Spirit Cultivator Defying the Heavens

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Collected it, it looks good but it's too short. I haven't read enough. When are you going to post a new article?

Hehe, I actually guessed this ending.

Some of the plots are slow, but they are still very good. They are definitely better than me anyway. The author's writing style is good and the writing is quite immersive. At first I thought it was a story about mortals cultivating immortality, but later I found it was different.

I'm from the group. After reading five chapters, everyone can say good things, so I'd better give some suggestions, which are all posted in this chapter Since this work has achievements, it must have its shining points, I wish you the best (ง •̀_•́)ง Become a god as soon as possible, haha

Amuse yourself?👍

It's really good. I have collected it and brought "Full-time Mage Crossing the Top" to support me. I hope to visit again.

[Build a building, build a building, build a building] Declaration, we are not here to reward We are just here to join in the fun Uh... Will you get beaten😥 [[How many thousand words did the author sign??? ]

Why haven't you signed the contract yet? Shouldn't you?

After reading Chapter 10, I found that there is a big problem! The characters come out for a quick glance, only to serve the plot and have no special characteristics! There is no focus on the protagonist. I wonder if you have a feeling that you don't know who the protagonist is as you read. Generally speaking, writing books revolves around the protagonist. Especially when it comes to the sect rules, the sect rules are greatly rewritten, and the dialogues are throughout! There is no writing about the psychological activities of the protagonist. For example, if he hears some harsh sect rules, he will say: This is too strict, and the protagonist is completely excluded! There is also the story about attracting spirits into the body. After describing the effect of swallowing the elixir, the protagonist is left out of the incident. The entire article focuses on writing about other people and highlighting the protagonist! After all, this book is about Zhang Fan! And not someone else! It is better to write around the protagonist, create conflicts and create excitement! Anyway, I still haven't seen anything attractive yet. In other words, it cannot attract editors! The above are my thoughts after carefully reading the ten chapters! If I offended you in any way, say sorry! Finally, I hope you will continue to work hard! Make persistent efforts!