
The Predecessor Is Unparalleled
前任无双
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Time flies by in a blink of an eye, Things have changed and people have changed over a hundred years ago, In the past there was no shortage of beauties, Now there is Mulan in the shopping mall.
[Sheep Attack] In fact, the protagonist should not be the overlord, but the "Prince". "Predecessor Unparalleled"
Hello dear readers, "My ex will always remain in my memory, but it is of no use." (˶‾᷄ ⁻̫ ‾᷅˵)? ? ? I am the little brother who has been trampled by thousands of people and has a bruised nose and face... Zhuge's little brother. Book title: "Predecessor Wushuang" Author: Yue Qianchou. Commentator: Actually, my name is "Sheep Liangliang". (This book is (╯‵□′)╯┻━┻) First impression: emmmm, this book should be the only one that I plan to read without looking at the cover and title. (´▽`). I remember that the author is the author of "The Lord of Dao", and this book broke the alliance, and then... Will the drama on the cover be related to the story? Read the introduction? ....... A story similar to the break-up style? But now he is the overlord? In terms of writing style, the overlord is returning, so it will definitely be very passionate. Maybe the return does not mean being invincible, but it should represent the ability. Breaking the father-in-law's legs! Introduction: Walking on a thorny road, three hundred years of bloodshed, and finally becoming the king! The broken spirit sky, the anger of the gods, where to escape from the dragnet? Escape, return, all thoughts are lost! . Small bridge and flowing water. The fallen leaves are blown up by the wind, soaring up to ninety thousand miles. The thunder of the shirt shakes the sky. The overlord returns... Story background: Xian Xia's back. Scene (modern urban style). Story style: Invincible text + lurker. Brief review: (Note! To avoid spoilers, I am writing a little biased.) My name is Lin Yuan, a great demon king with many predecessors. That day, the war between the demon kings and the fairy world ended and failed. Carrying the pain of the injury, I came to the place where I left. , although there is no emotion, but full of guilt. Because of her, I started to get involved in this dispute because she wanted to open up a new career for her family, which led to some people with ulterior motives starting to investigate my identity. In order to cover up and make some plans, I started to kill! Although sometimes killing can't solve everything. > But what about killing all the insiders? Maybe, being obsessed with her, being crazy about her, it's such a lingering pain. Summary of advantages: 1. Perfect start: Xianxia style. After reading the beginning of the book, I ran to read the category, emmmm Xianxia's opening, in the form of literature and art. Comparing people to ants, and adding some small settings in the background, the sense of substitution is perfect. 2. The background of the story: the friction between the modern city and the fairy. The background of this book is really novel. This combination of friction is very intriguing in terms of form and program. Character creation: Character creation and foreshadowing. There are many characters at the beginning of the story, and the great thing is that many characters have foreshadowing of the boss. For example, the ordinary doctor who can cure the protagonist's disease? There is also a heroine who seems to love the protagonist very much, but she has her own little thoughts. Finally, the protagonist who hides his identity. Of course, I won't point out the authenticity of the supporting characters. (Quietly) I don't want to be a spoiler. The shortcomings are that this ex is really intriguing. In other words, it may be because of this ex. Ren He's background and lifestyle, before the protagonist goes on a killing spree. I seem to have seen an "urban love drama" in the story. The domineering heroine with a jealous temper, the domineering male protagonist, and the small drama between the supporting characters... Secondly, as in the previous article, I feel that the protagonist himself does not act like a boss, although sometimes. Sometimes the domineering side will leak out, but I once doubted that this is really a big boss? The story direction: According to the heroine's will, the male protagonist will complete the design ceremony first. Then I will start to get involved in the struggle between some forces because of the title of the book. After abandoning the heroine, the bidding should be stable, and then the plot with the male protagonist will start. Recommended for the reader group: In terms of writing style, I recommend it to readers who like to watch pretending to be pigs and eating tigers, lurkers, and guessing about foreshadowing. In terms of subject matter, the background of the fairy tale is the shadow of modern cities (with the presence of modern cities). Final summary: After reading this, I found that if this book is different, If you watch the later stage, you will really think that this is a "bloody TV series" plot, but it just changes the background. However, although I don't like this plot method, it expresses the emotional reality of some characters, such as the jealous heroine, the supporting role of the white mommy, and