Golden Elixir Magician

This book has a clear idea, but unfortunately the world view is not rigorous and it overly promotes feelings, and the protagonist's character becomes nondescript.

Come on, author, if you keep at it, this book will definitely become a hit!

Big cheers for the author! ! ! Persistence is victory! !

Let me give you a suggestion. There are too many messy descriptions and it feels very awkward.

Alas~ It ends like this, which makes me feel so uncomfortable. The author should keep working hard!

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At dawn, the sky was just bright, but Feather was already walking on the street that had not yet woken up. Today is an important day, I am going to meet a book friend. Although it is still early and people are probably not up yet, Feather has already arrived at the door of the book friend. Standing outside the courtyard, waiting quietly... After waiting for a long time, the courtyard door finally opened. Hey! This book friend! Remember me? Let me stop by and check in! I have been collecting your books for a long time. You don't even know it, but today I made a special trip to see you. Oh, by the way! This is my book "Wind, Rain, Fantasy and Thunder God". Do you want to read it too? Come and sit at my place if you have nothing to do, have some wine and some tea, we can talk about life and ideals. Okay, I won't disturb you anymore, you can continue creating! It's time for me to go back. Don't give it away! Why are you so polite? Stay! After seeing you for thousands of miles, we must finally say goodbye. The green mountains and green waters will bring us a bright future!

After reading Chapter 11, I feel that it is quite confusing, which seriously affects the reading experience~~~~

So why does the protagonist want to go back? Family? Spouse?

Will you commit suicide or continue writing? It depends on what you think. If you want to cut it, then cut it (at least release the outline), because if you don't want to write it, it will be a waste of time to persist, and the rest will definitely be perfunctory and watery. If you want to save it, just persist! Or go to other websites to develop. The starting point is too deep. If you don't know, just flip a coin. There is a saying that when the coin falls, you will have the answer in your heart.

It's not a big deal for you to write 2000-3000 words a day. It's been half a month and you still haven't reached 100,000 words.

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Personally, I really dislike Xiao Qi's personality and don't want to read it!