The Proud Husband

Your writing style is so refreshing, neither cloying nor vulgar, and the characters are great too. Keep it up!

I fell in love with this story at first sight, author! Don't ask why, it's just my personal taste~ The author is also a mother of several daughters. Her writing is solid, with minimal embellishment and concise sentences (male authors could learn a thing or two from her!).

That's terrible. They keep using "Jin'er Jin'er" instead of "Jin'er Jin'er"... Just using "you" or "me" would have been fine. It just makes your name sound nicer.

Considering everyone's reaction, I changed Liu Anlu and Jiang Qi's scenes. 🤣🤣🤣 I didn't expect you guys to be so resistant. Okay then, I'll arrange a sweet female couple for them.

I haven't stayed up late for so many days! Juanjuan, are you addictive? You've kept me up all night (I'm hopelessly addicted to novels). *Sobs*

I can't quite put my finger on this, but it feels like the author lacks common sense, portraying the thoughts and behaviors of ancient rural people as being identical to those of modern city dwellers. Another point is that, to emphasize the protagonist's poverty, the author describes the roof as having holes that let in all the light.

Dear author, your new book is great! I've joined the new book investment group, please update!

The author's handling of the scene where the younger uncle redeems the female protagonist, allowing her to live openly, is flawed. The female protagonist's willingness to forgo the contract of indenture and return with the male protagonist to avoid upsetting him and his mother feels forced. Her original intention was to divorce and remain single, establishing her own household.

We'll reach 10,000 votes in the next couple of days! Here I come, Juanjuan!

Roll, roll, roll, look at me! ψ(`∇´)ψ