Infinite Two-Dimensional Chaos

To be honest, I couldn't stand it. After reading the introduction, I thought the theme would be a clever fusion of different set abilities, such as a whimsical fusion of Xiao Li's flying knives and flying thunder gods. Then the protagonist chose three abilities from the One Piece world at the beginning, six styles, thunder fruit and domineering. The number of words in the whole story is huge. The key protagonist is also very narcissistic and smart. Everyone knows the plot. He is stuck at a key point to grab something and sees someone else. Zhang It's so easy to say that there are smart people who think the same as me. It's not like I've traveled to a world without movies. Everyone knows the plot, and not everyone is a fool. It's a no-brainer. The protagonist has a halo of intelligence, and the supporting characters are all written according to the template. However, according to the author's words in the chapter description, the free chapters are a waste of energy and time, and can't make any money. He just deliberately wrote it casually, and I really can't stand it.

Personally, I read the first chapter about the protagonist's ability, and I felt it was too poisonous. Maybe my poison resistance was too low. I personally can't stand it. You can try it if you can resist poison. After all, I think you like poison, don't you?

It's too toxic in terms of relationships, I'm almost embarrassed to death after watching it. The female protagonist can't stand the male protagonist chatting with other people?

Are there any Undertale skills? The Legend of Pink Tears and Collapse of Blood Book... If it doesn't work, just forget it...

Eliminate the sense of existence... Why not try Sage Hui😏

Up to the 60th chapter I have seen, the protagonist's pvp battle and boss battle. With such comprehensive abilities as the Six Styles, including displacement, pseudo-flying, dodge, and defense, plus the advance of seeing and hearing, the protagonist can obviously fly a kite very flexibly, and take advantage of the devil fruit's non-energy-consuming characteristics to bombard people indiscriminately. He has to face them head-on, and then gets beaten up.

I don't understand why the protagonist doesn't choose the Superman bloodline. Even if he has the shortcomings of kryptonite, he still has to choose the Superman bloodline. First of all, Superman is immortal when exposed to the sun. In the movie, he can withstand nuclear bombs and is completely resurrected after being exposed to the sun for a few seconds. The protagonist does not like hand-to-hand combat, but Six-Style is also a hand-to-hand combat, and Superman also has a magical alternative to Superman. And what kind of magic does Superman want? Isn't the heat vision of thousands of degrees and tens of thousands of degrees not enough? There are also freeze breath and hurricane breath, and the Sharingan is comparable to Superman's eyes? Or maybe a bloodline like Superman shouldn't exist. It's not that Superman doesn't have magic resistance. His magic resistance is the same as that of ordinary people. It's just a difference caused by his poor physical resistance. If I were asked to choose, I would choose Superman. Even if I am afraid of kryptonite, then kryptonite will still catch up with me. Fly into the universe and directly shoot a heat vision of thousands of degrees. Isn't it a waste? And the inability to use force to break the vector operation can only mean that the force is not enough. This is my understanding. If you can choose the Superman bloodline, even if you are castrated, you still have to choose. Superman will always be Superman. That's it. Finally, it's okay for Silver Superman to eat kryptonite like jelly beans. Moreover, the effect of kryptonite will be weakened under the sun, and the radiation of kryptonite can be blocked, so it is not a weakness.

I really don't think One Piece is awesome. In one sentence, can he become a god and immortal and live forever? Japanese anime and other things, you are innately limited (bloodline, ancestors, relationships) If Naruto does not have the blood of Otsutsuki, he is a garbage person. If he is not a member of the Naruto world, he will have no use of Chakara seeds and cannot refine Chakara, and he is congenitally restrained by Otsutsuki The same goes for pirates. Devil Fruits don't talk about their weaknesses. No matter how awesome they are, they are highly exclusive and single. The Six Styles seem to be awesome, but that's it. Stomping the ground quickly and multiple times is awesome. What can you do if you don't have any ground? No matter how fast you are, you still have to stomp more than ten times. I can't get to the point at once, isn't it faster than you? Or will it always be faster than you? After all, don't you have to stomp the ground ten times? Smell and see color predict the future, and the instinct of battle prediction predicts the future? Really awesome, armed and sexy, isn't it just a matter of mental strength? Can the soul be immortal? Although it is not impossible to break the restrictions, if you have the time to do so, you would have become a big boss (after all, Japanese comics are inherently limited). If you try hard to break and be awesome, you are thinking of a way. If you have the time, why not choose one with growth potential (strong compatibility does not affect the choice of other good ones. Regardless of how awesome you are, at least there is a way forward.