the ending Miss Zhuge. There are also some foreshadowings, the identity of the protagonist has been there since the beginning. It's worth guessing, maybe because of the readers in this chapter. I always feel that guessing and reasoning have become one of the unique features of this book. Finally, I want to guess about the cover issue that I have been thinking about. According to readers, the author should be an author who likes ambush, so does this cover also hide a secret? Although I don't understand the reasons for all kinds of facial makeup. The protagonist has always hidden his identity, which feels like an actor wearing facial makeup. When you wash off the mask, you will find that this face is not as strong as the mask he wears. So, although it looks a bit bloody in the early stages and the protagonist appears less often, I still recommend readers to try this story. At least in terms of content and speculation, I feel that this book is really interesting. According to the background of the story, the identity of the protagonist is slowly coming to light. The overlord's return in the later period should be explosive and exciting.
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Two days ago, I recommended a book here, and many Lao Yue book friends voted for me to recommend female videos, which made me very grateful. Today, as a newcomer, I am writing a book review to express my gratitude. I have only read "The Idle Man", "Flying Sky" and "The Lord of Taoism". Let me tell you my impressions of these three books. (I find that I can't stop praising and write one first) I hardly read the city. After reading "The Idle Man", I was even more isolated from such books, because this book is so classic that it completely satisfied all my fantasies about such stories. First, what is amazing is that love, friendship, politics, religion, underworld, ancient martial arts, ordnance, commerce, science fiction, ethnicity, Eastern mythology, Western legends, these are all elements that often appear in the city, but you will never find a book that can integrate all the above elements into one book! When I watched it at that time, I didn't feel any sense of abruptness or dissonance at all. Now that I think about it, how did Lao Yue do it? Moreover, he actually wrote every element wonderfully. Second, what is scary is that not only are there so many elements, but most of the elements in this book run through multiple time perspectives of the past, present, and future. Do you think Lao Yue's writing power is terrible? Just to give a few examples: (1) In terms of love: The death of the queen bee is the eternal pain in Lin Zixian's heart and is the tragedy of past love. Qiao Yun inherited Lin Zixian's love for the queen bee, and her story is the current clutch. At the end, when faced with the conflict between White Lotus Sect inheritance and love, Lao Yue left us with suspense about how Lin Zixian dealt with it, which can be regarded as a choice for the future. (2) Friendship: Thomas and Lin Zixian met in the past and were partners in International Idle People. When faith and friendship conflicted, the two fought against each other. Before Thomas died, "Two men were sitting on the side of the giant ship, smoking in the sea breeze. Each puff of smoke was blown away by the wind. The two were silent for a long time." The brotherhood between men is touching. (3) Mythology and science fiction: Cain came to the earth from outer space and created the vampire race. In order to live forever, Qin Shihuang sent warriors to kill Cain, but only got back a left hand. This is a myth of the past. The current series of battles between the vampires and the Chinese guardians in order to regain Cain's left hand is the continuation of the myth. At the end of the novel, Cain, the ancestor of the blood race, reappears, the snake turns into a dragon, the warrior in the Qin Emperor's tomb awakens, the Xuanmen in the snow mountain is born, the interstellar map in the Sun God's crystal ball, and the super technology left to the Gypsies after Roma's death leave us with a broad space for imagination. (4) Summary Not to say that there will be no more cities in this book, but Lao Yue's first and only city book is a masterpiece of cities. I feel that this evaluation is not false at all. Of course, because there are too many elements and a lot of sensitive things involved, this book has been sealed, which is a scar in our hearts and even Lao Yue's. It seems to be in response to the call of many book friends, and also to commemorate the canonized masterpiece. Now Lao Yue's new book "Executive Warriors" not only incorporates modern elements, but the male protagonist is also named Lin? And the heroine is very rich? It seems that we can see the shadow of idlers. I am writing this post today not only to thank my previous Yue fans for their support and to ask for a recommendation for my book (this is really not important, just click on my profile picture), but also to tell everyone that Lao Yue is not only a great writer of fairy tales, he is also a great writer of cities. The new book combines these two elements, blessing the halo of two great gods. We must continue to believe in Lao Yue and support Lao Yue. If you keep reading patiently, you will find a wonderful world.
