Butterfly Fever

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Brother, you are awesome, you brought out the suspenseful rhythm in the supernatural, haha.

Every cause must have its effect, and your retribution is me.

Butterfly Fever turns out to have this connotation. I understand it clearly. The book is good and I have collected it.

It's a pity that this new book is new. It seems to be a TJ after three months of interruption. It's obviously pretty good at the beginning!

If there are fans of this book, I will broadcast it live.

Personal suggestions: 1. The plot arrangement is not exciting enough. The person the protagonist thinks is the problem at first turns out to be the murderer in the end. It feels like the purpose of the whole process is no longer to find the murderer, but to find evidence to prove that the person is the murderer. 2. The clues are relatively trivial. Although it is not pure reasoning, since the reasoning element is added, the clues must be arranged well. It doesn't have to be buried very deeply, or it can be a little trivial, but in the end the clues must be well connected. 3. The rigor of logic needs to be strengthened. Some things seem reasonable, but if you think about it a little, you can see that it is unreasonable. Although it's not a big deal, these details can make people uncomfortable. 4. Some characters are not distinct enough and somewhat contradictory. A rather contradictory character will make people's eyes shine. But it takes a lot of ink to shape him, and it shouldn't be too much. Otherwise, it will make people feel that the author cannot set it up. For a character who is not very important, it is best to highlight a certain aspect of his character that is more prominent. 5. Some protagonists are rationalized. If this problem occurs in a brainless and cool article, there is a chance that it will become a cool point. But taking the normal style is obviously not suitable. Readers generally lead the protagonist to think, and problems with the protagonist's way of thinking are more likely to be discovered. Unless the protagonist's outlook is different from ordinary people's. It is recommended that when writing these places, think about whether you would think this way if you were yourself. If someone around you thought so, what would you think? Finally—— Everyone has different ideas, just take a look at your suggestions. Don't deliberately seek other people's opinions, as this may not arouse resonance and thinking.

I originally thought it was supernatural, but now it looks like a detective mystery. Is it supernatural?

Where is the author? 😅

I saw the update of this book on the homepage, clicked in, read it carefully, and felt a lot. This is a book with quite specific subject matter. You can determine the subject matter of this book just by looking at the title, which is a clear and clear idea. However, the book's introduction is less appealing. If the title of the book is a person's face, then the introduction is a person's eyes. No matter how beautiful your face is, you still need a pair of attractive eyes, just like the so-called finishing touch. I feel that the author's introduction to this book is too simple and lacks a little interest. In online novels, this little interest may discount this good book and reduce the amount of reading by readers. As for how to write a more exciting introduction, it is recommended that the author discuss it with a familiar author. Of course, the best thing is to read a few red books yourself to see where the highlights of their introduction are. Or you can think about what you value most about the introduction besides the title of the book when you usually read a book, and then start from here. Although it cannot completely cater to the public, it can also bring readers who are in the same channel as your general interests. Therefore, this point still needs to be considered again. Let's talk about the author's writing style. The author's writing style is impeccable, and the dialogues between the characters in the book are timely. The environment description, character description, and psychological description are relatively good. The male protagonist was created by the author to have a calm mind and a personality that does not compete with others. However, he is very wise, full of conscience, and has good insight. However, the female protagonist appears to be a bit mentally retarded. Maybe I am too picky, or maybe the author did not highlight the wisdom of the female protagonist in order to highlight the wisdom of the male protagonist. However, she has obviously suspected Sun Shaohong from the old man's words, and she is not wary of her at all. In terms of IQ, she is much worse than the male protagonist, and not very good. I hope the author pays attention to the handling of these details. After all, some small details will completely mismatch the intelligence of the heroine you want to create with the male protagonist, and her position as the heroine will make readers dissatisfied. Overall, the theme of this book is clear and the content is compact. It is not as protracted as ordinary suspense articles. This is good. I hope that subsequent authors can still grasp this rhythm. The conflict and suspense in the book are also well set up, and they echo well from one outcome to another in the introduction. The personalities of the main characters are also well-shaped, with flesh and blood and distinct personalities. The main plot line is clear, and the hidden and bright lines complement each other. As a newbie who has no completed novel to his name, it is really good. After all, it's rare for a novice to write in such a clear and organized way. This shows that the author has put a lot of effort into organizing the outline and wants to present a good work to everyone. This book looks good so far. I hope the author can continue to write well and not stop updating. After all, no matter which website you want to get good results, it is important to keep updating and ensure quality! Finally, I recommend everyone to read this book!

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