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The author should write well. Although there are many bad book reviews, if you click on it, you will find that they have almost never heard of the novels they read. Such people have no aesthetic taste. This novel completely revolves around the law of "true fragrance". There's a little bit of a routine, but it's acceptable. The writing is not stiff, there are no major flaws, there are some minor flaws, and there are a few common sense flaws. Everyone can take a look
The story was a bit out of tune, so Momo quit.
The author is Nun Ji, Si Tiao, Hao Han! 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏
Don't you think it's embarrassing to make jokes for the sake of making jokes, such as playing basketball, touching the Gita halfway through the game, or singing about chasing dreams and eating innocent hearts? It was very stiff, and my mother told me what to do later? I thought there would be a reversal. For example, the previous words were all made up and a little bit funny, but what he wrote was an atmosphere of grievance at the scene. What I was thinking about at the time made me laugh so hard and then it came out. What you wrote is not at all, it's just embarrassing. The first few pictures are quite nice and funny, but the latter ones are forced jokes. Anyway, I'm looking forward to the next one (눈_눈)
Let me talk about my feelings, emmm, in my eyes, it is still a good novel. In my opinion, not all novels need to be logically rigorous and without loopholes. For example, this novel is just a slap in the face, but there are some problems, such as the emotional line. Emmmm, the emotional line is very confusing. The main reason is that the emotional line directly starts from recognition and approval to liking? The emotional line is not delicate enough, and it can be seen that the author is imitating Lu Yuan next door, and trying his best to incorporate some of his own things into it. However, after comparison, it is found that the change is a bit blunt. For example, Murong, who is the assistant director with Fatty Wei next door, according to the background set by the author, Murong is at least a young master. How can he still have no sense of existence even after it was broadcast in those years? , How should I put it, I feel that the author has spent all his words on the protagonist, and the supporting characters who develop with the protagonist are not very well portrayed. I even feel that many settings are too imitating the next door (maybe I feel wrong), well, it's almost there. Finally, in the article about Let me talk about my own views on entertainment. First, in entertainment, try to choose those that suit the occasion in singing, film, poetry, and dance (of course, many people know this). Second, the emotions must be delicate. Since ancient times, talented people have been romantic. Of course, this does not mean that they want a harem. For entertainment, Personally, I feel that the emotional lines of the characters around the protagonist should be clear, delicate and not too abrupt. The third thing I personally think is the most important point is that some entertainment authors write protagonists who have traveled from our past. However, no matter whether the protagonist has learned these songs or watched these movies, there is still a system. Are you really worthy of these masters by writing like this? Sorry to be a little excited. Of course, I am not talking about the author, nor Lu Yuan next door (in fact, I see Lu Yuan smiling like a kid weighing 800 pounds, which is very good). I am just disgusted by some entertainment articles in the past. The above is my personal opinion. If you don't agree with it, I can't help it. After all, I am just a talkative king. Everyone has their own opinions. I hope the author can write better and write the characters he wants. I am exhausted and writing a long review for the first time.
After reading more than ten chapters, I felt so embarrassed. The manager looked like a little fangirl.
It was okay after reading the first few chapters, and it made me laugh. Every time I wrote it, it was the same routine, and it was forced to be funny. There was also no point in criticizing people on the show, which made people feel very poisonous, etc. And I didn't say anything and was forced to quit. Come on, author
Consideration of male protagonist character
I think the author should make the male protagonist less stingy, be more generous when he should be generous, and care more about the people around him. So many people have contributed so much to him. In the end, is the male protagonist just raising pigs to make a fortune in the first few dozen chapters? It's not a bad idea to have less funny elements, but it's not a bad idea to write it more humanely.
There are some routine plots, a bit too tough, forced joy, etc., A bit abrupt, I have only read about twenty chapters, but if you are trolling, please pay attention to the scale. The Qidian type has been blocked too much, so you have not put it on the shelves now, otherwise it may block several pictures.
Already invested, come on! I wish you will sign the contract soon By the way, can we discuss it? You have to finish the book on time. This way I can still gain something.
You have to give it. From the current point of view, two updates a day is fine. Don't give me a whole update.
It's really poisonous. It's been so long in my previous life, and now I'm thinking about raising pigs in the new world. I want to sign a contract for 5,000 a month for the rest of my life, right? I want to ask him if he was a waste in his previous life? No one with brains would be like this. When writing a book, you just follow the routine without using your brain, right? 😰😰
It's so embarrassing to watch, I can't even enjoy myself, 😅😅
It feels too pretentious, too routine, and has no sense of substitution.
It's a bit poisonous! ! I'll withdraw first. If I stay any longer I feel like my mentality is going to collapse.
Ever since Shuiyu became so popular, a lot of these themes have popped up. To be honest, no matter how parallel the world is, the level of culture is almost the same. Every song becomes popular for a reason. I have always felt that songs that make people cry are all remembered under special circumstances. These things can make one's heart sad, but the writing here is too retarded, making people cry at every turn, and the key songs were not chosen well. Look at Lu Gouzi next door, who is pretending to be cool or copying songs according to the situation. The king of love songs here is a skewer, and a lot of people shed tears inexplicably. It's too retarded. The Girl We Chased Together in Those Years and Awkward Life really caused a sensation. Good movies were rare in those days, but you said that the selection of "Charlotte" was really not good. In reality, many people said it was a bad movie after watching it, and a lot of people were bored after watching it 😰 Choose songs and movies carefully, avoid embarrassing scenes, and copy songs more reasonably. It is really embarrassing to shed tears at every turn, haha
I have never seen such a buttoned-up person!
