The Eye of the Dimensional Storm

Don't try to "grow" this book in a "grow-up" state, because if you try to wait until it's "fat" (grown up) before reading it, the book will just starve to death.

This book is truly excellent, and it perfectly suits my taste so far. However, I hope there won't be multiple female leads; let the reborn Kenshin live out his days alone! (Sarcasm intended)

I'll build a tower, one floor at a time, until a hundred floors are completed. After all, I'm just an employee. 🤓

First, perseverance is essential. Avoid giving up halfway, abandoning the story, or leaving it unfinished. It's normal not to update as expected, but never give up. Second, don't be afraid of poor writing. For fan fiction, as long as the cause and effect of events are clearly described, that's sufficient. After all, the writer isn't a professional author.

I feel it would be better if the protagonist were a time traveler; I don't know why, but I always hope the protagonist of a book is a time traveler.

Speechless. The protagonist's indigenous identity and personality are too naive, and the author's writing style fails to seamlessly integrate with the plot. The result is a naive indigenous character who is forced to ignore the plot, yet frequently finds himself intervening in crucial moments or coincidentally appearing as a plot character. It's all too stiff.

It's a real shame he's not a time traveler. Personally, I wouldn't even read time travel fanfiction, watch anime, or watch movies unless I knew the plot myself. This is so awkward. How can someone who knows nothing be allowed to save those tragedies? It's ridiculous. If nothing has changed, I'd rather just read the original. In short, I personally feel this way of writing is very unpopular and really tests the author's writing skills.

The beginning was idiotic. Was the first world, "Slaying the Girl," supposed to be hardcore and require a high IQ? I'm skipping the first world and going straight to the second. The idiotic and naive protagonist is infuriating.

I just invested today and already signed the contract! So lucky! (๑˃̵ᴗ˂̵)و 🔒

I suddenly wondered why they didn't follow the Empire, but instead went with the Night Raid.