Analysis of the Thirteenth Route Rebels: This is a group of demons and ghosts who rebel with various purposes - this is the general outline. They can be roughly divided into three categories. First, the heavenly troops! The remnants of the previous dynasty are rampant and unscrupulous. If you want to eradicate these demons and ghosts hidden in the darkness, you must first turn yourself into the demons and ghosts in the darkness! Under the guise of rebellion, get close to these rebels, blend in, betray your teammates at critical moments, and find opportunities to catch them all! Second, the current dynasty is rebellious! These people may want to fight for power, or they may want to usurp the throne, or they may be dissatisfied with the Heavenly Court, so they follow suit and pretend to be the remnants of the previous dynasty, secretly going against the Heavenly Court to make profits for themselves, or they may attract the real remnants of the previous dynasty to join forces to overthrow the Heavenly Court. Third, remnants of the previous dynasty! At present, only Lin Yuan's group has been written. Of course, it does not exclude some remnants of the previous dynasty. They did not gain the trust of the old people in Lin Yuan's group, were not pulled into their team, and chose to work together as a group. Then why were they unified into the remnants of the Thirteenth Route? The remnants of the previous dynasty have built a reputation, and the twelve groups behind them have risen up with the purpose mentioned above. The old people on Lin Yuan's group will naturally not contact and expose themselves to these new rebellions, but choose to contact the new generation headed by Lin Yuan. Then why do you have to get in touch? As a remnant of the defeated previous dynasty, I naturally hope that there will be as many rebels as possible, so as to increase the chance of winning, but the old man will certainly not be exposed. As for the premise of mecha, generally even if you come into contact, you can't see the true appearance inside through the mecha, so there is no problem of revealing your identity... Of course, this is not certain. What someone wants to do and is determined to find out your details, the success or failure depends on the abilities of both parties. There is no doubt that Lin Yuan has done extremely well along the way. The knight next to the reporter undoubtedly failed. These thirteen groups are all vigilant, but they have to contact each other, so there must be a middleman, so a caring person appears. This may be an intelligence dealer who has worked with the remnants of the previous dynasty, similar to the hiring hall where killers receive tasks. He sells information here, and suddenly a bunch of different remnants of the previous dynasty appear similar to the remnants of the previous dynasty. His eyes light up, and he may have the hope of becoming a big shot who can command and coordinate all the remnants of the previous dynasty! If it succeeds, tsk tsk, it will be the result of following the dragon. Even if it doesn't succeed, it won't be a loss. Anyway, it is a middleman's business. You will make a sure profit without losing anything, and you can become an indispensable commander! As a result, such a caring person's ambition can't help but skyrocket, and he feels that he is already above the rebels... The illusion. So, he created rumors. According to the strength and power shown in the intelligence, from big to small, he was named the eldest master, the second master... The thirteenth master. Undoubtedly, Lin Yuan's route is the best hidden, so he ranks at the bottom. The middleman is the illusion that the old man is superior to these thirteen men... One thing to say here is that due to the strength of the intermediary, there is no way to know the true power and strength of the remnants of the previous dynasty. Therefore, after the Thirteen Routes of rebels emerged, it was impossible to determine which route was the real remnant of the previous dynasty that they had cooperated with... But it doesn't matter, ignorant people are so confident! However, reality gave him a painful blow. Is it important to attack Xiandu? Undoubtedly, this was a very important event. Since the remnants of the older generation did not want to be exposed, Overlord Lin Yuan joined forces with other twelve-way rebels. This allowed the Tianting faction among them to see an