Just Scan It and You'll Be Invincible

After reading Chapter 40, the characters are described in a Japanese or anime-like optimistic style, which tends to be cute. The relationship between the characters is simple, the personality is simple and there is no intrigue, the villain is just a pure villain, there is no relationship between enemies and friends, the first heroine is a heavenly type, which is a bit backwards, the protagonist Goldfinger should actually be the first and second heroines. It is suggested that the villain's IQ needs to be improved.

Just watching the beginning is super embarrassing. I don't even know how I feel. There are too many flaws.

If you don't know how to write a plot, don't write it. It's so disgusting that it ends in an anticlimax.

Where is the Dimension Card Drawer updated? ?

Come on! Author୧((•̀ꇴ•))૭⁺✧

Accepted, accepted from each other, encouraged together

Just look at the beginning, it's uncomfortable

The book club circle is so pitiful, if you see it, just come in and say a few words. Idiom Solitaire, well, maybe words, anyway, just four characters will do.

I chased the name of the protagonist

Your writing is very good, I am helping you 🙂🙂🙂

😍😍😍

Chasing, chasing🤭🤭🤭

I feel like the main character is a bit weak in writing