My Shipgirls Come from the Deep Sea

It's a bit long-winded, the plot is pretty naive, the writing is immature, and there are some issues with the paragraphing, but it's actually pretty good for a newcomer.

The main character is written too childishly. I think the main character should be more mature between the two camps. Personally, I feel quite disappointed.

If I could really choose between a ship girl or a deep sea, I would definitely choose a deep sea. It's not that the ship girl isn't cute, it's that the admiral is disgusting, and privileges are everywhere. . .

For those who want to see Deep Sea Ship Girl, I recommend Deep Sea Admiral, Joy is Non-toxic, Pig's Feet is the Deep Sea.

After reading more than a dozen chapters, the plot of the conflict in the college is really ridiculous. Let's put it this way, others are knocking on the door of your home and may take you away at any time. Are you still fighting with yourself at home? Moreover, they are from a military family, completely uneducated and have a good background as a nouveau riche. As long as there are parents in the family who have served in the military, even if the children are not well educated, it is impossible to be in such a bad situation. Anyone with a little bit of logic would find it awkward. The writing is okay and I can read it; the plot is too bloody and too poisonous; I guess the main plot is to retrieve my ship girl from the deep sea, I can look forward to the plot

Come on, author, there are not many authors who write about ship girls, and every one of them deserves support. If you are not good at writing, you can take your time and accumulate writing experience! More than 600,000 copies of this book have been written, and there are both good and bad reviews. I hope the author can continue to finish the book. With the experience of this book, it could be even better. Come on, author!

I just want to say that this book is super ink-filled and bloody. I have relapsed, so those who come after me should respect themselves.

I've read two chapters and there's something wrong with the author's writing.

Some of the ship girl novels are pretty good, and there are a lot of eunuchs It's rare to find a novel without eunuchs and it's okay It's time to laugh

I found another boat spirit novel, I hope it's not bad...