Cut Open the Fireflies and See the Peach Blossoms

Why did I come here? Because I saw the author's advertisement. To be honest, the book is really beautiful. I thought the author with such good writing skills would be a cold person. I didn't expect that he would advertise 😁

When did you sign the contract?

It turns out that the book cannot be unblocked. What a pity.

As far as the title of the book is concerned, the author has some literary skills, but he is still in a confused state in the early stages of creation. He wants to write a good book, but a good book may not necessarily attract people. In other words, a good book must also have good writing skills to retain people. Now it's not like before, you can earn millions of RMB just by telling a story. In the past, there were very few books with more than a thousand chapters, but now there are no books with more than a thousand chapters, and the author feels very short. 😁

Wise choice, this book really can't be written anymore. I wrote more than 100 chapters to prepare for it. As a result, the entire outline was spoiled by you. Most of the strongest saint abilities were explained, and then the most powerful immortal method in the era when saints disappeared was 7788. This made the protagonist's future growth path completely unattractive. Just like if you are used to watching heavyweight boxing matches, going to watch matches below lightweight is completely unattractive. Few people will still be interested in watching a group of rookies pecking each other after watching a match between peerless masters. It is best not to reveal the chapters after Chapter 10 when writing foreshadowing chapters, otherwise there will be a lack of suspense. 99% Of books can predict the general content of the next three chapters by reading one chapter. This kind of writing is difficult to attract people even if it is wonderful. I believe that many people who follow dramas don't like people who tell spoilers next to them. It doesn't look interesting at all.

To be honest, even if it was for the sake of the plot, it would be too slow. Although I know that writing a book is not easy, if you procrastinate like this, it is really easy for people to abandon the book.

I don't agree with the readers downstairs. Don't just say that your personal opinions are just what old bookworms like and don't like. Individuals cannot represent the collective. If you find shortcomings in the writing style, wording, and conception of the author's article, you can repair and improve them together, and put forward your ideas and opinions. Instead of putting yourself on the high ground and saying that the author should write like this or do that. I believe that the author's ability is beyond your reach!

Just like enterprise products, is the product useful if it is well made? It is definitely useful, but if the product positioning and market positioning are not accurate, no matter how good the product is, it will be half the result with twice the result. When writing books at Qidian, it is estimated that most authors do it to increase their income rather than write real literary works. Although fast food articles are also a type of literary works, your ultimate goal is commercialization, not to express your literary youth thoughts. Of course, authors whose families have mines are not included in this list. So, how to attract enough readers at the beginning is the first element of commercial works. Literary talent and so on will always be revealed between the lines. Some settings can also be introduced slowly later in the story. By the time you finish laying the groundwork for the bland setting, the people will have long been gone. What's the use of being more exciting later on? The above is just my personal opinion.

Brother, the writing is good (*๓´╰╯`๓)♡. Come on, I look forward to your signing

Come on, come on (ง •̀_•́)ง, the plot is a bit delayed

What are these chapters about? It's a mess, either the plot is full of ramblings or a bunch of fancy adjectives. Everyone says your writing is good, but you immediately write a bunch of messy idioms and adjectives. I would like to ask the author, do those wearing brocade clothes must be nobles? The answer is definitely not, because it may also be a clown. Does a real noble need to use gorgeous costumes to show his identity? The emperor still looks like an emperor when he puts on beggar's clothes, and he still doesn't look like an emperor when he puts on dragon robes on a beggar. Good stories usually attract readers through plot, not fancy words. In the eyes of old bookworms, good writing means that the written sentences read smoothly and smoothly, and the plot can make readers feel involved. A great author can even use false plots to influence the readers' emotions and make you cry or laugh. Writing those flashy words will only turn off old bookworms.

Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

Damn, it's 150,000 words. When are you going to sign the contract?

250,000 Words, more than a thousand recommendations. If you don't buy a ticket, you're pretty good as a newcomer. But you haven't signed a contract yet, what are you still looking forward to? Cut it! Come back again, without the novice list, you are completely a salted fish.

Author, let me give you a small suggestion. There are too many repeated settings in the article. Some settings are only mentioned once every few chapters. It makes people a little irritated.

The plot is unfolding, isn't it on the shelves yet? . . When will it be put on the shelves?

The author can try to repost it and just change the category. An author I know also couldn't get signed. In the end, he signed it after reposting tens of thousands of words.

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