An Ordinary Road Through the Apocalypse

Overall, it's alright. The only problem is the character of the female lead's adoptive father. He raised the adopted girl, causing his wife to divorce him and their daughter. To the female lead, he's a loving father, but to his biological daughter, he's a terrible dad. When the apocalypse comes, the female lead says, "You will always be my father."

Female-oriented novels either don't have a male lead at all, or the female lead has to be in a relationship with multiple men. Authors, you should know that most male readers of novels are single, and they find the female lead's displays of affection extremely annoying and off-putting. If there are multiple male leads, at least the plot might be exciting.

Reading long, long passages left me breathless.

The female lead is definitely a Mary Sue/Saintly Mother Teresa...

Could the author please punctuate this sentence?

The first thing I saw was the female lead starting to bind herself to the jade pendant with a drop of blood; the pendant absorbed every single drop. Female lead: No, no, no, I don't have any spatial abilities :) How about a transmigrated female supporting character from a novel comes along and steals her jade pendant?

I saw that it was a paid service but I still couldn't find any space. Rest in peace, brave woman!

I believed the author's nonsense. There was no space in chapter 35. I felt that my jade pendant was a little different. Wasn't my first reaction to it being dripping blood?

Seriously, they should just die of stupidity. They had a gun but didn't use it, and with a wounded foot, they still had to fight with a knife. Give up.

Running away from home to save the world—what an interesting premise! I suggest the author add a chapter title; that would make it even better.