opportunity. mmp, you are the most active in disturbing the fairy world. If I don't chop off your claws this time, will the heaven really be easy to bully? So at the critical moment, several of the rebels beat up their teammates and killed the leaders, the so-called masters as they were called by the middlemen, until only three... Shits were left. It was estimated that there were just a few "rebellious" fools, and they were sold... A piece of wool. The reporter's guardian knight can escape, but how can other bosses who dare to bring troubles to heaven and make a big fortune out of them so easily? They are probably all pretending to be dead and waiting. Being able to kill a master is already considered the greatest victory in defeating a teammate. After all, who has no defense? Who dares to come out and do this? Who is not working with their head hanging on their crotch? If you can lead a dog so easily, how can you pull off such a big team? Anyone who dares to rebel and has been active for such a long time is a fool, right? Then the situation is out now. The middleman was the first to be kicked out. From the old man who controlled the Thirteenth Road Master, he became an outsider. The first category, those from heaven, and the second category, those who conspire against the government, choose to hide and wait, and then jump out at the right time, and then say to other people, 'Hey, little brother, I suspected that we had a traitor before, so I chose to fake death and wait and see. Now I see that you are not a traitor, so let's join forces...' So, these two types of people successfully blended into the ranks of the remnants of the previous dynasty, continued to hide in the snow, found out the real rebels, and carried out a sweep. Of course, it is probably common to hit their teammates in the process. 'Now, I suspect you are a traitor, so if I want to ruin your good deeds, don't say anything about me afterwards. After all, I see all of you as traitors now, and I am the only one who is innocent! ' Overlord Lin Yuan and the other twelve masters said so. In short, this situation has been successfully disrupted, the rebel alliance has been successfully disintegrated, and the authority of heaven has been established. In addition to having a headache, real rebellion against the former government requires more caution, and you also need to carefully choose your teammates to carry out the rebellion together. So big of a former dynasty has been pinned to the ground, and you want to stand up because of some small remnants? Choosing teammates and expanding your power is undoubtedly the most important thing to do. However, the two or five boys of Heavenly Court and Horses are the biggest pit lying in front of them. The water has been muddied and the superficial trust between each other has been lost. How can we join forces? How to cooperate? How to attract people? I have to say that this is the best move Tianting has ever made. This is what Thirteenth Road Master and the coal boss have to say about their relationship... This is the first time I have written nonsense, I hope it will be more refined...
Qin Yi sent New Year greetings to fellow Taoists. (Unparalleled Happy New Year)
I see you all can't write. I feel relieved. Hahahahahaha After visual inspection, my post is the first one. Hang a sheep head and sell it as dog meat. Blessings to fellow Taoists in the new year. Find a girlfriend or wife like Qin Yi. (Beautiful, single-minded in love. Rich at home.) (Thirty years less struggle. ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️) 🌹🌹 I am a rat to you. 🌹🌹 Gong Xi Fa Cai. 🎁🎁 Bring the red envelope. 🤭🤭
The perfect fusion of fairy tales and urban novels, Yue Da will once again make history. Some people are questioning the plot, then you have never watched Feitian and Daojun. If you have also watched Idle Man, you know that urban and fairy tales are both areas that Yueda is good at. When these two elements blend, it rarely happens at the starting point. This is very difficult to control, but Yueda is Being so confident and daring to create history, the sense of contradiction and conflict will scare away many people, but once you taste it carefully, it is like eating a delicious food that you have never tasted before. It feels that it should never be cooked like this, but the taste is so unique and novel, and it is so mellow that people will never forget it. . . . . .
