The Roaring Tiger Week

Hello author, I am not that kind of professional reviewer, so I will just share some of my feelings. First of all, what is commendable is that the various motivations of each character are explained very clearly, without the common brainless behavior of noobs. But when I read, I found that the exciting (and exciting) arrangements you arranged always seemed to lack a certain "energy". In dramas, the sharper the contradictions, the better. The book seems to be deliberately avoiding conflict scenes. For example, in the first battle between bandits, at the end of one sentence with total destruction, I felt "deflated". And this time, it reads as if everything had been settled before the fight. The metaphor is like a roller coaster slowly climbing uphill. You are looking forward to the excitement of the dive, but when you drive up, you find that there is a long smooth track in front of you. Of course, this book may also be about pursuing the secret feeling of farming and experiencing the joy of harvesting and becoming stronger. However, what Goldfinger presents is like a lottery system. The so-called efforts to open up your imagination are more like gambling on tiger prizes when scratching lottery tickets. And everyone who plays games knows that it's easy to get bored of killing soldiers with artifacts, especially after watching a plot like this. (By the way, is there any arrangement for the power system?) To sum up, I hope that the author can try to guide the readers' emotions while ensuring rationality. It is best to have an unexpected design and a surprising effect. I would like to encourage you and have high expectations for your work. I hope more and more people will like this book.

As long as it's a tiger, I'll watch it. Come on, author.

The part about selling wine actually took the path of commercial capital unintentionally. It's a pity that he didn't become a sword-wielding trader like a pirate nation, and was nipped in the bud by feudal local forces. The protagonist is not the type that is popular with most readers. I estimate that the best part of the book should be the unfolding of the details of the world and various interactions. The requirements for good writing are also not low, but you can make up for it by consulting a lot of information. I personally like this model of animal body and human language, plus super powers. You can observe human society from a different perspective and elicit distinctive conflicts. So I hope I remain unchanged. Tiger form troubles can generally be solved by becoming smaller or invisible. The last thing is about abilities. If it turns into a simple wishing machine in the later stage, it will be in vain. I like you by studying the consumption of phases. This is a good direction for strengthening. There are many tricks you can play with the air. For example, the refraction of light in the air creates telescopes, microscopes and even optical invisibility, ultrasonic waves and infrasound waves caused by air oscillations, various components refined from air (the water you refine is one), and can even be used to make explosives, incendiary gas anesthetics, poisons... Find ways to reduce consumption or even eventually break away from dependence on the system, and find your own path, come on!

When advancing the main plot, you can add some various folk rumors and intersperse a few short stories of hundreds of words to increase the interest. All kinds of stories can appear in the battle between people, and a white tiger suddenly appears. What a good material! (There are still many elements and expansions of the tiger) And I can also take this opportunity to take a look at the characteristics of the culture and religion of this world, which can serve multiple purposes. Various events in historical texts were later compiled into fantasy mythological dramas, which is a very attractive attraction. It can also be done in reverse. According to rumors, the protagonist is a general named Bai Hu, who performs various military miracles.

Recently, some people always say that the protagonist is a mythical beast, and using magical powers consumes reputation points, which is unreasonable. Let me explain here. First of all, the protagonist's mythical beast is not a real mythical beast. It is just changed from an NPC in an online game. Secondly, this world is a world without demons, so Zheng Fan needs an energy source to release his magical powers. Zheng Fan himself has no energy, otherwise he will be turned on once. I will not be bullied by wild boars at first. When professionals appeared in the later period, I also wrote that the blue bars that professionals should have disappeared due to world restrictions. Professionals need to use reputation points instead of blue to release skills. So to put it bluntly, reputation points are a kind of universal energy similar to the power of faith. Of course, even if I say this, there may still be people who don't like this setting, alas! Then there is nothing I can do! So much has been published, and this is the basic setting. Even the outline is written according to this setting. There is really no way to change it. At least for a long time, the protagonist must rely on reputation points to live. Of course, the reputation points will increase in the later period, and the protagonist will not be as constrained as in the early stage. Of course, there will still be some restrictions, otherwise this book can be completed in only three chapters. L As for whether the protagonist will gradually get rid of his over-reliance on the game panel in the future, that is a matter for the future, and we will talk about it later.

In other aspects of this novel, the author writes relatively well. Only the latest one may be a bit inadequate in terms of teachers and students. The author has his own ideas, and I have my own ideas. I hope the author can listen to it. Just like the country gentry written in the book, the protagonist in the article had better destroy the influence of those gentry quickly. To act like the protagonist in the article is simply a fool.

