Flying 1997

​​​​​To be honest, most people can't stand this novel. Why? It's not that you have a high starting point at all, but that you took things after 2010 and directly transferred them to 1997 in the form of a TV series plot. I would like to ask the author, is this good? Second, since you are writing an urban novel, you should at least check the social situation of the year before writing it! Is it okay to write it directly into the novel? Third, where is the main line of your novel? I didn't see it at all. Fourth, the number of words in each chapter should be at least 2,500 words. The above are the errors in your novel. The following are the advantages of your novel: it is reasonably well written. The storyline is relatively tight and there is no disconnection. Maybe what I said is more pointed. If the author can't accept it, then forget it. But no matter what, I would like to send a message to the author: There will be times to ride the wind and waves, and hang sails directly to help the sea! I hope the author will change in the following chapters. Come on! Good luck to you🙂

Let's talk about the advantages first 😂 1. If you are born again, you can drop out of school directly without procrastination. Learning is a lifelong matter, but there is really no need to go to school just for the sake of going to school. 2. Development route, after getting the first pot of gold, seize the opportunity of the financial crisis to acquire banks, and then return to China to invest. There is nothing wrong with this route. 3. Kill decisively, take revenge when you have revenge, be kind and righteous, and it will be over if you feel happy anyway. But there are many shortcomings 1. Selling songs is a bit of a curse, and the price in 1997 for two songs was 500,000 yuan. I don't say it's more money but less money. In terms of plot alone, it's very unattractive and the first pot of gold is too simple. Moreover, after arriving in Hong Kong, the protagonist immediately skyrocketed to become a billionaire. This is less than 100 pictures. What should I write next? . . If the timeline of The Pot of Gold is compressed, but expanded to write, the content will be much richer, and it will not affect the protagonist's ability to seize opportunities. 2. The female sex partner is a young lady. Boss, when you read a book, you put yourself in it. Who wants his woman to be a lady? Usually people just abandon the book when they see this point. No matter how good the subsequent writing is, what's the use? 3. Make a super awesome and comprehensive plan to invest in China, asking for 10 billion US dollars in the initial stage of 1 billion. The author also specifically explained why the executives believed that the protagonist had money to invest, because it was found that the protagonist had a bank in Hong Kong. I was dumbfounded when I saw this person 😅 The bank is a small piece of garbage with a market value of 2 billion Hong Kong dollars. People have already found out. Why do they believe you can get 10 billion? You are the protagonist and you know that you make tens of billions a year. Why should others believe you? 😅 With such a big investment, I am afraid that the country will find out all the eighteen generations of your ancestors. Do you know how much assets you have in the first few days after coming to Hong Kong? This is a joke with your own political life! 4. Let the executives find 100 veterans as bodyguards. The reason is that Hong Kong security companies are all scum. . A little too taken for granted and too lazy to use your brain, just accept everything without inspection? Aren't you afraid of sand? The key point of a bodyguard is loyalty. You might as well design a kid who is loyal to the protagonist or meet a pair of orphaned brothers and sisters on the roadside and then slowly recruit people. Otherwise, without loyalty, it is like meat lost among the lions. 5. Finally, the overall writing is really not good😓The plot design is too thin, there is almost no characterization, and the most important thing is that it is not good enough to show off. That would be totally pointless. The protagonists of the cool novels on the rankings are all awesome. You can learn from them. Just don't pretend to be idiots. I hope the author will not be discouraged, come on😂😂

Personal opinion! About the song? The price issue seems to be very controversial. My understanding is that the good songs are worth the price. Maybe I am older. I only found out after seeing my children reading Qidian novels. I would like to ask everyone, have you heard of Blue Lotus? And that 10,000 yuan thing? Didn't you notice the word "Xian"? Eh! Come on, author!

Please add some details, let me mention a few points regarding foreign garbage. In the first year of electronic foreign garbage, many of the foreign garbage components are good and some people recycle them. For reference, take Zhongguancun. Take mobile phones as an example. You may only spend about 2,000 to assemble a brand new Apple mobile phone in Zhongguancun and the performance will be the same. Do you believe it? In terms of waste products, do you know where all the precious metals in the world go? Many components of early Western electronic products were welded with precious metals. Now there are just not as many as before. Do you know the most common platinum? Do you know the piston? Do you know there is platinum here?

What is the concept of 400 leverage? Even if it is a financial crisis, it will not fall all the time. If the fluctuation is +-0.5%, You will be out of position and wait to jump off the building 😅😅😅

In 1997, it was difficult for top-tier domestic singers to earn 1 million yuan from an album. How could an unknown child sell a song for 1 million yuan? All domestic pirated singers did not make much money. The income of singers only increased after the release of ring tones. One million can buy 10 houses in many first-tier cities.

The protagonist is looking for a woman. She is a young lady. When she saw me, she died of diaphragm.

Chapter 4: I was poisoned to death by selling songs... Two songs for one million 😰

Pig's feet are really useless. They were picked up by a few gangsters several times.

Author, you are kidding me. In the middle of the second chapter, Pigfoot said he wanted to take 5,000. His father said he would give 10,000, but later it turned out to be 1,000. Are you at a kindergarten level of mathematics? Or let the mouse steal the change and run away?

Don't even look at it. Those who drop out will be asked to drop out. It is unrealistic to be at the top without education in this era. You don't even understand what your subordinates do. You don't need to think about high technology and don't understand it. You can only engage in construction and the like, and laugh with you every day. Otherwise, don't think about development.

The most deadly thing is to forcefully pretend to be cool. In 1997, he played the guitar in the waiting room of the train station. Such a high profile personality. Well, as a time traveler, after working outside for so many years, the water chestnuts and sharpness have long been worn away. It doesn't fit the character of a time traveler at all. Even with the personality of an 18-year-old, there are not many people who are forced to play guitar in the waiting room, even if they are art students, right? I've found a reason why I can't stand it. His personality and experience are very contradictory. On the one hand, there is an 18-year-old time traveler who has experienced the ups and downs of human relationships in the world, and on the other hand, there is a youthful and flying 18-year-old character who has traveled through time and space. Can he be flamboyant? Unless he has a flamboyant personality, it is difficult for me to imagine that a person with this kind of personality would become a car maintenance apprentice in a down-to-earth manner.

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I would like to give you an opinion. A song is not worth that much. In those days, screenwriters and song writers who were not very famous could not sell much for just 6-7k. You wrote too much.

Let's change the money for selling songs! After all, it was 1997, and how could anyone be so stupid as to spend hundreds of thousands to buy songs in 1997?

I was poisoned after reading four of them. I won't talk about Xiaodu's incident of dropping out of school. Then I found the most poisonous song of finding a woman in my previous life. After that, the three songs of One Million are even more poisonous. I had no choice but to read it without my brain. I hope it won't be too poisonous later on.

The pace is too fast, please get out of here first 🙏

If you can't stand it, don't watch it. You don't have to watch it. What are you spraying? It's not easy for the author. Please keep your moral integrity. If you don't want to read this book or can't stand it, you don't have to read it. Why bother?

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