I Want to Be Qin II

Let's put it this way, as a bookworm of more than 10 years, I really think this book depicts a very good novel. Thousands of people will have thousands of different feelings when reading the novel. The author has been updating it intermittently. Some people are still saying this and that. If you don't want to read it, just go away. Anyway, author, come on, don't stop updating, come on!

I was defeated when I saw the strange poison in Loulan in the first chapter... In this era, maybe my history is not good, but in my impression, the Western Region was still dominated by the Yuezhi at this time... The Yueshi, the Xiongnu, Donghu and other settlements are fighting for hegemony in the grassland. The so-called Loulan, ah, maybe there is one.

After reading more than 100 chapters, I would like to share my thoughts on the author's specific setting of the protagonist. I can't stand it. The protagonist is eight years old and does a lot of big things without attracting any attention from others. What the protagonist does is completely beyond what a normal eight-year-old can do. The article does not mention what the protagonist learns on a daily basis. This reduces other people's suspicions and makes them think that the protagonist is smarter and precocious. There is a more reasonable explanation. But no one thought it was unreasonable. Were the ancients all fools? The King of Qin is really awesome for letting his 8-year-old son do so many things that an adult should handle. The age setting is a flaw, and you have no sense of involvement at all.

Update, if it's not enough, I'll give you all the votes

Have you entered the palace? It's quite well written! I hope you can continue writing

Faster, faster, more

Brother, what's wrong with you recently? You haven't updated. What are you thinking about?

Can you change the title? The title "Winner" feels very awkward.

The author is not very good and will not change even if he catches bugs.

Now it is a good book for this, but the alternative history is to deduce another trend in the future based on the situation at that time. Qin, in particular, was the most difficult to write about. From the perspective of evolution, China has gone in circles from the establishment of the Han Dynasty to the fall of the Qing Dynasty. The Qin Dynasty, which carried the essence of the Spring and Autumn Period and the Warring States Period, perished too quickly and its population was severely reduced. It's okay to update two chapters a month.

The protagonist has done so much and is recognized by the military, internal and external forces as the successor of King Qin. Ying Zheng also provided support to the successor in many aspects. Not to mention the mediocre talents of the other young masters, there was nothing wrong with assassinating the protagonist, colluding with external forces, persecuting important officials of the Qin Dynasty, etc. It's okay, that's fine, he's his son after all. But there is still the possibility of being crown prince. Fusu has made so many mistakes in the past. The author writes that Ying Zheng still regards Fusu as the first heir, hoping that Fusu can come to power. This slap in the face of Ying Zheng is inconsistent and inconsistent. When Fusu comes to power, the protagonist has only two endings: death or rebellion. Is Ying Zheng stupid? The protagonist and Ying Zheng always discuss national policies and future trends. Is this a martial artist? It is obvious that only a minister who is able to govern the world, has the ability to be civilized, capable of military affairs, and has a view of the overall situation, and has the support of ministers and the army, so what does Fusu have to fight for? Isn't it too stupid for the author to write Ying Zheng just for the sake of watery characters? Is this the Chinese ancestral dragon who knows people well and makes good use of them?

I have wanted to complain for a long time. This is not Qing Chuan. Why not just call Zhao Gao, Xiao Gaozi...? ? ? I'm going to...

Zhao Gao is not a eunuch, but a eunuch! This is not a Qing palace drama. Xiao Gaozi is really disgusting, like seeing a fly while eating! I hope Dingding will let the author see and change it!

Come on, author, well written!

First I read Chapter 6. The author kept talking about the Montessori brothers, and I turned back to the front to look at the date to confirm the timeline. Author, have you ever taken a history class? Not to mention Wang Jian at that time, even his son Wang Ben was higher than Meng Tian in terms of position. When Wang Jian and Wang Ben, as the commanders, destroyed the Three Kingdoms. Meng Tian can only serve as Li Xin's deputy. If you apply their achievements fifteen years later to them now, they are pretty awesome.

