
The Proud Saiyans of Marvel
笑傲漫威的赛亚人
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 261k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 7y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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131Chapters
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The writing is pretty good, so go for it, author!
After reading all the feelings and suggestions so far,
Personally, I think it's okay, but the protagonist's combat power is a bit low. In fact, it can go up a bit. According to the Dragon Ball dimension, Odin should be at the same level as Kaioshin, with super-second strength. Ancient One, and Thanos without gems should also be at this level. After reading it, I found that the author's current highest setting is Super Saiyan III, which should be the Infinity Stone Thanos. Personally, I think the combat power setting could be higher, because the combat power of Dragon Ball is too high, and this book suddenly drops it too much, giving people the aura of a weakling. There is also the identity of the protagonist, which is not clearly explained at the beginning. It is not until later that we realize that it is a second time travel. In the combat power setting, Spider-Man is a bit low. Even if he is not as good as Iron Man or something, he is still stronger than Hawkeye or something. Since Shang Qi can learn Qi, and Iron Man was told that he needs to have the physique of Captain America, can Spider-Man also learn Qi? ? Personally, I feel that the actions of Ancient One Odin and others in order to strengthen the bond between the protagonist and the earth are a little evil. Also, the writing pace is a bit fast. Some feelings about reading books
Several fellow Taoists almost made me autistic because of their fighting prowess. I will never write about Dragon Ball again, combat power is such a stupid invention. Genin without fighting ability can fight Jonin, Luffy can fight Sand Crocodile, what else can I say, Captain America is 55 vs. Everyone. Write slowly and try not to crash. In the eyes of that group of people, Dragon Balls must have hundreds of millions. It doesn't need to exceed 1, and the story is over. In order to write Super 2 and Super 3, I kept my combat power so low. I won't explain it later. I can only say, you are so awesome, you really can't make up the adaptation.
When an author writes a book, he gives readers a tour of his world. You come in for a visit, chat a few words if you like it, and if you feel that the world is different from what you imagined, you can leave and make suggestions. As for you saying there is something wrong with my world, please let me see what the world in your mind looks like. My creation of this world is a process of self-sublimation. I think when I complete the feat of nine stars in a row, a universe will be born in my mind. Don't interfere with the operation of other people's world. We must adhere to the Five Principles of Peaceful Coexistence.
No need to write, there is no future, the writing style generally feels like writing, and I don't understand Longzhu at all. Even the city level, provincial level, and national level have come out to divide the combat effectiveness. It's so embarrassing.
The author's writing is very good! Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง, I guarantee a minimum of 3 recommendations every day Also, the combat power is a bit messy! After all, if the US team has 200 combat power! So what do Yamcha and Krillin count after practicing in Kamesenya? Who is Turtle Immortal? The best thing about Captain America is his character and the bonus of having Mjolnir, Mjolnir! Under normal circumstances, the US team's combat power is only 120 to 150.
The American team actually has 200 combat strengths? Are you kidding me? Have you ever watched Marvel? Captain America's characters are just the limits of the human body! It's not about breaking through the limits of the human body! In other words, the highest combat power of the American team is only ten points! This is a reference to Dragon Ball! Without a shield! I figured it out, in Dragon Ball, it looks like Satan's human body is at its limit, right? It's only ten o'clock, right? It's been so long that I don't remember! Did the shield add almost two hundred combat power? This is incredible! However, wasn't the shield destroyed by Thanos? This setting is really the strength to persuade you to quit! Forget it! What is intolerable is, what do you think when you have a combat power of over three and less than one million? Has the author's brain been frozen in a freezer?
Come Marvel's hilarious Saiyans.
I haven't read it yet, but after reading the comments, the author explained why he wrote it this way. Why do people keep criticizing it? This is the author's world, and this is the world he (she) presents to us. Everyone has a different opinion. If you don't like it, just leave. There's nothing to say. Does it make sense to keep scolding (trolling) the author? I don't understand you people who want to control the plot and change the author's settings.
You bring Dragon Balls to attract Dragon Ball fans, and you want to be proud, but you are suppressed everywhere. You can just name yourself a wretched Saiyan in Marvel. With this combat power setting, what are you using to be proud? Dragon Ball fans need you to suppress your combat power? Balance combat power? I won't say anything to you if I start with ease, and if I have perfected my intention, I will not say anything to you. Instead, you will feel uncomfortable if you suppress it. The author is just lying to Dragon Ball fans. The popularity assessment is completed.
Let's change the title of the book. You've promised to be a Swordsman, but you've been dissatisfied since you first came here. If your combat power is so low, don't tell readers that you're here to be a Swordsman.
I can't watch it, the writing is not good, Tony Stark's writing is nothing like 2b, the characterization is too rigid, and there is no description of the emotions between the characters. You wrote the Saiyans as useless, and Thanos is not the top combat power in the movie universe (Ethan, the one in the Celestials group is not better than him), use him as a ceiling Shi Lezhi. If Marvel's fighting power is based on comics, it can still be written, otherwise it will only be written about people and ghosts. And your writing style, practice it well.
If you don't know Dragon Ball, don't write. Otherwise, it will just attract trolls, and what nonsense will it do under the banner of Dragon Ball?
