Three Ways

I came here to watch Western fantasy. I'm tired of watching it.

It feels like a mess, with wrong names, an awkward plot, and too many holes in the description. The most remarkable thing is that as a novice, I actually use the first person. I suggest you read what other people have written about whatever type of novel you want to write. Just write the method instead of copying it, so as not to end up like this. You clearly want to write your own things, but you add other people's things to the characters' language and actions. The plot description has the following problems: Even if it is a novel, one must consider the IQ and not forcibly reduce the intelligence of other characters except the protagonist. There was such a supernatural incident in a high school, but the school only said that the school would be closed after 11 o'clock. It did not consider the physiological problems of people after 11 o'clock and the safety of school administrators. After several incidents, it was still indifferent. Although the novel is a novel, there is always a big environment. Let's say that if this situation really happens in reality, they will definitely consider moving the school and the government will come forward to deal with it. How can such a thing happen? Just say that the school will be closed at 11 o'clock. Well, even if you consider the impact, if you want to close the school, it should be more thorough. You also let students live in the school. Forget the accommodation. There is not strict management of entering and exiting the dormitory. Apart from the students, how should the management staff such as dormitory management, security, etc. Be dealt with? It is impossible for students to live in the school and be called in the school. Others are not counted. In terms of wrong names: Is it called Guan Zhu or Guan Zijin? There are others. I won't list them. To summarize: the subject matter is good, but there are too many problems in all aspects of writing. It's a pity.

Here is an idea. After each chapter is written, the author can ask relatives and friends to review and pick out the mistakes. This way, he can find out the problems that he easily overlooks, which is more conducive to improving his writing skills.