Did the protagonist travel to the past to become a dog licker? Ying Zheng will always be the number one in the ages. Ying Zheng will win the world. Ying Zheng will be invincible. Ying Zheng's farts are a big deal in the protagonist's mind. Did you transform the Qin State in the past, or did you deify Ying Zheng and become a fanatical believer? Obviously the protagonist of the novel is Gongzi Gao, but it forcefully makes you feel that Ying Zheng is the protagonist. And does the protagonist really understand the Qin Dynasty? Before Ying Zheng came to power, he was just a puppet, and his presence was not high in the hearts of ordinary people or princes and ministers. How could the protagonist write like this? As soon as Ying Zheng came to power, the people of Qin State worshiped him, and his prestige was unmatched. And during the Warring States Period, the concept of aristocratic families had not yet been fully formed. At that time, aristocratic families generally referred to various royal families. Those so-called families such as the Meng family and the Wang family relied on the support of the king to obtain various rights and status. In other words, these families were not strong enough to violate the king's ability. It is said that the family is more like a court faction with blood as the link. It belongs to the water without roots. To prosper, it depends entirely on the talents of the family's descendants and the king. In the author's writing, the Qin Dynasty's family became the same as the aristocratic family in the late Han, Wei and Jin Dynasties, and it was okay to confront the imperial court head-on. The author doesn't understand the Qin Dynasty at all, so what are you writing about? And although I haven't read it all, but in the comment area, it seems that not even a single Korean has been destroyed so far, right? If we farm to this extent, what kind of water will we get?

What I wrote earlier is very interesting. After all, there are few people writing about it in Da Qin, and the time travel is very good. The ideal design to make the Qin Dynasty last forever is not bad either. It's great to watch. Okay, after talking about the advantages, it's time to make fun of it. First of all, the protagonist's ability to lead troops into battle comes from that. Just one year of studying with Mr. Wang and you are so good? Modern people know how to fight. Don't think too simply of the ancients. It would be too exaggerated to overthrow Li Mu. The second point is that the Qin Dynasty wants to unify. The protagonist builds a college and it is okay. What the hell is it to go to the west to fight, what the hell is it to go to the Hundred Thousand Mountains to engage the Mohists, and what the hell is it to attack hundreds of Zhu Zhizhi. Brother, you have to know that it costs money and food for 200,000 troops to enter the mountains. How much food did an expedition cost in ancient times? Lao Qin saved the accumulation of six generations of kings before going to destroy the six countries. Do you really think that there will be no losses if no one is killed? Do you think you don't dislike your opponent enough to fight against the various schools of thought without destroying the six kingdoms? Do you insist on making it more difficult to unify with Qin? Have you studied what the hundreds of schools of thought during the Warring States Period represented? The ministers of the Seven Kingdoms are all from Baijia, and the managers of Great Qin are also from Baijia. To put it simply, if anyone from Baijia goes anywhere, the Seven Kingdoms will be paralyzed immediately. At that time, all intellectuals belonged to one of the hundreds of families. In addition, you are asking whether you should read books before writing history. The most glorious period of Taoism was the Warring States Period. Confucianism can make the rule of ancient China last for thousands of years. Even if the dynasty changes, they will still only respect Confucianism and Taoism. Since you think that stuff is useless. All I can say is that you don't understand Chinese culture very well. The summary is that this book was creative, but it ran out of energy in the later stages. It kept looking for reasons to write killing and killing wars, which led to the same plots and the unreasonable collapse of the story line in the later stages. I suggest that it is enough for the protagonist to fight Ji Lu for the first time. Later, the protagonist's great love for the Qin people should be added. You can write some scenes in which the protagonist recruits talents and talk about why he wants to unify and why he wants to destroy the ideals of the six countries to move the talents and the audience. The protagonist must be hot and warm to appear full of emotions, otherwise the audience will just see a madman who can kill people. We also need to add some accessories with a more distinctive personality. Isn't Ge Lie from Guigu in Qinna in the anime? Wei Zhuang can also be brought in to get information! Now everyone sees only the protagonist, King Qin, who has feelings, and the others are all subordinates like tool men. The more you read it, the more you will feel that the main character in a book is just a living person. A book needs to have many supporting characters with distinctive personalities to make readers feel that you are writing about a vivid world. That's it!

