Childhood Sweethearts Never Become Defeated Dogs

Let's write a book review to encourage it. I probably collected this book last year. I read it last month after keeping it for a long time. Overall, it is a good book. From the writing point of view, each volume is developed with a certain heroine as the core, and Hengyu has recovered some of his emotions at the end of the volume. From this point, we can see that the author has a complete enough outline (if not, it means that the author himself has very good logic), and the plot advancement is very reasonable and basically does not make people feel abrupt. What's even better is that as the plot unfolds, you can clearly feel the growth of the heroine of this volume. Speaking of which, this writing method of one heroine and one story in each volume feels more like the writing method of Japanese light novels, especially the feeling of "The Battle" is stronger. From the perspective of characterization, the heroines in each volume so far have been outstanding. The first is Lin Luoxue. Just as the author named Luoxue's superpower in the article, Lin Luoxue is very ordinary, so ordinary that you can see many reflections of yourself in life in her. He likes to be immersed in his own world, envious of the strength of others, and occasionally becomes so dark that he wishes others a bad life, hoping that everyone can be as ordinary as himself. It can be said that awakening the power of "God Kill" really fits Luo Xue's psychology perfectly. I like this power written by the author very much, and it fits Luo Xue's character very well. However, it is normal for the character Luoxue to be unlikable, because she is too much like ordinary people like us. Once you see her, you will think of all the unsatisfactory things in your life, and even your own occasional dark psychology. In other words, the character of Luoxue is both true and true. Then there is Guo Zijin. I like Zijin very much because she perfectly fits all the fantasies a nerd has about his girlfriend. "Perfect Goddess" treats me wholeheartedly (if the reader takes the role of Hengyu). Well, please forgive an engineering dog for being short of words. To sum it up in one word, it is perfect. But even such a perfect goddess will have her own pressure. I don't want outsiders to see my bad side, and it's very tiring to act perfect all the time. So the author set up a plot in which the superpower disappears. The disappearance of the superpower allowed Zijin to let go of the burden in her heart and let her understand true perfection. In addition, Zijin's occasional naughtiness and mischief made me have a better impression of her. (I can't quite get Luo Xue's secondary plot, maybe I'm a straighter person otz) Then Yao Kexin. Ke Xin's image is that of a well-behaved and obedient sister. She always focuses on Hengyu and calls Hengyu her brother. She seems to be a child who has not grown up. But even such a child will be possessive and have her own little thoughts. The cutest thing is that she will feel guilty for her own little thoughts. The process of searching for the lost paradise is also the process of searching for Xinxin's heart. Such an ignorant girl has more fun to develop. The relationship between Fengli Ling and Wu Qinghuan has not yet fully unfolded. But the basic image can be considered determined. Tom Ling is a very typical yandere, and Sister Qinghuan is a royal sister who can switch between strong and weak energy at any time. I like them both! This book has average results for many reasons. First of all, the subject matter is unpopular. Although the starting platform is large, there are still relatively few two-dimensional readers. Among these two-dimensional readers, more of them like Japanese fans, and even fewer like me like original two-dimensional books. The second is plot advancement. Looking at the full text so far, in fact, the plot progress is not slow, and it is even very logical and rhythmic. In each volume, you can see the growth of Hengyu and the various heroines. But the failure lies in the first and second volumes. At the beginning of the article, the reveal of the main plot is too slow. In the current fast-food reading environment, many readers are not willing to read such a long and long foreshadowing. This is also the reason why systematic articles are popular at present, because they are straightforward and assign tasks at the beginning, which can arouse readers' interest. But for this article, the first volume is all about laying the groundwork. This kind of writing would have been something that some people would have been willing to read ten years ago when the Internet was just developing. But now, it is very difficult to attract people (and I am someone who has read Internet articles for more than ten years, laugh). The second volume is the story of Luo Xue. As I said before, Luoxue is too real and too similar to ordinary people like us, so once you step into the role, you will unconsciously hate Luoxue. After all, Luoxue has some psychological activities that seem too real (dark). So these first two volumes will dissuade many people. It would be much better if Zijin's story could be put into the second volume, personally. I have written this for so long without realizing it, and there is not much to say. The reason why I am writing a book review tonight is because I saw the author of the recent chapter borrowing Luo Xue to say, "Even if it is just interest, more people will like it, and the author will be very happy." I can feel that the author is very serious in writing, but the results are very average. Although self-comfort is a hobby, I feel a little uncomfortable. What I want to emphasize is that although I have few fans, I will be a fan of this book, and my subscription is fully supported. As for the reward, I probably have to wait until I'm at work. If Minaba can write it while I'm at work... But I hope not only to see the perfect ending of this book, but also to see the next new book, the next one... I really like the author's writing style and plot arrangement, as well as the heroines who have their own characteristics. Finally, if there are new readers, especially harem lovers, who click to read this book, I hope you can stick to the third volume, or skip the first two volumes. After reading the third volume, you will find that this is a good book about harems. Insisting on genuine products is everyone's responsibility. The harem party will never be slaves! ! ! ! (Well, I don't know if the author still reads the book review section. I haven't seen his reply for a long time)