That's why I haven't read a few chapters. Dragon Ball is all about fighting with ease, and you must suppress it. And why compare Thanos to the ceiling? Does this mean that Thanos is the most powerful in the Marvel movies, so the protagonist cannot be stronger than Thanos? When you travel through time, you need to balance your combat power, which means that when you travel to the martial arts world as a cultivator, you have to balance the combat power of your martial arts. Can a grudge travel to a normal world without demons and kill a lion? It's not that you want to make the protagonist super awesome all at once, but the combat effectiveness is not suppressed like this. For those who like Dragon Ball, not many people will like your setting. You are refuting all the posts that raise opinions, and I don't see you taking any suggestions. Can't you see what the score of this book is? Or do you think your writing is good, but no one appreciates it?
The Swordsman and the Saiyans? The Jianghu Saiyan is not bad, um, the name is good.
Many Taoist friends always question Xiao Dai for not watching the anime. To clarify, I watched the anime version of 1 and 2, but not the others. Anyway, other settings are also explosive. It's only the second part and the combat power is already over hundreds of millions, so wouldn't it be worth hundreds of millions if there are a few more? I didn't write about the combat effectiveness in the later stage. I guess it's because the screen of the detector is too small and there are too many zeros to fit in. The combat effectiveness of Dragon Ball is the same whether it is or not. Anyway, it is a close-up draw, throwing skills from a distance, scolding on the public screen, and then repeating. What a great thing to say: Damn, what a strong fighting power. Then he exploded and repeated the cycle. Ask me, have you read the Marvel comics? How have those people been weakened in the movies? If I write a novel and weaken it, why won't I accept it? My writing skills are indeed not very good, but don't look at me with the mentality of seeing someone old at the age of three, and I am not shy and am not afraid of complaining. But pure trolling is not acceptable. Whenever a novel combines the forces of two or more worlds, it must be balanced, otherwise it will not work. The purpose of adding combat power settings is to tell you that the protagonist has become stronger and when he can transform. If combat power is not needed, how can it be written like this: Exercise and become stronger, exercise and become stronger... Okay, the strength has reached the limit of transformation. If there is no numerical representation, you will be confused after reading it, okay? Don't worry too much about the novel, after all, Captain America is 55 points better than everyone else.
This can only be said to be the author's choice. Anyway, it definitely won't achieve anything. No one read it, and I didn't read it. The original setting has been weakened. This kind of book is basically unacceptable. In order not to scold the author, I stopped reading it.
The first chapter put me off. I can only say that the Tony you wrote was too dramatic.
It's true that Dragon Ball has issues with its combat effectiveness, but you can't weaken Dragon Ball just because it's written in Marvel. Moreover, the main character's combat power is written like that. Dragon Ball's combat power is astonishing, doesn't it look cool? Since it is so weakened, why not write a shit about Dragon Ball.
The author is very good. Everyone's comments are answered. Come on, keep an eye on you! Juvenile
200 To 1W is a level, and above 5W is also a realm! So 1W to 5W of combat power was swallowed up by the protagonist?
The strength of the Saiyans depends on the body, not the laws, not the rules of the universe, not the Tao. Why do you weaken the Saiyans? Don't blame others if you haven't figured out the outline of your own setting.
In the early stage of Dragon Ball, with a combat power of 1000, he is basically the number one player on the planet. Frieza dominated the Northern Galaxy with only his special forces. He rarely does anything himself.
The power setting turns out to be that Loki is more powerful than Doctor Strange? ? ? Didn't the author watch Avengers 3?
I've read it too, and it's pretty good. It's just that the combat power setting is too low, so it's criticized by many people. In fact, the author does not need to care about this combat effectiveness. The combat effectiveness of Dragon Ball itself collapsed. Marvel is also a bit broken. Captain America can give anyone a 50-50 shot. Doctor Strange, a half-assed Sorcerer Supreme, is actually stronger than Loki. After all, Loki was trained by Frigga from an early age. So just keep the combat power aspect vague. For example, Chao Yi is equivalent to the Thunder God with Storm Ax in the later stage, sub-tianfu level. Then the full power of Chao Yi is equal to Ancient One, Odin, and Hela. Super Two is equivalent to those Celestial Teams. The Celestials in the movie universe are always going to be weakened anyway, right? Then Super Three and Majin Buu are the strongest in the single universe. You can write about Super Saiyan God, God of Destruction, Angel, these are the powerful beings of the multiverse. All in all, you don't need to worry about the setting of combat power.
The combat power is not very well written. Piccolo's generation of two to three hundred combat power can already destroy a city with one blow, okay~_~
All I can say is goodbye! It's impossible to watch!
Combat power is indeed ridiculous, but physical strength and physical strength are universal in any novel.
If Dragon Ball joins Marvel, it will bring Marvel's combat power a little closer to the comics, otherwise there would be no need to write it at all.
To be honest, after reading the comment section, some readers actually thought that Chao Yi could destroy the world. Don't they know that his dimension level in Marvel may be higher than that of Dragon Ball? Don't make excuses about boxing champions for me, Marvel has something like this too.