The Cloud Immortal of Shu Mountain

Many people sympathize with Wutai, but in fact, few people in Wutai deserve sympathy. Many of Wutai's disciples practice evil practices, killing babies to make swords, killing pregnant women to make swords, using people to make magic weapons, and raping women...

There are actually only two outcomes for Mount Wutai, one is self-cleansing, and the other is being liquidated by Emei and others. There is no denying Patriarch Hunyuan's actions and abilities in the side sect, but the Wutai Sect is indeed harboring evil and evil. It is said that Emei is overbearing, but Emei is overbearing and kills people. Doesn't Wutai not kill indiscriminately and collect supplements? First of all, you must stand upright to be qualified to deal with Emei, otherwise you will simply take the path of evil heretics and be tough.

After watching it for a long time, the more I watched it, the more I felt that my three views were inconsistent. Especially when it comes to ruling all races, the hypocrisy of the protagonist is fully demonstrated. You say you want to make swords, but you don't want to kill people on a large scale. You want to make those beasts willing to help you. That doesn't matter. But you are not willing to kill other people, so why are you so decisive in killing your own people? Those alien races had to kill three times and capture them three times and publicly committed crimes before they were ruthless. How could you kill tens of thousands of human monks just to admit your mistake to your master? It's nothing more than that we need those beasts now, not the humans. Don't talk nonsense about it being wrong for human monks to kill beasts. When the protagonist first debuted, the sword in his hand belonged to both an ice dragon and a black dragon. Why didn't you feel something was wrong at that time? On the contrary, I feel that my baby is really great. Is the master really kind to me? After all, he is just a hypocrite.

I finally know why this book has such poor performance. Brother, if you read the book review, I'll break it to you. There are few people who like to read Shushan fanfics who are not straightforward people. The protagonist you wrote is grinding, indecisive, has many inner dramas, and has serious character flaws. He should wait for death without any help╮(╯_╰)╭

Isn't Shushan a fairy tale? Why is it listed in the history category 🤔

For the sake of "Shu Mountain", vote for it 😁

The author's writing style is ancient, and the writing method is all in the third person, which gives a very poor sense of substitution. What's even more outrageous is that there is no name before the seventh chapter, and the storyline does not advance at all. It is all about repeated growth experiences. Moreover, the logic is very confusing, let alone the poisonous points in the setting. For example, the age issue, a few years, a dozen years, and a few more years. In the end, the pig's feet are still a child. If the pig's feet are special growth, such as one year older in ten years, then write it in advance. Many things appear very bluntly, such as the spirit pupil pattern and the words that appear in two sentences. Although it is said that writing a book should be long if there is words and short if there are no words, but the important settings are just thrown out without explaining the function. Moreover, the basic settings of many Xianxia are distorted. Although the settings are the author's and each book is different, some universal values ​​​​are still the same, especially fan works, at least they follow the settings of the original works, like Banshengbao and Taiyi. Do you want to be funny? Shushan is basically set after the early Ming Dynasty. After all, Zhang Sanfeng of Wudang is clearly mentioned. So, Taiyi, is this kind of Taoist name randomly created? Looking at the book Shushan, no one dares to shout the name of the devil even if it is a demon. First of all, this is because the author Huanzhu Louzhu himself believes in Taoism. It can be seen from the writing that there are many demons who slander Buddha, but not those who destroy Taoism. This was also the trend of thought in the Republic of China. Most literati were disgusted with Buddhism and worshiped Taoism, and they hoped that some master would come down to save the world. Secondly, the author was influenced by the Qingcheng Sect in Sichuan. The Qingcheng Sect is a traditional Taoist culture. The author has been exposed to it since he was a child, and he has a pro-Taoist temperament in his bones. Having said all this, I just want to talk to the author. As an old bookworm, my writing skills may not be good, but my reading comprehension is still online. The above points are what I want to say, and I hope the author will consider them.

More than ten years have passed, and the protagonist is still a fat kid of seven or eight years old? Or being naughty? …

Let me go, wasn't I watching the History Channel? Why did you sneak in a book about cultivating immortality? Is it the wrong type?

I honestly can't understand it, so I won't comment on whether it's good or not, because I can't even understand it, and I'm embarrassed as a human being.