Eye of the Second Dimension Storm

First, you must persevere. Don't give up midway, get stuck, or end up unfinished. It's normal to not update as expected, but don't give up. Second, don't be afraid of poor writing. For writing fan fiction, as long as the cause and effect of the matter are clearly described, the person who writes it is not a professional writer after all. Real professional writers probably can't write fan fiction either. Third, the plot of the original story can be briefly described, but cannot be omitted. For the original plot that is considered unimportant, it must be briefly described without omitting the past. What you want to write is a complete story, not a diary. At the very least, people who have never seen the original work should be able to roughly understand what happened in the middle. Fourth, try to reduce the creation of irrelevant plots, and modify or extend the original story plot. Most readers who read fan fiction will not read plots that the authors have painstakingly created themselves. When seeing such an unfamiliar chapter, most people will choose to skip it. It's okay to change the original plot, but don't write some completely unrelated chapters that are similar to extra chapters. For example, when writing about Naruto, try not to write about mission plots that are not included in the original work. When encountering such a story, many people choose to skip it. Fifth, in addition to the protagonist and supporting characters, reduce the number of fictional characters created by the author. If there are many characters in a certain work that are not in the original story, it will be difficult for readers to accept it and they will not be able to figure out the relationship between the characters. Necessary characters can be fictional, but try to keep them to single digits. New fictional characters should have prototypes as much as possible so that readers can adapt to them as quickly as possible. Sixth, be able to withstand abuse and stick to principles. The psychological quality must be good. No matter how you write, you will be criticized, insulted, intimidated, ridiculed... The work is your own, and you must insist on your own creation. Let those who curse die. Seventh, don't wear random clothes. In a work, try not to mix characters from other works. You can learn from the plots, skills, character prototypes, etc. Of other works. Eighth, the settings should be clear. For some unique settings, explain them in the story instead of writing them in related documents. Many readers don't look at the relevant settings. Ninth, YY is the kingly way, don't be afraid of criticism. Without YY, there would be no point in writing fan fiction. It is precisely because of YY that it attracts attention. Tenth, don't go back. Unless there is a flaw, don't go back and make changes. It is advisable to continue writing, and do not follow the advice of some readers and go back to drastically change the plot. Eleventh, what you like is the most important thing. If you create or adapt stories and characters that you don't like, fan fiction will lose its vitality. Twelfth, don't be afraid to overturn the original settings and release packages. Many novels and animations constantly overturn their own settings, and a story without flaws is incomplete. Thirteenth, the chapters should be clear, and avoid no titles or chapters. The number of words in the title should be between 4 and 15 words. If the chapter is not clear, many readers will forget where they last saw it after the author updates it. 14. The number of words in each chapter should be controlled at around 2,000-5,000 words. Too short or too long will affect the reading effect.

Some worlds can be recommended, such as Shakugan Shana - Rondo of Angels and Dragons - Heroes of the Fallen Knight - God Slayer - Demon High School - Fatezero - Blood Devouring Raid - Railgun - Sword Art Online - The Son of the Slicker - Inuyasha - Fairy Tail, etc. Can all be good stories.

Don't keep this book, because if you want to keep it and read it until it gets fat, the book will starve to death.

This book is really good, and it is very close to my heart. But I hope there won't be multiple heroines, so let's let the reborn Kenshin die alone! (Manual funny)

Build a building, one on the first floor and one on the 100th floor. After all, I am a part-time worker 🤓

I feel better if the protagonist is a time traveler. I don't know why I always hope that the protagonist is a time traveler when I read a book.