The author shouldn't drink tea all the time, it's embarrassing. Tea in the Warring States Period was basically vegetable porridge, served as a side dish. According to "Guang Ya" written by Zhang Yi of the Wei Dynasty of the Three Kingdoms: "The leaves are collected in Jingba to make cakes. When the leaves are old, the cakes are made with rice paste. If you want to make tea and drink it, roast it until it turns red, mash it into a porcelain pot, and pour it with soup." I feel full. Moreover, there are no teapots in bronze ware, not to mention that several daily utensils were standardized under the Zhou rites. 🙂

The age is outrageous. . . No matter how precocious you are, you are only 8 years old and you are still recruiting talents? Just talk to people like adults... But in your description, you laugh and laugh hahahaha? Please tell me how an 8-year-old child can laugh so powerfully? I think the author has forgotten his age... It's okay if you don't laugh, but you, an 8-year-old kid, can lose everything with your smile. Look at the laughter of your own children. No matter how good or reasonable you say, no matter how serious you smile, no one will take it seriously... Then I saw the country where I was sent as an envoy and stopped reading... But I guess this book is a mess... Or it is a mess... After all, the First Emperor is still young! The First Emperor can't just sweep everything away, right? So why do we need a protagonist? And even if the First Emperor lives for 30 years, wouldn't the protagonist be 40 years old? Even if it's 20 years, it's 30? Has anyone been a prince for 30 years? Looking at the main character so far, you can tell that he is involved in everything and wants everything! So... I guess in the end the six countries conspired to collude with Fusu to kill the First Emperor... And then the pig's feet came to power and unified them, sweeping away the demons and monsters. But this will reduce your character and make it difficult to write! But the protagonist's biggest enemies are Fusu and Shihuang. You can't collude with Hu Hai, right? That would be boring... Why don't the protagonist stay as the crown prince for 30 years to succeed to the throne? But even if it ends poorly, it still loses character... After all, the protagonist cannot get up if the First Emperor is not dead. Moreover, the protagonist's various ways of winning over people's hearts will turn against him to a certain extent. It depends on how you choose...

Why can I accept a 6-year-old ninja going to the battlefield, but I can't look directly at an 8-year-old boy giving advice. The writing is great, and it makes me laugh when I talk about my age. Just when I looked in, I came out. . . Uncomfortable.

This thing, I thought it was a historical novel at first, but I didn't expect it to be a fantasy novel. The more I wrote, the more mysterious it became. I didn't do any homework on the laws and etiquette of Qin Dynasty.

Everything is fine, but mathematics, chemistry, and physics are a bit nonsense. Talking about industry two thousand years ago was too big a step forward.

The ancient emperors I admire more are Qin Shihuang, Zhu Yuanzhang, and Liu Bang. What about you?

This book is extremely poisonous, and the plot relies entirely on obscenity, which is extremely unrealistic, and the wording is particularly awkward. Be the brightest boy? It made me laugh so hard. How old are you? Are you in the second grade of primary school? If it were true, he would have been treated as a lunatic.

When I first started watching it, I thought there would be amazing effects in many places, but the result was anticlimactic, especially the constant bang bang bang, which lasted for a long time.

Good guy, you knocked me down in just three or five chapters. He even wrote about secret techniques and physical training in a historical text. I really can't stand it anymore.

Updates are a bit slow and a bit annoying in the early stage, but it's okay later on.

I've been very busy lately, so the update is a bit of a stretch, I'm sorry.

Come on, the author, I've been chasing you! Yours is the only genuine copy that I read at Qidian.

It's okay to look at it without thinking. It's ridiculous to do something for 5 years at the age of 8. A liquor store was built in the Six Kingdoms and it's making money faster than it is now. A thousand years ago, transportation was enough for you. You just treat the author as a fool. There is no bottom line at the starting point.