I am a pirated reader who prostituted Scum and Feitian for nothing. I am guilty. I am guilty. I am guilty. Now I have started to work. Ah~ I will not do such shameless things again. I came here to confess 🙏
Lao Yue's pinnacle work "Flying Sky"
Lao Yue's pinnacle work "Feitian" Features of Feitian: 1. The structure of the world is very reasonable and has no flaws, especially the relationship between cultivators and mortals. Characters from all walks of life in the world are restrained by systems, not by morality like other novice novels. 2. There is basically nothing special about the whole story, and the fighting descriptions are concise and vivid. It's not like Xiaobai's novel, which is full of surprises from the audience before and after the fight. 3. There are no good or bad characters in the book. They act according to the principle that the butt determines the head. The protagonist slowly changes from a passionate and angry young man to a cold-blooded and ruthless emperor without any abrupt changes. 4. The supporting characters have their own characteristics, and they are very impressive after watching it, such as Zhan Ruyi, Xia Houtuo, Yang Qing, Yan Xiu... Many, many. The supporting characters are not brilliant, and even have high IQs. 5. The protagonist has an aura, but it's not very serious. Are there any novels without a protagonist? 6. There are few or no copies. The plot is driven by plot, not copy. 7. Of course there are shortcomings, ① I don't like Yun Zhiqiu. ② The unnecessary relationship between men and women with the third child. ③ Too many harems.... 7. I am looking for a book with the above characteristics, but I can't find it anyway. If that doesn't work, just meet the second point, thank you! The book "Daojun", as a fairy tale novel, I don't think it can keep up with Feitian. If it were a martial arts novel, the plot would be much more reasonable. "Predecessor Wushuang", I feel that it is not as good as Daojun. First, the protagonist has a personality problem. He says he won't mess with his subordinates while messing with several, and he is ruthless. Secondly, the flashback feels very awkward, and the changes in the character's personality are very abrupt. It would be much better if I started writing from a mortal like Feitian. But the flaws do not hide its merits. It is better than all the fairy tale books on the Qidian ranking list now, and it is much better.
Wushuang wishes you a Happy New Year - Uncle Chen (Zhang Liechen) of the First Class Guan has wished you all a Happy New Year!
In the first-class medical hall, Zhang Liechen was lazily sitting on the recliner, holding a cattail leaf fan, listening to the crackling of firecrackers on the street outside, with a smile on his face. He slowly got up from the recliner and walked out of the door, leaning on the door frame and looking outside. The New Year is approaching, every house on the street is decorated with lights and colorful decorations, and people everywhere are busy to welcome the New Year. Neighbors passing by the first-class pavilion all raised their hands to Zhang Liechen who was leaning on the door frame: "Happy New Year! Zhang Xingmen." Zhang Liechen patted his clothes with a cattail leaf fan indifferently, stood up straight and said in reply: "Happy New Year!" Without further ado, I wish everyone good luck in the New Year! Make a lot of money. I wish all the book friends who have started a family a happy family! Happy and happy! I wish single book friends to meet the one they love in the new year. 🌹🌹❤️🌹🌹 I wish Lao Yue good health and good health every day 😁😁 (but don't forget to update 🤫) I wish the little boy a happy Spring Festival! Where is spring? Where is spring? I wish the little girl a happy Spring Festival! Beauty doesn't fight for spring either. I wish everyone a happy Spring Festival! It's always spring when it's colorful.
Apology letter
I once said that even the fat man would not be able to pay off all the owed updates after the book is finished, so I apologize for the current situation! Here I would like to ask you all to prove it. If Fatty pays off his debt this month, then I will arrange for Fatty's favorite wedding 🗡
When it comes to friendship, no matter how you slap or sneer at each other, it's all a joke, and vice versa is a sour lemon. It doesn't matter what they say, just write with peace of mind and be worthy of the support of book friends.