No updates for 19 days, investors went bankrupt
I counted with my fingers and found that you were lying in Hua Mulan's arms playing with your phone and using Daji's battery to charge it, Xiao Qiao was undressing in front of you, Da Qiao was jealous, Diao Chan was dancing, Yang Yuhuan and Cai Wenji were playing music, Gongsun Li was holding an umbrella for you. (Outskirts) Angela was telling you stories, Jia Luo was holding an arrow with a shy face, Nuwa was making a perfect girlfriend for you. Yu Ji and Mi Yue showed off their long legs in front of you, Wang Zhaojun made ice cream for you to eat, Zhen Ji summoned pure water for you to drink, you touched the tail of the night cat girl Ah Ke and sat on Cai Wenji's chair, and the magic cook Angela made you a sumptuous lunch, but after a while you took your phone and read the comments seriously, and when you saw my comment, you even liked it. Rrr Sun Wukong waited for Tang Monk for 500 years, Feng Qingxue waited for Tu Su for 900 years, Yuwen Tuo waited for Ning Ke for 500 years, Nightshade and Nightshade waited for Long Yang for 1,000 years, Yi Xiaochuan waited for Yu Shu for 2,000 years, Xiyao waited for Feipeng for thousands of years, Zixuan waited for Changqing for three lives and three lives, and I have been waiting for your update. If you don't update then I wish you a moldy cake on your birthday. Want to take a bath, but there is no water. Getting ready to go out, I encountered a ghost. If you take a sip of water, you will gain weight. Five words floating in the sky are loading. Six words floated in the sky, and the picture failed to load. Seven words floated on the ground, refresh again and exit. The ticket rang in my hand and my phone fell to the floor. ✋✋One day, God said to me: "Child, I can fulfill one of your wishes. What do you want? I said: Can it destroy the earth? God said: "Child, think about other things first! I said: Can this novel be updated faster? God said: Children, let's consider destroying the earth! Author, I see you are handsome, graceful, like a jade tree facing the wind, young and rich, brave and mighty, invincible in the world, the best in the universe, a lonely master, invulnerable, the only one who respects you, the jade-faced gentleman, the benevolent are invincible, the brave have no fear, the king is indestructible, wise and powerful, and bravely crowned the king. , Fight in vain, hero among chivalrous people, dragon and phoenix among men, affectionate and righteous, courageous and colorful, unparalleled in the world, both cool and handsome, role model for people, honest and trustworthy, generous conversation, personable, powerful, noble temperament, single aristocrat, good looks and Pan'an, unique skills, quick thinking, and a good review Don't forget, ten years of frost, I am erudite and knowledgeable, I am highly talented, I am rich in knowledge, I am both civil and military, I am loved by everyone, I am an extraordinary talker, I laugh and talk happily, I talk eloquently, I am full of joy, I am strategizing, I am concise and concise, I am flawless, I am to the point, my vision is far-sighted, my words are righteous, Complete it in one go, show off your magical power, speak well, stand out, be superb, be famous forever, be extraordinary and holy, be serious, kill two birds with one stone, have long speeches, have immeasurable merits, defy all opinions, turn the tide, be powerful, majestic, swallow mountains and rivers, perseverance, physical strength Go, unprecedented, look upon death as if you are home, be heroic, abide by the law, fight hard, be loyal, sacrifice yourself for others, be selfless, spotless, unparalleled, dominate the wind and clouds, overturn mountains and seas, create waves, thunder, shake the soul, sweep across thousands of armies, shake the world, Every inch is inserted into every hole, it is the same, it is the same, it is verbal and written, it is written fluently, it is perfect, it is impeccable, it is unparalleled, it is full of energy, it forgets to eat and sleep, it works day and night, it does whatever it wants, it operates freely, it tells the truth, it lives and works in peace and contentment, it provides help in times of need, it is deeply affectionate and unstoppable. Block, hard work, invincible, invincible, has its own magical effects, magical calculations, clear and clear, heaven-made, quick hands and eyes, full of energy, big arms and thick waist, holding back the voice, unrestrained and rude, wonderful, perfect, intriguing, polite, handsome, but Why not update? One day, Aladdin's magic lamp came to my bedside and a fairy ran out of it and said, "I can grant you a wish." The fairy in Aladdin said that we can think about it and let you control the entire universe. The author is great. You see that you are invulnerable, admirable, honest and friendly, fair, just, open, moral, caring, and kind. Help the elderly cross the road, help the blind, help the deaf-mute, and help the disabled. Why can't you update the novel? Look, you are tall, handsome and fair. Why don't you update the novel? Can you update the novel? Please, the author is great
Four recommendation votes are sent, please update quickly. . .
It seems that he has entered the palace. This kind of subject will be cut off if you are not careful.
👍 Come on, author, this work will be a hit. I have followed and collected your works. I hope to leave a guest message for my new book "Between Milliseconds" when I have time.
Chapter 1 successfully persuaded people to quit. It was not the plot but the author's writing style. The wording was too inaccurate.
So the contestants in the front took less than five minutes, and the contestants in the last group sang the love song king for several dozen minutes?