Douluo's Misty Sword Fairy

I don't know. Come on, assassins don't need emotions, so they don't need a heroine.

The author shouldn't write about pig's feet in such a miserable way. I feel like there are no good people left.

Personal suggestion The author can join the Wuhun Palace, preferably not Shrek. The girl in the previous chapter is Qian Renxue. If you want to go to other worlds, then use a super cheat. If it's just this world, don't cheat too much.

It's pretty good. It's a very good book that I read during a book shortage, but there are too few chapters.

I feel that the Douluo Continent is not so powerful in fighting. The intrigues between nobles and emperors mainly depend on their strength. Looking at the original story of Dai Mubai and his brothers, if there is such intrigue in the royal family, there will not be only one person left to inherit the throne. The others are either dead or deposed. How can they have the potential to be promoted to Contra or above? It is still their own. If there are more people, the foundation will be better. Look at whether the Dai family has been ousted from the throne by the time of Dou Er, or the Dai family is made the Grand Duke and manages the army (not to mention that it cannot be destroyed? Then it should be idle, right? In charge of the army, the army), so Douluo Continent is rather strange. You should be passionate about writing fighting souls. It is enough to improve your own strength. After all, it is personal force that can destroy the city, and it is not a palace battle drama! I hope the author will work hard and write well

The writing is very good, unlike other fics that revolve around Tang San from the beginning.

The writing is quite good, but there are some setting issues. If you are writing a fanfic, it is better to keep the basic settings according to the original work. You can set it on the basis, but try not to change it. Also, if you are writing a fanfic, it is better to use more reference materials, but the novel is well written.

I have read the first few chapters and they are very well written. I hope the author can stick to it and not become a eunuch.

Can anyone go to the forest? Don't want a token? How can a village chief's son be so awesome?

The author wrote the plot of Chapter 42 and Chapter 43 a bit awkwardly 😓 which made me confused.

Which road are you going to take, Wuhun Palace or Academy?

What does the protagonist's second martial spirit come from?