It All Began When I Obtained a Skill Panel

Is the author a newbie? Come on! I would like to make a small comment. Every time the protagonist speaks the first word, there are too many modal particles. Ah, wow, eh, um, this will make the character too bluffing. Dad also loves um, and the villain appears. This is a mistake that many new authors like to make, and it greatly affects the reading experience! It's interesting to have modal words once or twice, but you can't have such surprises multiple times in a chapter. After all, if every character is like this, their respective images will no longer be distinct. Speaking of characters who love to bluff, I think of Amber from Sword of the Dawn with big eyes. She also loves wow. If you want to shape the protagonist into a similar character, the author can refer to Yuantong's technique. Although everyone has their own writing style, this does not affect the original reference, don't you think? Finally, come on💪I hope every author can have a work that becomes a god

The title of the book is so long. I'll help you recommend it elsewhere. I also wrote the wrong title.

You guarded such a good spot to spawn monsters at the beginning but didn't develop? ***

Why does this book seem so contradictory? The plot and logic are good, but the character creation is such a mess. Every time I see many characters talking nonsense and being cute, and every one of them is like this, I feel like I am watching a fairy tale world or a children's book. The style of the characters is far from the background of the cultivation world and the human race, and is out of place, giving me a super weird feeling.

This book is an absolute hit. The protagonist is mentally retarded. He has cheats but can't use them well. He knows that he has poor qualifications but still runs around trying to die. No matter how awesome the cheats are, he is still a weakling.

The protagonist can absorb the soul points of other people killed by him. Why not follow the master and level up quickly?

There is a question that I have never been able to figure out. What is the use of raising moves without mentioning realm? When you reach a high level, you have to change your moves. If you have a powerful father, why don't you improve your level and practice so many moves?

The protagonist carries burdens wherever he goes. It seems unreasonable to waste such good points even though he has them. After all, the protagonist is aware of the crisis. The author should deal with the main plot and not waste a good book.

Too wordy, and his personality is like a...

He's almost ruined and still doesn't let his father brush it for him. According to this setting, he has to patch it in the future or he can't upgrade at all. That's why every system host is a waste of qualifications. The path is too narrow.