I Am a Late Stage

After reading everything so far, the pacing and setting are okay, but the writing is poor and some parts look awkward.

The author must be a newbie, with good creativity and mediocre writing. The most annoying thing is that he always piles up settings here without thinking. Is this annoying? I don't know. Isn't the most taboo thing about writing a fast-paced novel is to pile up settings in long paragraphs? I hope the author can learn a lesson and know what to choose, and also pay attention to the wrong sentences in the article. There are too many and it is very annoying!

Entering the palace? What a pity. . .

I saw Li Xiaoning used one thousand destiny points to post: "Duck" I thought she meant that we rush duck to encourage everyone. I was still thinking that this guy is so extravagant, hahaha

Throughout the description and introduction, is this a novel? One sentence is worth one chapter.

Before it was put on the shelves, there were only two updates. Why is there only one update now? It's not enough to read. I hope the author can update more every day.

This book piqued my interest and I look forward to updates from the author

Having read the first 10 chapters, are you serious about this setting? It is said that Yi Xing has been in debt throughout his life. What if it's zero? You should get at least one star if you are reincarnated in China.

Why hasn't it been updated yet? . Speed

The structure of the world frame (the earth's core world) is not enough. There are only a few chapters of details in the first world. The rest is just vernacular and keeps talking, with almost no details. I originally wanted to look forward to it, but I was persuaded to give up, which made my desire to read ups and downs (I only read Chapter 80, simple review, don't criticize if you don't like it)

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The title of the book is very poor, and the introduction is not very good either. They are both a bit discouraging. The content and setting are very interesting. I suggest that the author change the title and introduction.

It's a very good book, and I actually finished it in one day. You know, as a bookworm for more than ten years, it's not easy to read it and get addicted to it. It seems that I will order it all after the limited edition. I hope the author will work hard and write better and better and more exciting. Looking forward to it,,,,,,,

From the setting point of view, isn't this destiny called the ultimate late stage? Slave masters are randomly selected. Because it is the late period, the early stage is very rubbish. From the protagonist's background, there is no chance of encountering blood gold with a 0-star destiny. How to activate the slave master talent and obtain slave owner gold coins to enslave others. So in terms of activation difficulty, this skill should indeed be one star... (The lower the star rating, the harder it is to activate, which means that higher star destiny is definitely not activated by blood gold)

I didn't want to see the title of the book, but I saw Sanjiang. After reading it, the author's setting is good. I was fascinated by it. Keep it up and maintain this level. I will order it all.

The protagonist starts with 0 life and 1 life. The first dungeon happens to meet a demon servant who knows the alphabet. This servant happens to remember the recipe. The protagonist happens to make the poison and then collects slaves. There are two geniuses among the slaves, one is five-star and the other is six-star. They encounter the best materials while fighting monsters. This is the unlucky physique of the protagonist described in the first 22 chapters. I wonder if it is the genius with 5-star life and 6 life. When entering the dungeon, meteorites will fall from the sky and crush the enemy to death. It is too terrible. I will retreat in defeat.

The subject matter is okay, but as long as the later plot and emotional scenes (if any) are not too cliche, it will still have a promising future.

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If God keeps teasing you and suppressing you, then He is either jealous of you or afraid of you. The so-called unlucky ones are just jealous ones and fearful ones.

Evolved beast! ! ! ! Evolve! ! ! Isn't it too middle-class? It's mainly because it's too short, not eighteen enough, and it's not satisfying! I hope rewards can speed up evolution!

I really don't know what the author is thinking about the late stage poisonousness. Even if the protagonist wants to improve his soul power first, but entering the country as a protagonist, he has such a big power and can hand it over to his subordinates if anything happens. There will always be no shortage of resources and time is spent on training. When the result comes out, the strength is not as high as that of some teammates. I suspect that your soul body is fake. You have spent so much money to cultivate the soul body and your qualifications are so poor? The level of cultivation is actually not as high as that of your teammates. You're drunk. Furthermore, the awesome skills you spent so much money to acquire are just like this? I'm vomiting. Please use your brain to write it. It's really good at the beginning but it gets worse at the end. It's not common sense at all. If you just want to forcibly weaken the protagonist, then don't write about getting so many reward points. In the end, after drawing such a big pie and returning the God of Destiny, why does the protagonist go further and further on other roads? If you don't develop the divine world, you just keep improving your own strength. There is no B box, and your subordinates have no effect except getting extra reward points. The feeling is really low, it's better not to accept it. Anyway, the protagonist is not short of the destiny points. Furthermore, no matter how much destiny points you have, you will forcefully weaken it. It's a rubbish novel and ruins my time. I really regret pursuing it for so long, especially this awesome skill. I really can't stand it. Do you think the destiny points are just cabbage or do you think this skill is very strong?

The setting is very good and the writing is good. Collected it, I will order it all if it doesn't collapse in the future. Come on author, don't be affected.

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Save it, the author will update it soon. I'll save ten or twenty chapters first and then watch the new plot. So as not to feel uncomfortable waiting

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Still the same sentence, you have read every book, just want to be more refined

It's so uncomfortable, I really want to continue watching.

The more you look at the back, the better it looks, and I hope it gets better and better. Add more details, thank you!