Although "Scum" is immature, some parts are too far-fetched, and some of the protagonist's characters are unstable, but it is better in that the progress is clean and tidy, with few delays, and the main characters are deeply portrayed and passionate enough! "Idle Man" has not made much progress. The story is set in a modern city. It is a bit bloody in the early stage with obvious routines. It starts to work hard in the later stage, but some structures are out of place! "Flying" has a clear structure, complete foreshadowing, mature writing skills, complete story, and clear logic. It is a big step up from the previous two works. From many settings, it can be seen that "Scum" seems to be just a practice work, and "Flying" is the main text! "Daojun" has undergone a huge change. The protagonist's setting has changed from a fledgling to a sophisticated one. It is similar to "The Idle Man", but much more mature and stable than Lin Zixian. We can also see the change in Lao Yue's heart. He is experienced and calm in dealing with people. It should be regarded as a strategic version of "The Idle Man", with the protagonist's flamboyant part cut off! Since "The Predecessor", Lao Yue's intention to seek change has been very clear. The city plus cultivation, the setting seems to be "Idle Man" + "Flying Sky" + "Daojun", but many places are a bit far-fetched. In addition to the writing style, it often does not feel like Lao Yue's style. , "The Scum", "Flying Sky" and "The Lord of the Road" feel that the whole story flows smoothly, in one go, and is enjoyable, but "The Predecessor" has a bit of the same feeling as "The Idle Man", there is a feeling of writing whatever comes to mind, and then finding a reason to bring it back if something feels wrong! Could it be that Lao Yue dictated the outline and someone ghostwrote it? To sum up, I feel that Lao Yue's style is still suitable for passionate immortals, but not for romantic cities! Don't spray, it's just my personal feeling and does not represent everyone!
Emperor Chu Ming is equal to the living king of hell
Jiang Xuan bringing Emperor Chu Ming here is equivalent to picking up a living King of Hell.
Unparalleled Free Creation Competition
[Xiao Sheng has just participated in this unparalleled event, so I would like to introduce some ideas first. This is my first time writing a copycat post, so please forgive me for my poor writing 😁. This plot happened when Ji Penglie went to Jin Meimei to contact Wei Pingxin] Jin Meimei was silent. If Ji Penglie really had a way to convince Wei Pingxin, an old dog, it would be to avoid the bad risks brought back by the phantom eyes. Then the Qin family would be vulnerable. Qin Yi actually dared to tease me like this before, just to see if I didn't give her some color. Thinking of this, Jin Meimei couldn't help but sneer and replied: "Okay, let me believe you again. If it succeeds, it will be good. If not, you have to figure out how to bear the consequences brought back by the phantom eyes." Jin Meimei hung up the phone and returned to Luo Tianhe and others: "I received a call. I have some personal matters and I want to visit Wei Shuai again." The implication is that you don't want to join in the fun. Qin Yi understood, but she knew that the phantom eye was already in her hand, and the other party could not make too big a move unless the Xianting's appearance was too ugly. Then he said to Luo Tianhe: "Lord of Luo City, President Jin, then Qin Yi will retire first!" After that, he bowed his hands and left. Luo Tianhe said to Jin Meimei, "Then I'll wait for you outside." "It's troublesome, City Lord!" Jin Meimei said politely, and then took the maid and retraced their steps to visit Wei Pinggong a second time. In Wei Ping Ping's cave, Wei Ping Ping was drinking alone and murmured to himself: "I am indeed your disciple. I have learned some of your disguise skills, and even I was fooled. Your skills are not small, and you can actually bring back the phantom eye...". "Reporting to Commander Wei, Jin Meimei has come to ask for an audience again." Mo Xin walked up to Wei Ping and told him. "Come again, what is this crazy bitch doing here again? If you don't give her some color, you will really think that I, Mr. Wei, is easy to bully, right? Let her come in." After a while, Jin Meimei came in all directions under the leadership of Mo Xin. "Meet Wei Shuai," Jin Meimei said with a bow. "If you have anything to do, please leave it alone and don't disturb me drinking." When he heard Wei Gongping being so unreasonable, he cursed in his heart, Old dog, I don't have the same experience as you. He said with a smile: "Wei Shuai, Fire God Ji Peng Lie has something to discuss with you. Call, please?" He took out his cell phone and prepared to call Ji Penglie, "Who is it, Ji Penglie? If you don't answer the call, call the owner. I don't understand dog language. If you don't know, get out!" Jin Meimei's face instantly turned blue. She had known for a long time that this old dog was arrogant, but she didn't expect that this old dog was so disrespectful and made me angry. It seemed that there was nothing I could do to find this old dog. It seemed that I had to go back and push Pharmacist Lang to create an antidote as soon as possible, so as to avoid responsibility. Ji Penglie, wish for more blessings, Jin Meimei thought to herself. Then he said, "My sister, I won't disturb Wei Shuai's drinking." He waved his sleeves and left.