Tell the truth! ! The writing content is quite good! ! ! The male protagonist doesn't take action at every turn. I still like this kind of hidden boss' daily life. Not much to say, let's talk about the plot, starting from (the opening background: the male protagonist is her ordinary person's hero, but I didn't go into details) Lin Luoxue has a sense of déjà vu to the female protagonist as soon as she appears. This is how the story of an ordinary person, a hard-working, beautiful and wealthy girl and a group of powerful men begins. In a series of plots, the ordinary girl is very sensitive because of her inferiority complex. She feels that she is uncompetitive compared to other female protagonists. She wants to give up on the male protagonist and is determined again and again, but finally succeeds in her confession (the male protagonist should think that she can awaken the feelings he lost due to gaining power!!) Good 8, I actually saw that Lin Luoyu succeeded in confessing, and she has an S-level ability hidden in her. But what I want to say is that the description of Guo Zijin is really good! ! Companionship is the longest confession of love, and each person understands each other and has small emotions. The "perfect goddess" who understands and tolerates is really well portrayed (good 8, I just saw Lin Luoyu confessing, but the male protagonist discovered the "possibility" and accepted it. It felt natural and very sudden, expressing that he was confused and felt a little wronged by the other female protagonists) Of course I will continue to watch, let me vent my rants, I hope this couple will be sweet! ! !

It feels good to read, author, come on, I hope the author will stick to it!

Brothers, is there such a thing that the protagonist really loses love for the rest of his life? That is to say, the love of the protagonist is directly deprived of him. Other family ties, friendships, etc. Are still there, are there any brothers?

An old man who recommended books once said something that I quite agree with, that is, don't say in your introduction that you can't write an introduction. If you can't write a short introduction, what kind of book can you write?

Author, if you like to write about daily youth books, you can write about Japanese anime series. This does not mean that the writing is not good. After all, the second dimension of Japan is the most popular among people, and it is most suitable for the introduction in your introduction. It is true that domestic people like the second dimension, but this kind of youth daily life is not suitable in China. It is not popular for childhood sweethearts and high school students. Japanese culture is different. It is popular, so not many people read it. I guess people who read this kind of books basically come for the daily life of Japanese youth. This is my opinion.

After all, few people read light novels. The ones with good results are basically those that transcend the framework of some light novels. For example, Samsara Paradise is not a fan at all now. Life Exchange has a special setting of the previous book and this time. Others, such as Qingluo, have many fans. So, come on, author🙂

I'm curious how the thirty recommendation votes were signed. (ಡωಡ)Hiahiahia

Long live the harem, author, come on! ! !

Alas, with such disastrous results, it is really not easy for the author to insist on writing 1 million words. It is still being updated. You can see the author's belief and strong character. It's amazing...

I'll go, two monthly passes, you are the author with the strongest perseverance I have ever seen. If other authors would have given up long ago, come on, I support you.

I have read 90 chapters. Overall, the writing is good, the writing style is okay, the theme is unclear, and the protagonist is confusing. I've read Chapter 90 and still don't know who the protagonist is. There are contradictions everywhere. What makes me insist on reading this is the author's writing style, which is clear and clean. Hope it will be better in the future.

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There are obviously so many female protagonists, why is there no female protagonist label? Crazy, who did it?

Blonde double ponytail loli😍😍😍

This achievement has not yet entered the palace, give the author a thumbs up 👍

After reading thirty-one chapters, I was poisoned by Lin! Unpleasant!

I've just read dozens of chapters, and I'd like to share my thoughts. Don't mind. 1. I looked at dozens of pictures, but I still don't see much of a world framework. I only know that it is a world where people with super powers exist. 2. The description of the characters is not very clear, and it is confusing. 3. Because you prefer daily writing? The early reading was very boring, and I feel that this is a major reason for the failure of this book to improve. 4. To be honest, I don't see the meaning of this title, and I don't understand what it means. Maybe I haven't read enough books. 5. The author is very good. At least this persistence in his works is admired by readers. There will always be a bole, right? 6. Just a few words. Don't mind if it's not good. Author, please keep up the good work.

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Come on, author, support it with all orders, the harem party at the starting point is too difficult now

There are more than 1 million words, how come the data is so bad? Is it the writing that is not good?

When I saw the title of the book, I thought of a certain golden retriever sprinting from the finish line to the starting line.

There is no emotional drama at all in this book, and the male protagonist does not get his feelings back until the end. There is a section in the middle that cuts off the marriage line between the female protagonist and himself, which made me stupid. The confession of killing a sister is rubbish. Tragedy is tearing the best things apart for people to see. The male protagonist started out as the coldest male No. 1, But the results were so poor that the author later wrote whatever he wanted. I still don't recommend it.

Am I looking at the running account?😥

I just read the first ten chapters. It can be said that I took it out of context, but what I want to say is that there is really nothing attractive about it. The whole book contains four words that are inexplicable.

Unfortunately, the author did not catch up with the good times

From the introduction, it looks like she has an innocent single heroine. As a result, there are so many female protagonists with role cards. . . If anyone has read it, can you tell me if it's a harem story?

Daily writing is difficult to write. Without a full set of characters, daily writing is just a running account. I have only watched the first half, and I feel that Lin Luoxue is more like the protagonist. The male protagonist has no emotions, so there is no need to write about his daily life with the female protagonists. Write more fantasy and transition to the emotional stage as soon as possible. I only read the first part. If it gets better later, just pretend I didn't say anything.

There are too many heroines