Who can be proud of over-emphasis on their abandoned house? Start licking a girl when you first meet her? All kinds of Nannan talk to himself, are you deliberately trying to be a licker? I never take the initiative to choose the mission world. The other two teammates choose whatever they say. They don't want to go and want to do the solo mission first, but they have to agree because of face (dog-licking attributes?). If you think you have finished playing an online game, people will die in the dungeon. The protagonist is not attractive at all, has no opinion, chooses skills blindly, does not spend points, calls it useless, does not need it, licks in all kinds of fancy ways, has countless mental activities when chatting with people, but his body is a small pain? As the author said, the protagonist is true and abandoned.

To be honest, I really like the author's novels. They are very new and give people a different feeling. I very much hope that they can be maintained forever (referring to the style, the writing style still has some room for improvement). I support it greatly! Sit back and wait for my character to come on stage😁 (face full of expectations here🥺)

Infinite Two-Dimensional Battle (×) Infinite Pirate Battle (√) The author has a problem with his IQ, so it is recommended not to read it

The protagonist's ability combination is too weak. If the author hadn't tricked him in the first game, he would have been drowned in the sea water on the spot. It would be better to choose a Kryptonian than a Devil Fruit. There are a few worlds with kryptonite, but not too many worlds with sea water. I don't recommend watching it. I deleted the book and ran away.

When I saw the protagonist's ability matching, I didn't want to watch it. The ability matching is too low. One Piece Six Styles + Haki + Thunder Fruit, what is the connection between these three, except that they are both from One Piece. Do Six Styles, Haki and Thunder Fruit go together? What kind of increase is there, what kind of thunder fruit should I use for melee combat, and what kind of six-style domineering force should I use for long-range combat? If you have both long-range and melee combat, it's just rubbish. Others are 1+1 greater than or equal to 2, but you are 1+1 less than or equal to 2.

If it was really a random choice, why would you choose rubbish like the Thunder Fruit and the Sixth Form of the Navy? There are so many powerful abilities, why choose a devil fruit that is afraid of sea water? I remember that even if it is not sea water, as long as there is too much water, it is not possible to take a bath, and the activity of swimming is cut off. This is okay. After all, the Thunder Fruit can be elementalized and the discharge starting point is relatively high, but what the hell is the Sixth Marine Style? In terms of skills, the Sixth Form of the Navy is the younger brother. Among them, the Eight Gate Dunjia, the Flying Sword Style, the Flowing Rock Fist, and the Beidou Shenquan, which one is not better than the Sixth Form of the Navy? Author, what kind of devil are you? When I first saw this book, I thought I would like it and started reading it straight away. But no, no, I fell to my knees before I even got past the third chapter. It was so difficult.

The protagonist talks about not being a Holy Mother, but he actually practices it. Countless times I have knocked down the enemy without finishing the last hit, euphemistically saying that I don't even dare to kill a chicken. However, when the enemy has regained their health, they will jump out to cause trouble again. This plot is really frustrating to write. But when it comes to killing NPCs but chopping melons and vegetables, the author is really upset. Before the chapter, I said something about promoting positive energy. If you want to promote it, don't write about the subject of Infinite Flow. Look at how Samsara Paradise cuts melons and vegetables, and there is no mention of being banned, because they have a good balance between killing and decisiveness. How is it like the author of this book, who just makes one size fits all because the balance is not good? Are you pretending to be just like a saint? I've never seen an infinite series where the protagonist is so cowardly. It may also be because of the author, who is upset in his heart and pretentious on his face.

How should I put it? I feel like the protagonist's ability combination is not something a normal person would choose.

I'm convinced that Superman's fatal weakness is kryptonite, which only exists on alien planets. Devil Fruits are not deadly enough if they are restrained by the sea water that exists in almost every world. American Superman is not good Japanese Devil Fruit is good

Looking at the theme of the two-dimensional brawl, it was good. I started to read the prologue. There are countless options for the three systems, which is super interesting. The protagonist avoids the warrior option and sticks to the long-range output. What a good idea. Then I watch the protagonist choose a One Piece world bloodline that is not outstanding in the early stage and has no development in the later stage (can this TM be called a bloodline by the way?). Then he chooses domineering in One Piece, and then chooses the Thunder Fruit. What about the combination of ability systems from different worlds? What if you want to be a mage shooter but not a warrior? It feels like the author got high after watching One Piece. He wanted to create a protagonist with abilities in the world of One Piece, but he was afraid that he would not be able to write it, so he expanded his business to the second dimension.