Do you strongly suspect that Uncle Chen is Lin Yuan's master? ? ? Otherwise, why would such a reclusive master take the risk of being exposed to detoxify Lin Yuan? Judging from the time he took action against Jin Xiao, this was definitely a person who had no choice but to hide from the world.
I especially want the author to see this post. There are too many oral habits in the book such as "I'm afraid", "I'm afraid", "two people", "no", etc., And too many different people have the same oral habits, which makes it uncomfortable to read. I don't know what the author and other readers think about it, but I sincerely hope that the author can pay attention to this aspect. It is best to appear in one person's spoken language. Don't let everyone speak like this, which will make people feel extremely uncomfortable.
There is too little pen and ink for the protagonist. After reading some of it, I still feel that something is wrong. Lin Yuan's pen and ink are pitiful and the details are unbalanced.
I want to ask? Is this a mecha novel or a fairy tale? I have read more than 80 chapters. I have always imagined that it was just a gimmick. When I saw the memories of the demon spirit, I felt that I had to give up on Lao Yue. If you want to write about mechas, you should write about mechas. Why bother to do this? Mecha is not mecha, cultivating immortality or not, being urban is not urban, I can't understand it, and I'm about to give up, I don't know how many more chapters I can hold on to.
I have also read this book, and I have known Yue Qianchou seriously since Daojun. At that time, I was still wondering what it meant to jump over a thousand worries, to resolve a thousand worries in one leap? Ha ha. I don't want to reminisce about it, because it's easy to mix the smell with what comes later. I still remember that when I first opened the book, many readers commented on the importance of finishing this chapter and the end of the chapter. Later I found out it didn't taste that way and I was very disappointed. This is not good, and presumably it is something the author does not want to see. When I saw the beginning, I thought it was a story about the return of the King of Soldiers 😁, but it turned out to be the return of a rebel thief. Qin Yi and Luo Kang'an both spent a lot of thought on their descriptions, and so did Zhuge Man. Lao Yue likes to write about people, contradictory people. This book goes from Linyuan to Lingshan and I can't keep up. There are many new characters in Lingshan, but they don't have enough characteristics to remember. I can't remember anyone in Lingshan now when I think about it. Those people may be tool people. I think everyone is very dissatisfied with the ending of Zhuge Man and Luo Kang'an. This is the last time Lao Yue willfully refuses to end the book with the protagonist. I made a bad joke with the readers. The two of them were forced to separate. With Luo Kangan's temperament, he would definitely want to get him back. Luo Kangan should be the incarnation of Lao Yue in this book. His paranoia comes from Lao Yue, and his loveliness is a resistance to Yue's wife's control (I guess he kneels at the keyboard a lot). The ending with Luo Kang'an and Zhuge Man is Lao Yue's confession to himself, the final satisfaction of not being recognized for this work. Even though I knew I would be scolded, I still wanted to give pen and ink to these two people in the end. Oh, isn't this him? Damn fat man! It is true that this book did not do well. After all, it is an online novel, but I don't think it has to be finished hastily. I think there must be other reasons. After all, it is a bit regretful. Death's unfinished ending will not affect true fans' love for the character. Unfortunately, in these two circles, Lao Yue cannot be compared with 98 after all. The leap that leaps over thousands of sorrows, and the long road of Xiongguan are really like iron, but now the steps are getting more and more different from the beginning. Fatty, if you can't jump, just walk. Here's Ollie!