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I think the author overestimated the courage of the ancients. Even if they are ancients from another world, the legend of the white tiger's coming to the world will definitely be believed by those high-level people, not just the common people. After all, the white tiger can use magical powers, speak human language, and bring out the gods that are immortal to the ancients! In this way, TM still has the courage to confront White Tiger. Even if Li Er and Shi Huangdi are brought out from history, I don't think they can win. I don't doubt that they will even hug him directly. Now White Tiger can also make people transfer jobs, not to mention immortality, at least they won't be killed before the deadline. When this happens in reality, I don't know how many people immediately kneel down and lick it, and even play confrontation. I am also convinced. The author exaggerates people's courage to the extreme, and the courage of those careerists is even more extreme. In order to become the emperor, he will not give up immortality, and the White Tiger God will kill him even if he gets in the way. I admire his spirit!

In fact, I came here just for the mythical beasts. Tiger, Blue Dragon, White Tiger, Suzaku, Divine Martial. This setting is awesome. I am very excited. I have a feeling that this is a great novel. . . . . . Then I watched the next episode. . . . . What is this. . . . . Is this a mythical beast? When you write about a mythical beast, don't make it look like a human being's intrigue. You can't tell it's a mythical beast at all. It's better to just write about an ordinary person and the plot will be smoother. You've given such an awesome setting. Why don't you write a cool novel for a novice? . . . . Why do you have to endure such humiliation and compromise? . . . . To highlight humanity or to highlight history. . . . . Are you good at writing historical documentary literature about the former, but you have ignored the latter? . . . . . . . So I don't quite understand the reason why the author wrote this. There are all kinds of intrigues that are not on the table. The protagonist is awesome to a certain extent and then he doesn't have to be bullied by others and endure the hardships. It's really hard to understand. Usually the protagonists who are so awesome are not even human beings. Plus the alternate history. This is simply a setting of a great novel to let oneself go. How could the author be so tired of writing. . . . . . The author next door is so invulnerable that he can kill thousands of armies with one man. . . . . I'm a novice to a certain extent, but that's cool. Can you say it's unreasonable... Because the setting is unreasonable, and you still argue about the rationality of the content. . . . . . Well

One hundred thousand, trying to apply for a contract?

Could the author consider writing a novel about the world of animals, such as the Roaring Tiger in Africa, where the animal slowly grows and evolves without changing form or stallion? After all, there are many such novels, but most of them are like primary school students writing essays. As long as it is opened, I will definitely be the first to support the author greatly. . The author may consider some suggestions.

I would like to give you a suggestion. Since the tiger has real magical powers, don't engage in intrigues. Just put the little emperor on the throne and let a few elders take care of politics. The tiger only needs to protect the emperor's rights and then he can be free.

Goldfinger gave me a lot of money, but Xiaojiazi was angry.

The author's writing is too verbose. There are too many explanations in each paragraph, which makes it seem troublesome. In fact, one sentence is enough. It is unnecessary to write a two-sentence analysis and explanation

If you want to recruit me, I will give up the book. It is just a sword. No matter how good the protagonist is in manipulating metal, he will be a scumbag in front of him.

It's very good. Although it's a new author, the writing is quite interesting. You can follow it.

What time is it updated? It would be great if it was updated before 5:30. I can watch it on the way!

The author's introduction doesn't talk about a harem, but what the hell are there two female protagonists.

Continue to vote +1. Come on!

Magical powers are a failure. They cost a lot and have no effect. It is better to refine and synthesize them. Isn't it better to make yourself a magical weapon? It can be used indefinitely. Once the magical power is used up, it is gone. It is still weak. The job transfer is also a failure. The writing skills are okay, but the settings are just rubbish. If you change the setting of the reputation consumption of magical powers, it will not be as good as it is now. The ability of the mythical beast itself cannot be used freely, and a large number of people can be persuaded to quit.

Why do I feel like these two pictures are coming to an end these days? Please don't end it!

That secret passage in the palace, could someone as tall as White Tiger get through it?

It feels like it's almost flattened below, so you can try to let the other four spirits pass through.

(I revised it first, and the following is a scrap. Besides, I was too sleepy today, so I had to go to bed first. This chapter will probably have to wait until I wake up tomorrow morning to be coded, and it will be uploaded around noon. I am very sorry.) After establishing his authority, Zheng Fan began to assign tasks. Except for Huiying and the few who were frightened, he sent all the female conductors to various compartments to comfort the passengers. What is the name of this novel?

😰Looking at the meaning of this latest chapter, could it be that the protagonist does not become the emperor himself, but instead gives the world he conquered to this little emperor? Why?

The white tiger, one of the four spirits, is the master of killing. This emotional tiger?

I just saw the first few pictures, they are very good, but I still don't like Zhao Yue very much. Children who do not keep their word are not good children.

I think, well, it makes more sense to have a harem as a tiger.

Ancient background, just not animal-shaped