Speechless, the protagonist's Aboriginal identity and character are too novice, and the author's writing style cannot describe the development of the plot naturally. The result is that an Aboriginal novice does not know the plot, but often joins the plot at critical moments, or happens to be a plot character. Too stiff

I can only say that it's a pity that I'm not a time traveler. As long as I'm not a time traveler who knows the plot, I personally won't watch any fan fiction, anime, or movies about time travel. It's too awkward. It's so nonsense that you can save those tragedies by knowing nothing. If nothing has changed, I might as well read the original work. In short, I personally feel that writing like this is very unflattering and it tests the author's writing skills

A weak start. Does the first world slaying a girl directly require hardcore and IQ? I'd better skip the first world and watch the second world. The mentally retarded and naive protagonist was very angry.

I just invested today and signed the contract. Lucky(๑˃̵ᴗ˂̵)و 🔒

I've read three chapters and found it interesting. I'll read it when I get fatter!

I read two chapters. Very good.

Suddenly I was thinking why I didn't just go with the Empire and had to go with Ye Raid

Come on, author, I don't have money to reward you, but when you put it on the shelves, I will be there first!

Zu'an... Is he a hunter from Zu'an?

I don't recommend writing my English. Although I haven't written it yet, if the author writes it, well... It will almost be cool.

I was wondering if the author just came to write about the magic ban without understanding anything. The system of magic ban is very different from the general Western fantasy. The author just applied it without understanding anything. There are no gods in the Demonic Forbidden City, only demon gods cultivated by humans. Moreover, Kamachi and Marco never said that there is such a thing as belief in becoming a god in the Demon Forbidden City. The god the church believes in is just a symbol. Generations of magicians continue to borrow this symbol to set up their own magic, rather than obtaining it directly. The power of the church has nothing to do with the number of people who believe in it. Otherwise, who would give Japan the courage to provoke the Roman Orthodox Church? Less than 200 people vs 2 billion people, that's crazy. The strength of the church depends on the strength of its magicians. Let me give you another example. The alchemist Aureos alone defeated the most powerful 3333-member Jegoli Chorus in the Roman Orthodox Church, which is enough to prove its strength. The forbidden demon can treat the world as a plaything. There is a description in the original work: "If all the nuclear weapons of mankind were put together, they might only be able to scratch the skin of an individual who is less than one billionth of the body of the demon god who came to the world." I thought about how such a powerful demon god is only a mid-level god in the author's writing. It is really ridiculous. Furthermore, the magicians of the forbidden magic, their spells all come from the myths of various ethnic groups. Rather than thinking about the ** stuff you wrote. The Forbidden Magician is engaged in intelligence warfare. If you use the Western fantasy leather, you will really be sprayed to death by the Forbidden Original Chef.

Things have changed since Demon Slayer. What is your purpose in coming to another world? I was looking forward to it after seeing Demon Slayer. Is it fun to play a God role-playing game?

If you are looking for Ezreal, what does it have to do with me, Jialuo Qingyu?😏

I came from the last book. I hope this book won't be as casual as the previous one in accepting girls. I also hope it won't be eunuchs.

The writing style is too childish, the speed is too fast, and the description of things is unclear.

Is this a eunuch? At any rate, I ordered the book in full, and I took it.

This book is updated very slowly. I saw it a long time ago, but it was too little. I added it to the bookshelf and haven't read it. Now I came here to take a look. I haven't written many chapters after all this time.

I just don't understand how Esdeath became the heroine?

Let me tell you my thoughts on the two recent plot worlds. The protagonist is currently a mid-level god. There are not many worlds suitable for his own strength, and there is not much to see (gods compete for faith and treasures), and there are very few interesting things. Now this mode is not bad (equivalent to Huang Liang Yimeng), so there are more worlds to choose from and more tricks

Why did you suddenly stop writing? Is this the rhythm of cutting?

I didn't understand the SAO chapter. Kirito was driven away to be reincarnated, and then the protagonist took over Kirito's body? Or is the protagonist reincarnated as Kirito's younger brother? Who can explain it?

I came in after seeing Feng Fa, and then, awxl

Did any of you notice that the male protagonist in the profile was born in Zaun?

Dear author, I especially want to see what would happen if the protagonist, who is a god, goes to the world of Godslayer or Earth.