Please discuss rationally, especially regarding the selection of the protagonist's abilities. I certainly cannot satisfy everyone's requirements. After all, personal preferences are different. There are many factors in choosing the protagonist's abilities. The first is awareness. Because it is a novel, I first have to consider works that everyone is more familiar with, that is, works with high recognition. This is the main reason why I chose Thunder Fruit, because most people have heard of Devil Fruit even if they have not seen it. I have said that many readers know this thing even if they don't like him, but if you choose someone who has never seen it and is the protagonist, then this type of genre will be difficult to follow. Secondly, I must write about abilities that I am familiar with, so that the details will be rounded. Thirdly, as an author, I must know what abilities are strong. Choosing it means that there must be various combinations, otherwise why would I write a protagonist who can't be beaten by anyone? Writing a book is not something you can just write however you like as everyone thinks. As an author, I have to consider many factors. The various abilities must be balanced and not completely copied from the original work, otherwise this kind of chaotic fighting game will soon collapse. This is the lesson I learned from my last book. Everyone has their own preferences for radish and green vegetables. One protagonist cannot satisfy everyone, so there are various unpopular and strong combinations such as supporting roles and supporting roles. Just because you like to eat radishes does not mean that you are SB who likes to eat green vegetables. I hope everyone can discuss it rationally. If you like the combination, you can keep it in the supporting role. If the combination is innovative and detailed, it will appear in the book.

There is a problem with the ability setting at the beginning. Since if you choose the pirate bloodline, you can have the ability of Navy 6, then why don't you choose the ninja bloodline? Isn't that the Five Elements Ninjutsu? There is also the setting of gaining Haki. Haki is equivalent to the special blood succession limit in Naruto. So why don't you choose Naruto? The writing collapsed at the beginning, which made me feel uncomfortable.

The smart ones in the first few chapters put me off, as well as the cool-headed one. At the beginning, I felt that the protagonist had no ability and was very arrogant.

The introduction is good. After reading the beginning, you can choose by yourself. It's awesome. It depends on which pirate ability and bloodline you choose. . . With this restriction, you can just choose from the big carousel machine. If you want to choose by yourself, you will be persuaded to quit.

Didn't you say at the beginning that you like to be a mage because it has room for long-range, and then you choose a melee-focused system like Haki? Then you choose a lineage from the maritime world. Wow, your lineage from the maritime world makes me embarrassment. If you can't choose a D-lineage, I can tolerate it. And if you choose this basic attribute, there is a gap between the basic values ​​of the American team. You have to choose a bloodline map that is weaker than others at the beginning and has no late-stage ability. The teleportation and other abilities of the elemental band of the Thunder Fruit are similar to the 6th type. The ability is repeated in so many maps. In the end, the Saiyans obviously do not add physical fitness. Having a physique that relies solely on Qi to hold up the lack of Qi is the blood of an ordinary person. See Sun Wukong who was almost killed by various laser heart attacks.

Saiyans are said to be weak in the early stages. Who are you comparing them to, Son Goku? Please, why don't you compare them to Broly? Normal Saiyans can defeat pirates when they grow up, especially those who know the various abilities of pirates.

Don't tell me, Dragon Ball doesn't have long-range attacks, vitality bombs, how can Turtle Style Qigong destroy the moon? Dragon Ball has no weakness, it becomes 1 to 5 times stronger when it is injured. You actually choose One Piece. Besides, who will buy the broken stone when Superman comes up? Besides, you just write a version of Superman, Gold Superman, Silver Superman, Magic Superman,

I don't understand whether it is the sea water that can be found everywhere that easily becomes the Achilles' heel or the kryptonite that has to be bought just for you, you. . . I can't explain it

Emotional description can work harder Character description can be improved, such as language, action description, details, which will have unexpected effects Supporting characters (i. E. Branch lines) can try to describe one or two dangerous games (representing different concepts). Players' influence on them should be gradually increased, and the time span in the game can be lengthened.

I thought of some perverted combinations, the ones that weaken the system and are very strong 1. The bloodline that strengthens the body and the telekinesis ability 2. The bloodline with a few extra hands plus the 100,000 cold jokes that are 100% caught with bare hands. Wouldn't the enemy recognize people and slaughter them? 3. The bloodline of the black light virus swallows up those modern highly intelligent businessmen. He only has the memory to create his own nuclear bomb and hydrogen bomb, and the black light virus can survive a nuclear explosion It feels very perverted to think of so many things for the moment, especially telekinesis and chakra, which are all about the stronger the person's physical fitness, the greater the total amount. There are also many, such as the pirate's armed color and Naruto's strange power fist. Think about the superimposed power of Garp and Tsunade's fist.

I'm about to reach chapter 500 and have no choice but to give up. It doesn't matter whether you choose your abilities or not. Personal preferences are nothing to complain about, and you don't always know they are true from the beginning. Restricted development is equivalent to a level line, which is quite normal. The key is whether the author was in love when writing 400 to 500 chapters. Half of the time he was in love, no matter whether it was a copy or reality, he didn't care about life or death. They say the responsibility is stressful, but there is no real thinking and research at all. There's a global disaster, and the government doesn't even have basic intelligence or training. The combat power of the dungeon is inexplicable, and it wouldn't be like this if you really play the game balance mechanism. Even though I'm gone, I still hope to make progress.

So what will be the effect of Touma's Fantasy Killer?