The Knight in Battle

The author advises you to be kind Don't use the first person

It's too toxic, I suggest you don't watch it 😅

Come on, just support the heroine Yun Yun.

I can't stand it any longer. I'm totally confused. There's something wrong with your way of writing. You don't just write whatever you want. After all, everyone is different. If you write in your own way, others won't be able to understand it. But the book is really good. I suggest you change it.

Can there be fewer typos? What about punctuation? Is the heroine Yun Yun? Can I have Xiao Yu? I like these two in Doupo

When you can use punctuation marks effectively, I think someone will read your book.

If it weren't for the knight story, I wouldn't be able to read a single chapter.

Author, there is obviously something wrong with your article. It's night and moon, and the protagonist's name has become the song of another novel.

I can't stand it anymore, the first person is used indiscriminately

Author Yesterday, your recommendation vote ranked three places behind me hahaha