Traveling Through Time Is a Trap

If God could give me another chance, I would definitely not read any of the author's books (even if I don't hate stallion books)

I was so poisoned by the book written by the author that I became very scared.

Come on, author, you still have to drive but remember to stay hidden.

Yes, after marrying the junior sister, the father-in-law can complete the things that the husband cannot complete 😏😏😏

I can finally post! I don't know what happened before, but I lost contact with the book circle and couldn't post. Now I can finally post. Here I hope that the author's book will get better and better and not be like the last book.

The author must have been too miserable. No pirated copies can be found anywhere on the internet. It's so bad that I have to come over and see the original version.

How should I put it? At first, I felt a little cute when I saw Mu Nianci being raised as a time traveler. When I saw Huang Rong, I felt something was wrong. When I saw Huan Huan, it was really against the law. Maybe there was a sense of destruction in it at first, but now I feel that this kind of behavior brings out the consequences. It feels insulting. If we talk about poison, this plot should be the most poisonous. If it must be written, it can be written as a laziness only in front of the protagonist, rather than a useless person. A useless person is completely unattractive, even if she has a layer of celebrity skin.

The author is a warrior, and he is not afraid of death in such a big environment. Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง! !

Author, you are a man driving a drift car.

After reading the first chapter, I want to ask the author, since Pig's Foot, who didn't even have a girlfriend, is dead, how did his son be born three years later?

This volume of "Dragon and Snake" was a bit too dog-licking at first, and the latest chapters are a bit annoying.

Author, you deleted everything after crossing the dragon and the snake and then finished it with flowers! Don't write anything disgusting again! I really can't stand you anymore! If you feel unhappy, don't write a bunch of rubbish to disgust our book friends! We have no grievances! Leave us with good thoughts!

There is no need for the author to forcibly obscenity, and to lower his wits in Chapter 71. With the character of the protagonist, shouldn't he be a disciple directly? It is hard to accept that he forcibly writes a plot of hugging someone's leg and tongue-lashing. It would be better if the protagonist deliberately uses methods for profit. For example, deliberately drugging others to plot against others, and being forced to plot against others, I think the former is better. Otherwise, this novel is too high-level and too low-level, and it is deliberately written in a lewd way. People who read pornographic novels may not like it. After all, novels that can achieve great things are basically logical. The protagonist is obviously planning for others, but he is blinded by anger and has no IQ. In this way, even the only attractive point that distinguishes him from low-level novels is gone.

I feel that the author always tends to raise the useless heroine to be a father, and the aesthetic fatigue is the same. The author should think carefully about how to write. Too many such plots are very harmful to those who are more motivated.

What JB novel is written? I can't even read a single chapter.

What did you write? The preface does not match the postscript! Earlier, it was said that people had been sent to Zhongnan Mountain to search, and then another person came to search, as if they had not been done before. . . I had just given the evil-repelling sword manual to the Five Mountains Sword Sect, and I still regretted it, saying that I had nothing left and gained nothing. Then I threw the evil-proof sword manual into the Lin family's old house. What the hell was written in it? ? ?

I really admire the author's driving 🙏👍👍

True*Chapter 1: Persuading to quit. The emotional protagonist's system is not as good as his son's.

In fact, to be honest, if there are hundreds of kinds of flowers and thousands of rice varieties, the audience will naturally be diverse. So there is still a market, but the author brother, you write too casually 😁 It is best to dig deeply into each world. Although it should be a little more obscure, it should not be too obscure. To sum up, the writing style and plot need to be improved. Today's readers are becoming more and more sophisticated😁 This paragraph is just for viewing😜

It really takes a lot of courage to read the first chapter. Anyone who can get the title of apprentice is a ruthless person!

Is there anyone who has finished driving? The author's previous books were all eunuchs.

There are too many missing chapters, could the author please post the missing ones in the group 😭

The writing is broken at the end of this book.

Reading this book gives me the feeling of spinning around in circles thirty times after eating.

By the time I got in the car, the car was already being driven by the policeman himself. It was still interesting to read the comments from book friends.

It would be a pity not to write erotic stories.

I'm wondering if anyone knows the author's new vest or book club?

I think the main character's name already hints at everything

Why did he suddenly become as close to Xiaobai as a brother? He went to the ancient tomb and even shared the secret book. When did they become as close as brothers? Not even his wife knew about it.

What the hell is this written about?