Xiaoyao Famous Doctor

I've finished reading the previous parts, and overall it's pretty good. However, after more than forty chapters, I haven't seen the protagonist show any medical skills, which is a bit surprising. There is more writing on copying poems. Later, the background of military commanders was introduced, which was a bit confusing. Personally, I think since it is about writing about medicine, it is best to focus on the description of medical skills. Of course, this is just my personal opinion and is provided for reference by the author.

I feel like it's well written. It might be better if it's a little more compact.

I really like Xia Yuanjin and hope to have a happy ending with the male protagonist

The writing style is indeed somewhat similar to that of the son-in-law, as well as the top accountant mentioned earlier. It can be said that they are both slower and slower-paced, which I still like better. However, it is almost 300 chapters now, and it feels like the whole book has only just begun to unfold. Even the Novice Village has not yet come out, the two important stages Lijing and Jianghu (Heimuya) have not yet begun, and the two heroines have just expressed their feelings for each other. I have to say that it is a bit too slow, and the first hundred chapters feel like it puts too much pressure on the protagonist, which is too boring. In addition, the protagonist has not changed his mentality until now. To be honest, this kind of ordinary people in ancient times, even famous doctors, can easily be played to death. The protagonist is still powerless, and any little master could kill him. Seeing that Yun Jin has been refusing to be a good person, and then there is a prefect who looks like a traitor, there is no doubt that one day he will fall in love with the oiran and want to take her away by force, and then the protagonist will be bitter and angry again. This kind of plot is cliché and a bit disgusting. The hidden identity of the protagonist should be the cub lost by the Minister of War. The next big plot should be the storm of leaving Beijing and getting involved in Kowloon to fight for the heir. Hope and Wan'er Yunjin's progress is further, overall it is depressing. Finally, let me feel about myself. After all, very few people become gods with one book. Novice authors often fail to achieve good results. The first book should be within 300 to 500 chapters. It should be the best. On the one hand, the author's mentality is easy to collapse if the results are not good. On the other hand, the first book is often full of problems. If the length is too long and cannot be controlled, it will easily become eunuch or unfinished. Above, the author's writing style is still very good, but there are still a lot of typos, all kinds of mixed up, etc. I hope it can be reduced, and the rhythm is a little faster. I hope you can finish it successfully, Oli!

The writing style is very good, but there is one thing. After reading nearly 200 chapters, I have a feeling that I am aggrieved, very aggrieved. I don't know how to describe it, so I will give it up for now.

I feel like the way this Yun Mansion is shaped is very awkward. The Yun family is the first family in Dongping Mansion. That strength must be number one. But the author of Grandson Generation described that Wan'er is the only heroine who is worthy of being created. To say that other children are either lingering in brothels or brothels, or that they are negligent in medical skills. Since it is not the same person, it proves that there must be more than one son of this Yun Mansion. And there are many grandchildren, so since they are not hanging out in brothels, they are art. If so many people are not successful, it proves that there is something wrong with the family's upbringing. If you want to stay in a brothel, it is normal and reasonable for a big family to have a lot of incompetent people. But if many people hang out in brothels, then there is a problem with the family's tutor. And if there are so many men in a family, they are either lingering in the brothels or their medical skills are poor. So why don't those who are not good at medicine study and join politics? Why not go into business? With the strength and backstage background of the first family in Dongping Mansion, we should find a way out. And the leader of a family that these fools can see clearly cannot understand and refuses to change? If this is really the case, it proves that there is a problem with the overall tutoring of this family. How can a family with this kind of tutoring possibly cultivate a heroine like Wan'er? It should be more reasonable to think of unruly women.

When I first read it, I felt that the writing was good. Don't be impatient. Most of the books about life are warm and refreshing, so the author needs to work hard and give you two recommendation votes to encourage you. Come on ＾0＾~

I don't know why, but now when I see a novel with the word Xiaoyao in its name or title, I feel sick and want to vomit🤮🤮🤮🤮.

The writing is very good, and it is told in a leisurely and leisurely manner. It has the qualifications of a great master, and I look forward to updating it.

I read part of it and found that generally in ancient times, older people would greet younger people as "little friend", or "brother Li" or "brother Su", and peers would greet them as "brother". But the author brother, the old man in the article, Qu Lao, greets him as "brother Su". Will this generational hierarchy be confused? It sounds weird. But the writing is still very good

I'm from Lily. I thought it was a female video based on the cover.

I've read a few chapters and I feel pretty good, so please give it a thumbs up, author!

Will there be a female protagonist later? Yes, I just want to see the harem 🤤

Cool article? Harem? Lsp? Three Questions for Black People😓😓😓

I'm going to test the poison! I'm afraid that I'll go in with hope and come out foaming at the mouth! Come on, author! 😰😰😰

The book is very nice. Come on, author.

The protagonist's traditional Chinese medicine skills are too limited, and there is no cure for a single lung disease. If you ask a traditional Chinese medicine doctor, you won't write nonsense, right?

A very good novel, but it's gone😢

After the early period, it felt a bit more relaxed and joyful. Although it is still far from the masterpieces, and the pretentiousness is not as natural and smooth as the masterpieces, but if you just read it, it is a good book for relaxation and entertainment.

This book is not suitable for following. The author is too inexperienced, the updates are too slow, and the whole book has no highlights.

There is no update in the past two days, no explanation, very irresponsible!

Can't write anymore? Extremely difficult labor?

No wonder the grades are so bad, the writing is as boring as a running account.