
Water Margin Divine Machine Military Advisor
水浒神机军师
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 2.1M Words
- Genre
- Historical
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Alternate History
- Updated
- 4y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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Wu Yong is a villain who thinks about kidnapping people all day long and forcing them into trouble.
Weapon, military advisor? You can type it. Why do you use pinyin in the introduction to make readers think you are a primary school student?
I don't know what the hell this novel is about.
After reading about 15 chapters, First of all, I would like to say cheers for the author and support you Then I would like to make some suggestions: 1. Since Di Kuixing's memory has been restored, why doesn't Zhu Wu have his own future plans? 2. The author has written so many words, but the results are not very good. Why not go to the Water Margin fan works section to recommend himself? Although your writing is pretty good so far, it still doesn't work based on the data. In short, the author needs to attract people to read it.
It's really well written, much better than the routine writing from beginning to end.
Hope to adopt
Teacher Tang Guoqiang's performance of Zhuge Liang in the Old Three Kingdoms is unforgettable If you can't find the direction, you can read more about Zhuge Liang and Sima Yi in the Old Three Kingdoms
Come on, author, the writing is very good, I support it, the story is very novel and not cliche.
The author's writing style is quite good, and sometimes quite interesting, but I feel that the protagonist Zhu Wu is very confused and has no clear plans for many things. Seeing many people quickly becoming big, he just stays in the same place and wanders around the world.
Very nice, keep updating!
I haven't watched it for a long time, and there are so many updates.
The existence of gods and immortals is a fantasy. It would be nice to write a history book with a modern backstory, there is no need to make it too big.
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I think it is well written, but most people will find it not good. If you want to make a profit, you have to make major changes. The biggest flaw of this book is that it is not interesting. Zhu Wu is a good character, and he started well. He became sworn friends with so many Disha, but later they dispersed. If the Disha scattered in various places will eventually come together to help Zhu Wu, then what's the point of them being dispersed? Isn't it unnecessary? It's better to follow Zhu Wu from the beginning. But this is also related to the vagueness of Zhu Wu's goals and aspirations. The author said that you don't know what Zhu Wu wants to do. I personally recommend becoming king, dominating, and becoming emperor, not only in the Song, Liao, Jin, Jurchen, Xixia, and even the world, but also on battlefields everywhere. Of course, it's just a suggestion. I quite like your writing style.
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The background of Water Margin at that time was Zhao Ji, Huizong of the Song Dynasty When Zhao Ji came to power, his imperial scheming was not inferior to that of Zhao Kuangyin After he came to power, he could use all his intelligence and talents instead of doing business If the protagonist wants me, Zhu Xia, to avoid the suffering of Jingkang You can learn the geography style Water, be a Taoist hermit The best way is Cai Jing Cai Jing has been there for a while and has not yet made a fortune Being a magistrate in Yangzhou You can work as an aide for Cai Jing first and then stand on your own For specific ways, please refer to Lin Lingsu, the "Jinyu disciple"
After reading so many chapters, I still don't understand what Zhu Wu wants to do. Could you please help?
It's amazing to read the first chapter of history! Immortal! Something. No need to look down at all. The chapter names are all fancy. The beginning of Water Margin says that these things will not appear, and the plot is very logical and very good. It is a pity that it has not been updated.