. I still feel like I prefer the earlier style. Well, let's see again

After reading so many book reviews, I understand: this book is extremely poisonous Thank you Shennong

The writing is very good, but it seems very laborious, too showy, and very wordy.

It's really disgusting. Not only are the three views incorrect, but the plot is also forcibly broken. Not to mention the plot is inexplicably broken, and even the characters are bloody.

I feel like it's been watery since it was put on the shelves.

Twist it hard! Why is there so much water

Didn't you realize that the only bond mentioned above is the wife and children? Now, there are a lot of superheroes who are the cause of the death of wives and children. I am really speechless. If you want to be dark, go as dark as possible. I look down on those who hesitate the most. Since they are fans, if it is not the original plot, then don't fuck. The people in the original plot must be alive. It doesn't matter if Tony dies or Thor dies. The Marvel world is so big, you have to hold it in. These guys, when your wife died, why didn't you see the superheroes who were your brothers and friends to help you? Brothers and friends didn't know how to help you until you were successful. What the hell are a bunch of superheroes in this novel? I hope the author remembers Guo Degang's words. When you are tricked, keep telling them to put down and stay away from them. If you are struck by lightning, you will be harmed! Okay, give it up, the further you go, the less interesting it becomes. You don't need to be white all the time, but it's disgusting. It's white and black sometimes! This is even more disgusting than oppressive dark text!

For this book, both the writing and the plot are top-notch. The plot is almost perfect, the protagonist's image is well portrayed, and the role of Wilson [Kingpin] is also very powerful. It almost restores the Kingpin in the movie and it is also very good. In addition, the background of the Angel Orphanage is also well depicted. The previous stories almost all revolve around this background, which also shows the origin of the subsequent characters. At the same time, I also lamented the fate that brought so many big figures in the future into this small angel orphanage. Xiaoqi: Huh? Why didn't I know that I thought so much? Ahem, let's get back to the subject, so many compliments can show that this book will definitely be of high quality if it is not supervised! Of course, with Xiao Qi's temperament, oh ho... So, as long as you are willing to hack Xiao Qi's home address, and then talk to him about life with a razor blade, then the probability of successful investment will be very high!

This book truly told me what it means to become a god to feed S. H. I. T Before it was put on the shelves, it was a book with the potential to become a god. It has high-quality subject matter and imagination, excellent character structure and plot design, and a witty battle plot that is always necessary for becoming a god. It has perfectly attracted a large number of readers. After being put on the shelves, after experiencing a frenzy of bursts of updates, the one or two updates a day made some readers realize that something was wrong. Readers who did not have books will especially find this problem: the author is too good, and the plot content of the previous chapter can be divided into three to five chapters after it is put on the shelves. It is filled with a lot of embarrassing words from the author, telling you clearly that this is just the word count, but the plot is still outstanding at this time, and because the author has a certain factor of saving the manuscript, readers can just read it quickly. If this level is maintained, the author can still become a god and make a lot of money. Then, after Gu Yi appeared, all the poisonous points in the book began. First, Gu Yi inexplicably persuaded the protagonist to surrender. Later, the author changed the story so that the protagonist would not be so aggrieved, but the protagonist could still feel a significant decrease in IQ. Then, it was Ultron who killed the protagonist's wife and daughter, and all the protagonist's previous "friends" turned against them, or could not do anything, and then the protagonist "fake death". Anyway, I couldn't watch it anymore after seeing this. Even if the plot is reversed and I am given a gold medal lecturer's ten-thousand-layer cake, I can't stand it anymore. It's too poisonous, and I'm dead. The key is that the updates are still slow and the poison is slowly being introduced to you. Is it really just the author who has changed?

I have read this novel and read a lot of it. Suggestions, I suggest you not to give suggestions to the author. I regret reading this book. If I hadn't read it a lot, I would have really wanted to delete it. Give me an example. This book is the cake, and the tasting part is okay. You just pay and eat. Then the cake taste gradually changed, but it was bearable. When we got to the deepest level, we would suddenly get a few mouthfuls of shit from time to time. After thinking about it carefully, I suspected that someone had changed, or that it was a model of cheating and killing. Now, I have finished eating the cake that the cook has made. I found that the back part has basically nothing to do with the front part, and everything like the taste and feeling has been completely changed. The chef is free to taste whatever he likes. I paid for the food, so I am qualified to comment. Let the people behind you avoid eating shit. That's pretty much it. Look at the back. If you like the front, you have to pay attention at all times. If your feelings change, you can slip away at any time.

This book is poisonous. . . Holy Mary, the protagonist's friends die in various ways, and relatives die in various ways, and then the superheroes target you and want to kill you, but you still forgive them in various ways 💚💚💚💚💚💚 and you are willing to be cuckolded. . Tired 1. The protagonist's system tasks are basically useless. Except for the ones that appear at the beginning, they are basically not highlighted in the later stage 2. The heroine is not Mia. Your early description is so ambiguous 3. In the Men in Black plot, where is the phone that the protagonist uses to summon Wonder Woman? , Was judged at the United Nations meeting, and had his brain kicked by a donkey? ? 4. Who is the heroine? She makes a movie with all the bells and whistles. Instead of solving the troubles that can be solved all day long, she waits for them to happen. In order to show that the protagonist has a high IQ, she is crazy in the S. H. I. E. L. D. Department. The intelligence report from the United Nations intelligence department stated that the protagonist has a high IQ and high emotional intelligence. Can you not be so hardcore? . 5. It is also said that the protagonist loves his family. After Mia is kidnapped, you get angry and go see someone, and the plot is over. In the whole process, Mia except for appearing when she was kidnapped and saying that Mia was kidnapped, almost never appeared in the later plot 6. There are also things that the protagonist should not do and things that should not be done. I just want to join in the fun. Didn't the protagonist say that he is wary of danger in times of peace? When he is wary of danger, he neglects his duties all day long to discover his own strength. He obviously has enough strength, but he sits there all day long, knowing clearly that something will happen. He waits for it to happen before solving it. Isn't this poisoning someone's life?

This book has been criticized. This is the first time I have seen a book criticized by readers of all levels on Qidian. Com

Daily Guide to Poison, why would you recommend this book to me? The world is extremely poisonous. When I looked at genuine money earlier, I felt like I was feeding a dog.

There is no eunuch in this book, but it might as well be. To be honest, the author's own writing level should be okay, but! But! But! I suspect that the author has anti-human tendencies 😅 The following plot was written purely to disgust readers, right? Don't talk nonsense about "being poisonous is also refreshing". If the plot collapses, it will collapse. If the heroine dies, she will die. You can use Mystique as a substitute... There are few dark novels like this, right? Is the author a pervert? I understand that the author wants to write about the feeling that the protagonist feels that his grief is greater than his death, his whole person has collapsed, and his psychology is distorted! But what you wrote is not like this. Instead, it makes people think that the author himself is a psychologically twisted person! In short, this book is finished! If you just want to see how this book progresses and can endure it, you can continue reading. If you are looking for a good book to read that is suitable for you, I suggest you give up immediately!

Pulling my crotch, I feel like the author is taking too much pleasure in himself. And as a beast stream, even the main mission is still destruction and killing. Why do you have so many emotional lines? If you can write it well, then forget it. . . Anyway, to sum up: Friends who have not maxed out their poison resistance, please watch with caution!

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