Lord of the Mysteries

How should I put it? The female doctor is a bit forced here. I feel that the female doctor is too naive. She has no social experience and is always shy. This place is a bit far-fetched.

I'm really confused. What the hell, you can create your own system. The original owner didn't have a secret fire. How the secret fire came out is not mentioned. The essence of spirituality has become a self-created system. Who can bear this?

The first part is good, but the second part makes people confused, especially the part where Uncle Da kidnaps Qin Ya. The priorities are too confusing. Although Qin Ya is an important character, but these hundreds of thousands of words, according to the mainstream, it should not be to lay out the story line, describe the world view, fight monsters with pig's feet, upgrade as soon as possible, and then dig out the secrets of the world step by step, and then intersperse the daily emotional life of pig's feet. Even if it is an urban novel, doesn't pig's feet enrich itself first? Does it mean that if you have money, you can do whatever you want? I hope the author can simplify it.

Since the protagonist made the system himself, where do the tasks and task rewards come from? Out of thin air?

The title reminds me of Lord of Mysteries. . . . . .

Why haven't you written a new book? What a pity

One time the time traveler, the other time Luochuan, I felt irritated and couldn't stand it anymore!

The title of the book Lord of the Mysteries is very confusing. In fact, this book is a suspense and police film. .

Looking at the beginning, the interior design of the windbreaker is obviously to make it easier to hide and draw a gun. Coupled with the related environment... The protagonist should be a high-reliability investigator, right? Reason for admission, persistent madness?

Can't we unify those who claim to be both a time traveler and Luochuan? Aren't these two the same person? Although I have some ideas, the writing is too naive.

After reading Chapter 32, I felt like I didn't quite understand it, and it also felt very toxic. This inexplicable determination to die together is very strange! From the reader's point of view, there is no sense that the protagonist will die if he doesn't do anything. The article says that because of anger and worry, the protagonist wants to do it, otherwise he will die for you. Here, first of all, there are worries about the female doctor. Why are you so worried about her? Are you so worried that you would rather die than save him? The protagonist was tortured by the female doctor for two months. Is the torture to the point that if it lasts longer, he will no longer be himself? For this reason, she is called a female devil. Why does her feeling suddenly change? You can't just say that the female doctor is just doing her job faithfully, so we can forgive her, right? It's okay to forgive, but there is a problem if you risk life and death for the person you forgive. For example, a person was wrongly accused and went to prison. The prison guard thought you were a criminal and tortured you. Later, you were released from prison (this release was not a release from prison where suspicion was cleared). Something happened to the prison guard who tortured you. You said that he was a good person and I would save his life regardless of his life. It's so bloody! It's also poisonous! This is how I felt when I read this chapter. In other words, the protagonist feels guilty because he has caused trouble to others. But the problem is that the protagonist is passive, not even the protagonist, but the predecessor of the protagonist. If this means risking life and death, how can we write the plot in the future? Who knew that what you said today and the information posted online would become a factor in a person's death. Even if the enemy comes and you don't commit suicide, I will kill my wife. She died because of you. What if the protagonist commits suicide? Then there is anger and so on. I don't know this, and I can't know it. This is the author's domain. He can write whatever he wants. This is his novel, this is the world he created, and others have no right to interfere. But you have to be responsible if you create it! You can't be contradicted and slapped in the face! I just talked about the golden finger rules I created, and how strong the constraints are when written down. If we set a rule that we cannot eat meat, we will not be able to eat meat even if we starve to death. In the end, just a few chapters later, my backhand was smashed to pieces! Get angry, threaten a dead creature with no concept of life and death to die together, and the absolute restraint mentioned above will be released! It's really baffling

It's best for the protagonist to have more confidantes, since he is relatively rich after all.

The work is written fluently and is a rare masterpiece. It has been collected. I hope you can pay attention to my work "Spiritual Master Volume".

The author's ideas about the power system are good, but it's a pity that the writing style is not good.

By the way, if you have any questions, please send me a book review. I can't reply to the charter review. Of course, it is best to join a book club group, which is more efficient.

It's a bit confusing, and if the protagonist has a name, he shouldn't be called a time traveler.

You write according to the reader's ideas. What is your outline for? How many authors have been led astray by their readers, and they should take this as a warning!

In fact, it is to digitize growth. For example, if you read a book, you will gain the experience of reading, but you can't see it, but that guy Luochuan can intuitively see his own growth. So experience is not issued by the system, you need to work hard to gain it, well, that's pretty much it.

I finally found the reply method mentioned in this chapter... It's really not easy. Everyone is welcome to complain and try to reply as soon as possible.