Wu Ni Spiritual Practice

Believe in the hero, come on, believe in your ability, and you will protect everything.

The various descriptions and plot settings are just right and worthy of praise.

Although the beginning of this book is a bit far-fetched, you won't notice it unless you read it carefully. Moreover, it is well written and can easily leave a good impression on readers and attract them. In addition, this book has nothing new. It still follows the same old routine, changing the soup without changing the medicine. Moreover, the author did not handle some details very well, and there are still some bad sentences. These are not big problems, but I still hope the author pays attention to them. Although the routine is relatively old and has many problems, if you can keep writing it, there should still be some readers who are willing to read it. (It might be better if you can write something new based on this)

Hmm... After reading the beginning, objectively speaking, there is not much that attracts me... Maybe the plot is relatively routine and a bit cumbersome, and the character description is not outstanding enough. There is still a lot of room for improvement. If the protagonist is a male protagonist, is this an upgraded novel... A little hope: the plot should have ups and downs to leave suspense but also hide some unexpected things.

This is another masterpiece in the online literary world after "Fights Break the Sphere". It was so amazing that Xiongzi suddenly felt that the sky became brighter.

After raising it for a long time, I'm ready to get into the trap.

The book is not bad. I have collected it. My name is Qinghe Yiba.

Thank you for your hard work. The story is so beautifully written and the updates are so punctual every day. It's really touching.

There is also a small suggestion. The author can be innovative and not follow the previous routines. He can make the plot unique. This will make the article unique and easy to remember.

I have basically finished reading it, and I would like to share my feelings: overall, it is relatively smooth to read, but there is some misuse of punctuation, which will affect the reader's emotions; some paragraphs are too long, which affects the perception. It can be seen that the author has read a lot of fairy tale books, and he should have prepared an outline, but he has definitely not made a detailed outline. He throws out a lot of settings at once, which is unacceptable to ordinary people. Some of the foreshadowing is too advanced. For example, the story about his master can be told before going down the mountain. In the early stage, a drop of blood can only be used as a prop for contact and life-saving. No matter how talented he is, he is still a disciple who has just entered the door. Also, I am a little confused about the relationship between Bigu Pill and Linggu. Is it refined from Linggu? This is purely a personal opinion. Xianxia is a figment of fantasy and does not have too many shackles. However, the narrative method needs to be improved, otherwise it will make people feel that it is not refreshing enough and the narrative is delayed. The author will continue to work hard...

What an incredible imagination! Must give a thumbs up!

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It looks good, but there are still some small problems that need to be mentioned: there are some typos and the punctuation is not very good. It is best to go back and proofread it again.

It's not easy to write a novel that doesn't fall into clichés. When you encounter something like this, you must save it decisively and read it slowly!

It's a really good book. When I saw the title, I immediately rolled in. I was really satisfied with the result.

Great, you are so diligent. You update twice a day, and I can't keep up. Please keep watching. Summer vacation rush!

Miao Laiye~ I added it and read it slowly. I feel comfortable reading the text at first glance. Please keep going.

This book is good, keep up the good work and look forward to you 😚😚😚

The large description of the environment can really enhance the atmosphere and set off the progress of the plot, which is good!

Do you need to collect minor character names? Please make soy sauce. 😁😁

Throw flowers, throw flowers, I'm here to support you 🤭🤭🌹🌹🌹

There are too many books in Qidian, and there are too few to read. It's not easy for people who are short of books to find this book. I like you, but the updates are really slow.

The plot is rich and coherent, and readers can completely follow the author's thinking, which is very good.

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Collected it, it looks good but it's too short. I haven't read enough. When are you going to post a new article?

Hehe, I actually guessed this ending.

Amuse yourself?👍

I'm from the group. After reading five chapters, everyone can say good things, so I'd better give some suggestions, which are all posted in this chapter Since this work has achievements, it must have its shining points, I wish you the best (ง •̀_•́)ง Become a god as soon as possible, haha

Some of the plots are slow, but they are still very good. They are definitely better than me anyway. The author's writing style is good and the writing is quite immersive. At first I thought it was a story about mortals cultivating immortality, but later I found it was different.

Why haven't you signed the contract yet? Shouldn't you?