My Senior Sister and I Share the System

The subject matter is very novel, but there is a reason why it is not popular. When I read the introduction, I thought it was a lighthearted and funny systematic article, but I felt aggrieved. At present, I only see that Ye Xiao is interested in the heroine, so I can't help but comment. The following is just a personal complaint. If you want to know more about this book, you should read the book yourself, don't read the comments. First of all, regarding feelings, this is where I personally feel most aggrieved. To be honest, I read this book just to see people eating dog food every day. The result? ? ? The heroine is very beautiful, so I can understand that many outstanding boys like her, but why do you want to arrange a plot of a male supporting character who likes the heroine and make the male and female protagonists owe favors to each other at the same time? ? Why don't you just write about the heroine being moved by the male co-star and then getting together? The male and female protagonists clearly know that the male supporting actor is the kind of person who deceives other people's feelings in order to get close to the female protagonist, but in the end, these two people still treat the male supporting actor as a gentleman, meow meow meow? ? ? The male protagonist, a person in modern society, can actually tolerate such a hypocrite who is no weaker than himself staying next to the female protagonist. The male protagonist is really confident in himself. Similarly, I can understand that the male protagonist is very good and many women like him, but can I also understand that the female protagonist is so domineering towards her senior sister? Just a quarrel? No one is stronger, so you can endure it? Why are you traveling with them when no one is stronger than you? There is also the setting of the plot. As mentioned before, the rewards given by the system are very generous, so why does Mao have to go to that cemetery? The male protagonist stated that he didn't want to go, but the male protagonist said a few words and the female protagonist agreed? ? What a considerate heroine 😁 There are four demon sect members, but their strength is not inferior to that of the male and female protagonists. One man is interested in the female protagonist, two women are interested in the male protagonist, and the other man is hostile to the male protagonist. This is clearly visible to the male and female protagonists, but in the end, you still want to go with them. Are you blindly confident in your own strength, or are you confident in the male partner, thinking that he will definitely help you? ? The key is that when the male protagonist and the male protagonist are talking about this at night, the female protagonist is asleep alone, nb. The last thing is the character design. I really don't understand it. There are all kinds of strange character settings. Is the male protagonist a modern person? ? ? How can a modern person be so rigid? He was assassinated by a killer organization and almost committed suicide by not telling his master. Did he know that he was the protagonist and would not die, so he was so stubborn? I suspected that I was bewitched and asked Butler Huang but he didn't know anything and then just let it go,,,? ? ? Can't you ask your master? You are really open to Yazi who looks fine even though he has a heart problem. Because I haven't read the back part, I don't know if what I said will be changed later, but the first part I read was really uncomfortable. I even suspected that the author used to be a big boss of female channels. This is obviously a large-scale urban love triangle romance novel with the skin of a systematic writing about an infatuated and dedicated single female protagonist.

This novel is so sweet, I feel like I'm going to get diabetes.

Big cheers for the author! ! !

Why is the task not considered completed?

I hope there is only one heroine, Senior Sister

Is the author transferred from a female channel? When it comes to CP writing, FaTang is pretty good, but it's a bit too dramatic for a male video. 1. The protagonist is obviously not a straight man and is not written to be dedicated, but he pesters the female protagonist every day, and the female protagonist always inexplicably attracts a bunch of male supporting characters. . . Of course, this poisonous point is acceptable 2. The protagonist is a fool. He died so many times, so the one who was tricked should become smarter. In the end, he was successfully assassinated every day. The most annoying thing is that the plot of the women's gang is too dramatic. The male and female protagonists treat these strangers like virgins, which strongly violates the character. 3. The protagonist's background is so deep, but the result is basically soy sauce The plot development of the female channel to male channel should be more polished and extremely discouraged.

I heard that this can help you have semen

I came in only after seeing the subject matter that attracted me. I thought it was just a simple male and female protagonist giving out dog food and supporting progress together. It turns out that in the book, both men like the female protagonist, and both women like the male protagonist, and the male and female protagonists are like Madonna. Obviously, Shi Xiaoman asked her to keep the things that the male protagonist got, and then go together, and then the male protagonist really listened to her and kept them for her? ? ? ? ? I was really confused. After seeing this, I already wanted to give up the book. I was thinking about reading it again. Then a baby kiss came out? Then he persuaded the woman to give up the baby kiss because the male protagonist couldn't do it down there! ? . . . . . . You know what I was thinking. . . . . . I was speechless, and I won't say more about it later. I didn't want to go to the cemetery because of the system, but a male supporting character who liked the heroine persuaded me to go! ? They are all the Riddlers of Nima, right? No one will want to smash their cell phone after reading this book. . . Vomited, never seen again.

I like to read books where the hero and heroine go on adventures together. I hope this book won't disappoint me. Well, it's a book with a single heroine.

Is the author a woman? Why does it feel like something written by a woman? The article is filled with all kinds of feminism, and the male protagonist feels like a shameless licking dog.

What exactly did the author go through, from two updates a day to two updates a week?

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The second girl and the third girl like the first boy. The second male and the third male like the female one. Why does it feel so much like the plot of a bloody TV series?

I don't want to say anything anymore. I've posted several of them and they've all been blocked. If this one is also blocked, I won't post it.

The author is great, the writing is very good, come on, you are the fattest! ! !

Damn, it's so poisonous. I saw nothing in front of it, but why does the heroine attract the male partner? She is a bad person, why does she still stay around? I am so poisonous, so what am I doing?

I was thinking that the author must be a woman, because the relationship between men and women seems more and more like a female cartoon. . .

After reading Chapter 17, I had a hunch that an accident would happen next. For example, the Shenxiao Sect was invaded by a powerful enemy, and Bu Qinghong was seriously injured in a fight. When he was about to fight, Yu Qingzhu made a strong appearance and killed the cannon fodder villain. Then he hugged Bu Qinghong with a trace of distress on his face, caressed her cheek with his hand, and asked why you are so stupid. Bu Qinghong said with a smile... (Make up your own mind), and then the male and female protagonists appeared. After the scene... (You know), Yu Qingzhu took Bu Qinghong and left to heal in a secret room (after a large unspeakable story happened in the secret room). After the battle, when they appeared in front of the hero and heroine again... (I personally think it was Bu Qinghong holding Yu Qingzhu's arm sweetly, while Yu Qingzhu had a hint of...)