I finally understand the title of the book "Predecessor Wushuang"
I suddenly realized that my predecessor was Wushuang. It's about Qin Yi's ex, the leading actor Lin Yuanshi Wushuang. There were too many words in the front of this book, which made me so angry that I read the pirated version even if it was not exciting... But it is a big leap after all. The maturity presented in the whole book is not comparable to that of ordinary short-term novels. Now it finally starts to become exciting, a battle of wits and courage, and I am back with a revised version 😁
The most evil capital breaks the heart of such a conscientious author
Damn it, your book is really uncomfortable
In fact, this book is quite well written!
It's normal for the author to get tired and have blocked thoughts! The key is that the novel is wonderfully written. I feel that Lao Yue has encountered a bottleneck and needs to make careful adjustments! All my monthly votes have been voted for my ex, and I still have a few votes left because I can't vote out the monthly quota! Vote for recommendations every day! Sorry I never give rewards, I have no money
I still feel that this book is very good after reading it (I am adding chapters little by little and subscribing, don't blame me for reading pirated copies) This introduction almost covers the content of the story. The Falling Leaves Rise in the Wind, tells the story of Lin Yuan in Buque City. The Flying Up Nine Thousand Miles, tells the story of Lin Yuan building his own power step by step from Lingshan, and bringing his power back to the light side. Linked together, it's really well written. There aren't too many fights, it's just storytelling. Although it's a pity that the story of Lin Yuan's growth was not written, it's very satisfying to see this stage. Now is almost the time when the thunder of the shirt will shake Qing Ming Looking forward to the return of the Overlord!
Why was Luo Kang'an elected to the throne?
Because the disciples and colleges under Master Long are also ambitious, why would they recommend Luo Kang'an? Because once Luo Kang'an comes to power, it will be difficult to get him down. Secondly, if Luo Kang'an comes to power, those Lingshan colleges can openly gather under Luo Kang'an to fight against Lin Yuan. Literary, Lingshan Academy is spread all over the world. Once Luo Kangan comes to power and wants to go against Lin Yuan, it will be very difficult for Lin Yuan. When the people in Lingshan recruit a group of remnants of the previous dynasty who have surfaced, Lin Yuan will be even more difficult to move. Moreover, this author's book is never about personal fights! Don't reply to me if you say we'll kill Luo Kang'an when the time comes. We can't talk about it together.
It's a bit informative, it makes up for some regrets!
Sorry, many plots have been cut!
If Luo doesn't take the lunch box again, this book will be destroyed.
"Ex" in my eyes
I have been reading Lao Yue's books silently for several years. Feitian, Idle Man, and Scum have attracted many readers. Daojun's book shows Lao Yue's skills, character portrayal, and plot development. It is a link between the past and the future. It is one of the few online books that can make me turn over and read it again. Since the release of the predecessor, there have been constant controversies, but looking back, the foreshadowings, large and small, played a vital role in the characterization of the characters and the advancement of the plot. Like Lin Yuan's Zhen, he must repay kindness and revenge; like Qin Yi's persistence, regardless of feelings or career; like Luo's shameless lust, etc., I think what Lao Yue wants to express is that no matter how many winds and rains you go through, you are still the same you. To borrow a lyric, you are still the same boy as before! Ps: I feel like I should be finishing the book soon. The holes I dug before have almost been filled in. I just need to wait until Emperor Lin's power increases to unify the fairy world.
A few months have passed. I logged into Qidian again. Even the client has just been upgraded. However, I still haven't waited for Lao Yue's new book. I'm a little melancholy. It seems it's time to review Idle Man again.