Transcendence in Desperate Straits

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I haven't finished it yet, but I couldn't stand the Kung Fu chapter. The plot is blunt and the characters are strange and inferior.

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Not so good! The first puzzle world feels pretty good and quite attractive. It all started with kung fu and I didn't know what I was doing. The first is the mission release. You just follow the plot, you can finish it in a while, and there are no events that interfere with the normal progress of the mission. If the protagonist hadn't committed suicide on his own, there wouldn't be anything to add, which would be equivalent to watching the whole show! That's not to say that the protagonist can't act, but you obviously followed the mission throughout and didn't hide the plot. The funniest thing is that you tricked yourself into dying. You knew that the doctor was unusual but you didn't think about exploring the hidden mission. Four summary: Very painful! In the end, he was targeted and ran home. I really don't know whether he forgot about it or whether he was more concerned about the emptiness in his heart. I feel that the author failed in shaping the protagonist's image. He wanted to create a vicious and cunning lone wolf, but instead turned into a self-righteous husky. I suggest you watch "Reincarnation Paradise" (personal opinion, accept criticism, please do not attack personally, thank you!)

I'm too lazy to type too many words, I'll just say a few points The author really wants to lay out a grand worldview? But overall, the most important thing for readers is that the concentration of cool points is very low. The first dungeon, Liushan Villa, amazes me, but the second dungeon, the Ghost Hospital, the main world, and then Anzhiju in the back, overall I just can't stand it. The protagonist's personality fusion, maybe the author wants to let the protagonist cheat and change the protagonist's sex. The character is designed to increase his survival rate in the dungeon world, and to reasonably change the character of the protagonist into a kind of nonsensical rant. This way, the text of the work can conform to the style of this series of works, which is nonsensical rants, plus horror, plus unlimited dungeons. However, this kind of personality fusion is a big poison point for readers. Since the protagonist's occupation is ghost walking and psychic, why not go to some orthodox supernatural world? It is planned to introduce this kind of combat and bloodline settings, so it is not purely like a hell apartment, pure supernatural reasoning, but with a combat system. Then your copy has always been a copy of the supernatural mystery series, which makes the whole work feel very inconsistent. And the next few copies. Repeatedly. Limits the protagonist's combat skills and storage space. It makes people feel that this combat system has almost no effect, and it relies purely on the protagonist's reasoning ability and cheating to survive. The problem is huge. The setting of that paradise. Did you know? It is really a big poisonous point to have the protagonist always exist in a situation where he is controlled by others and in the whirlpool of conspiracy, and also to always exist in a dangerous situation. After personality fusion. Main character. Always that clever setup. But it cannot be reflected well. On the contrary, it always makes people feel that he is cheating, and relying on some forced explanations by the author is a setting that reflects the protagonist's intelligence. Too poisonous. Of course there are other problems, too lazy to type, so let's leave it at that Of course the author's efforts cannot be denied. Many parts of this book include plot settings. Of course, I am referring to the plot settings of the dungeon world. There is also an element of resourcefulness. All are pretty good. It can also be seen that the author wants to lay out a grand world. But overall. This is not a very good online novel. The biggest problem is that the concentration of cool points is very low. Make it difficult for readers to watch. The author seems to be as smart as the protagonist, but also self-righteous. This self-righteousness is reflected in every aspect of the work. I read that the ghost hospital is the ghost hospital in the free chapter. Can't read anymore. But I'm still looking forward to the author's second work. I also hope that these opinions I have expressed can provide some inspiration to the author.

When I first read the first few chapters, I felt that the characters' emotions when facing various crises were particularly real. But since adding wisdom, the protagonist seems to have distorted his intelligence, acting pretentious and chattering, and making anti-social remarks. Um? ? ? ? Where is my intellectual protagonist? The most important thing is that whenever he sees the protagonist showing off, the author will ask the narrator to praise the protagonist for his intelligence. Well, there are a lot of clever things, but forget about the wise man character, it's written crookedly. The protagonist is not an idol and what kind of character is he going to debut with? Well, the story and the game are quite interesting, but the character design for the protagonist who is crazy and pretentious is too poisonous. I feel like the first three chapters and the following were not written by the same person at all.

I just saw today that I don't want this pen name anymore, and Old Tang is over. It's really sad. To be honest, I really like this article. Old Tang is a very fulfilling character, and he is also my favorite character. But it's too late to say this now. I don't know if the author will see this, but I still want to say: What you wrote is really good, I really didn't lie to you If you want to continue writing, please keep your original intention of writing. Although it is difficult to walk as an author, and there are many unfriendly voices, you have to believe that there are still people who like the articles you write, the characters you describe, and the stories you tell. Come on! Also I'm late, sorry

100,000 Words, 50,000 recommendations, five fans, 48 ​​investments, 16 posts, fellow author, your book is not a myth, you are the myth.

I have just read more than ninety chapters, and I am afraid that I will get sick if I don't say some things. The protagonist has added intelligence, so why would he go home even though he knew someone was investigating him? The problem is that after someone messed with you on the high-speed train, you first didn't kill them, secondly you didn't follow them to find out, and thirdly you just went home without thinking. Originally, the messages were deleted so that the family would not be affected. After embarking on this path, isn't it best to keep each other safe?

It's not easy to get 250,000 recommendations. I feel like I've finished the book.