Midnight Cruise

First of all, this book is a relatively pure one in this genre, and the author has very good control over the plot. At the very least, the foreshadowing and introduction are smoothly integrated into the main text, without any sense of being abrupt or boring. The author has excellent control over the rhythm, neither impatient nor procrastinating. The detailed description is great and clear. He has an unbiased grasp of people's hearts. The content of the copy is very unique and unique. Ghost abilities are novel and unique. Updates are also very stable. It can be seen that the author is careful. But I think that as a qualified reader, the author's problems should also be pointed out. First of all, there is nothing wrong with stable updates, but there are not many updates. I hope the author can update from time to time. As for the description of a person's reaction when scared, I think it is a bit rigid. A person's fear does not necessarily have to be exposed. This book is described in the third person, so I think that people's inner panic can be directly described from the psychological description. For example, suddenly coming to a place, that place is very eerie. It makes people feel very scared, so the author's description is very rigid. If I were to write it, I would write about the fear when entering the village: "Hiss, it seems that I have never been here before. Is this the mission world?" He looked up, the sky was slightly gloomy, and the breeze was blowing from all sides, but it made him shudder. "This wind is so cold." He frowned slightly, quickened his pace, and planned to find a village to rest. At this moment, a large number of bloody people appeared behind him and chased him. He looked at the dense crowd of bloody people, his eyes turned cold, he speeded up and ran! "What are these things? They look so scary. We must not let them catch them, never. Hurry!" He urged himself in his heart, and kept speeding up. There was wind under my feet, and I just wanted to get away from their pursuit quickly. Isn't he afraid? No, it's just that he knows that there is no time for him to vent his fear wantonly. He needs to suppress his fear, stay calm, and not lose his mind under the force of fear. Only in this way can we survive. He is afraid of death and also extremely smart, so naturally he will not be unable to understand this truth. Also, the shouting during the struggle gave people the impression that the protagonist's brain circuit was a bit strange. Just run, what are you shouting for? It was as if he was afraid that the bloody corpse wouldn't know that he was going to hit it. As for the description of people before death, I personally suggest that the author refer to other works. It feels a bit fake. (This may be because the author has never experienced this, so you cannot blame the author.) The above comments are just to hope that the author will write better, and have no other meaning. I hope the author can accept it. I also wish the author great success in his work and become a god in one book. After all, as long as the author pays a little attention to these small details, I believe that writing this book better will be a trivial matter to the author. There may be imperfections and some evaluations may be immature. This is just a personal opinion. As for whether it is helpful to the author, it depends on the author himself. Personal opinion, for reference only. 🙂🙂

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The supporting characters are so scary??🤭🤭, this section has flaws. The author needs to be improved.

If you like the author's book, go for it!

The author's writing is okay, but the updates are slow. The author needs to work harder. 🙂

This book is very good, I hope everyone will support it.

If you dare to update ten times a day, all the monthly tickets and recommendations will be given to you.

Cheers to the author here and thank you for your efforts and dedication

I like this tune, hahaha

I've been watching it, and I have nothing to say, it's just good!

Both the protagonist and the supporting characters are well portrayed and make people like them, making them feel love and compassion.

Does the author have a book club? I really like this book. I'll support it by giving rewards when it's on the shelves.