Direct Death Demonic Eyes

[I don't want to praise you, I just want to criticize you. Please forgive me. First of all For this author, this [Introduction] is undoubtedly a minus. A simple sentence sums up the general content of the novel. As shown in the introduction of the work, the novel tells the story of how a young man with the devil eyes of death worked hard to reach the top of the world step by step. There are many such stories in male videos, but the "bowl" is different. After reading the introduction, there is no increase in [reading interest] at all. This is less of an advantage in attracting readers. But the book cover and title are more attractive. [Writing Problem] I read all the free chapters intermittently. The early writing was a bit like a "running account", too flat and too bland, so I couldn't read it. [The key points are not detailed and exciting enough, and the feathers are not cleanly removed. Overall, [detailed grasp] is not very good. There are very few fragments of wonderful descriptions, very few detailed descriptions, and very few close-ups. Fortunately, the author gradually got on with it. The text seems to be displeased with the mountains. The author has some twists and turns, but the scope is too small, and they are all small and small. It gives people the impression that the process of the protagonist becoming stronger is actually a process of [repeating] hardships of the same nature over and over again. [Lack of new ideas], ordinary, slightly boring. Each ability improvement is like playing a very similar copy. And the protagonist seems to have a mentality of standing on the top of the world from the beginning, and his reaction to some setbacks is relatively dull. Either the author subconsciously substituted the mentality that the protagonist is omnipotent and can solve everything when writing or the author's [writing power is not enough] to describe it. It's a flaw. This is how it feels. It can be solved simply. Cannot reflect [gradient]. The [stimulation of reading] is sacrificed. To put it more simply, the reader should feel as if he and the protagonist [pretend to be cool and confused at the same time] while reading. The sense of immersion is not good. Otherwise, it is really boring. After reading that introduction, I will finish your book. ps: I feel like I've struck too hard. But I believe that the author will definitely write better and better.

Foreword: Bu Shui Book Review (starting as always) Recommendation index: ★★★☆☆ (5.4~10 Points) Book title: Momo said that he didn't quite understand the title. It felt like it was an oriental fantasy novel, but the title gave you and me the feeling of reading a Western cultural novel. In addition, the cover gave me a terrifying illusion. Maybe the author didn't want this feeling. Content: I feel that there are no ups and downs. I have always been writing an article in a flat and straightforward way: I can't find anything outstanding, but I can't fault it (that's probably how it feels). Brief review: Old routine, no new ideas, few twists and turns, there are some foreshadowings but they are more obvious. Reader's words: Every author has a period of growth. I hope you have someone to accompany you on the way to perseverance.

The author wants to make the protagonist a character who is kneeled and licked by women wherever he goes, and who can't move his legs when he sees a woman. Especially the disgusting emotional idiot scene, which is really embarrassing for the viewer. You haven't seen a woman in your life. It's like a junior high school student's fantasy composition.

The straight-to-death demon eyes are so fun 😅 The straight-to-death demon eyes are not good?

It is impossible to kill characters without the concept of death in the original work, so let alone killing multi-levels and the like...

Happy New Year, may 2020 be prosperous

I can't stand it. This weed is always in the latest ending. It's a waste of space.

I didn't read the content. I was bored and looking for books on the update list. I came in and saw 990,000 words and more than 900 recommended votes for 2 months. It's amazing that the author has updated it again. Many of these books have committed suicide 😁

Just the magic eye effect that you imagined? Got laughed at

Just by looking at the introduction, you know you're going to hit the streets! The last sentence makes me want to look at how the protagonist is doing. It's so exciting now that it's attractive!

The classification of author levels is the same as Swallowing Starry Sky, and it's similar on Earth. I can't remember if it's exactly the same.

I'm talking about the side effects of death.

How to finish - This book has always been included in the latest

Devouring the Starry Sky 2?

Really, save one woman and save another. Why do you only like Mumu? What the hell is this about, do you like women so much?

It's really a clown article. He can't let go of women, and he even makes a date with them so they can tell he doesn't like them.