The Script Arrives

I have read Chapter 105 so far. Basically there is nothing poisonous about it, although there is nothing too exciting about it either. The protagonist is very vividly portrayed, with advantages and disadvantages. It is not a perfect image, but it makes people more accepting and more immersed. The characterization of the supporting characters is okay, there is nothing worthy of special attention (I suggest you read the book "Heavens Come", the characterization of the supporting characters is very brilliant, similar to Yuantong's method. Of course, if you feel that you don't have so much energy, or the writing power is not enough, just write the protagonist first, and leave the supporting characters alone). Although the plot is very compact, it gave me a very dragging feeling. I think it's a matter of rhythm. First of all, the second to sixth scripts are obviously five scripts, but because of the opening time and the so-called linkage, it gives me the feeling of five different parts of the same game. From this perspective, the script this time took too long. For this kind of copy-type novel, I think the length of each copy should be controlled within a reasonable range. Completing dungeon settlement rewards and improving oneself is also a very important expectation point in this type of novel. The plot is a bit long to keep people's appetites, but it's so long that it makes people uncomfortable and irritated.

Alas, it is beyond the imagination of mortals about time. At least I don't think time is what the author describes. I have read quite a few novels about time, but only a few are considered high-quality. Most of them have severe collapses. The collapses usually come from interference from the future, or are based on a dream. Each small copy in the dream is the same and then when you wake up, you finally find it is still a dream. So this book shows that image of the future that makes people unable to even have children and grandchildren. The inheritance of the past. I think this book has the potential to become a poisonous weed. Goodbye

If "The Script Arrives" is not enjoyable, it will probably dissuade most book lovers. But in fact, this book is really not that exciting. From what I have seen so far, the author is a person with ingenuity. An ordinary person with higher intelligence also has thousands of thoughts when faced with a series of things happening. Silent is such a person, who deals with things calmly, gets flustered, confused, and scared, and always solves what happens cleverly. But he has never escaped from anything. He would rather take the straight path than seek a protagonist in the song. Whether it is Landlord, the roulette game, or Sudoku, his wisdom is evident. In the new chapter, the author once again skipped the part that was supposed to be a killing spree and a super exciting plot. He still adhered to the idea of ​​silence, doing more rather than doing less, thinking about the pros and cons before making the right decision. Is it fun to write like this? Not happy! ! ! ! Looking at it, I feel like there is something missing. But it is very real. After all, he is not Long Aotian. If he can't beat him, he can't beat him. He is just an ordinary person with low strength! He imagined the storm he would face after killing Qin Chu and the chaos of the world. Even if this was just a script world, he did not want to see such a thing. The Peak Undercurrent actually has a lot of flaws, even worse than the first script "Blood Shadow". But because of the appearance of An Jing and Jiang Xiaochuan, the plot of the three of them fighting wits and playing games has raised the level of this script. And there are some holes in the script that have not been filled in. For example, at the beginning of the script, it is said that the man Jiang Hanhan on the battlefield of Huanyu is looking for something after Silence died in Huanyu. Then it was taken away by the Guan and Jiang families to prove the throne of the Lord God. What was it? It should be a very important item, but it is not mentioned at all in the following text. But since Silence has the Book of Viability, I can only mention it. After all, who knows whether Silence will return to the Peak Undercurrent script 😅 again, just like Silence entered the Weight of Time for the second time. As for the importance of time, in fact, this script was also the best written, with a closed-loop mission and an infinite loop, but it was easily solved by Silence. In the end, Zhenx's line was also very good, but at that time I felt that the script was a bit too simple, even boring. Returning to this script again, I unraveled the truth of "Revival of Spiritual Energy" step by step, used the script to reveal the settings of the U world, and even filled in some of the holes in the ghost's blood and shadow, which made me feel like letting nature take its course. It seemed that this is how the story developed, very smoothly, which was really beyond my expectation. This book is suitable for reading patiently, it will slap you in the face, it will not be exciting, but the plot development is really good. Being in the midst of conspiracies, Silence learns the truth from his own perspective. He may take detours, but he will still reach the end in the end. Unveiled step by step, silence is also constantly improving itself in this process. This is a story about ordinary people relying on their wisdom to uncover the conspiracy of the ruler. Come on, author, support all orders. A silent tribute to An Jing. I feel really unhappy about his death. He should fight with Shen Mo for a while! His death felt a bit sudden, but also felt that it should be so. This kind of thought is very conflicting! Maybe Anjing will feel empty in his heart. After all, Anjing is an excellent opponent.

Update time: 0:05, 16:00. It may not be posted regularly due to some time constraints, but it will be updated twice a day, and the two updates will guarantee 5,000+ words. It is said that a child who cannot cry has no milk to eat. Do you really want me to cry? 🔨, no one can cancel my collection! ! ! Please bring some positive energy and interact with each other. Any of your comments and recommendation votes are an encouragement to me. The main content of this book: The story of Silent and Quiet "Guan Yue" hurting each other. So the two people will be opposites. In my initial setting, I only set the characters of the two people. In some environments and events, what kind of things the two people will do will promote the development of the plot. In the u world, I set the power, level, and gave Jing Jing an advantageous background. I also dug a few holes to pave the way for future plots. Writing is not easy to write, and it is not popular. I will be criticized whether I write well or not, so I can only write what I can write as well as possible. This is why I have never signed a contract, because I don't want to be restrained and want to focus more on writing stories, but I will definitely sign a contract. This is also a responsibility to investors, but I will choose to write more free words to repay everyone's support. I wrote the last book, The Eunuch, and I also promised that I would never say sorry to anyone who reads my book, so no matter how difficult it is, I will finish writing this book. In the process of finishing this book, I also tried my best to write a good-looking story for everyone. Silent personality tags: Love to learn (erudite), love to think, weak at sports, this girl control, great at logic, little fox, stay alive. Silent Quote: If you insult me, you may live, if you insult my sister, you will die. Quiet's character tags: modeling of ear skills, ruthless heart, all for victory, development of intelligence and body (that is, immorality), jealousy, killing Silence. Silence is very immature, but in my setting, he will grow up one by one. The process of growing up is what I want to write about. To everyone who likes this book, I hope it can help us grow together. Huang Xiaoxie.

To lay a good foundation for the third script, collect data from book friends in the following format: 🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭 Name: Shen Wei. Age: 8 years old. Talent: Black Eye (left) Attributes: Wind, darkness. Cultivation school: mind flow. Weapon: Drink blood/red blood. Moves: Mind Slash·Moonlight, Mind Slash·Double Moon, Mind Slash·Dance of the Moon, Dark Walk, Flash Light (script skills). Character introduction: He lost his parents when he was young, and the one he cared about most was his brother. With Tsubasa's kind support, he embarked on the road of evolution. After being eroded by the dark pupil, he became extremely aggressive. Personality: Strong sense of self-protection, kind and strong. Comment: Under the armor, his heart is extremely sensitive and fragile, but he remembers his brother's words and tries hard to live happily. 😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊 You can design weapons, moves, talents, and attributes at will, but please conform to the corresponding genre. Script skills are rewards obtained by opening a card after completing the script. They do not need to conform to genre attributes. 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏 The genre settings are as follows: Mind flow: a genre that combines fantasy and power to create all kinds of strange things. Yuanqi flow: The perfect combination of strength and body. Although it lacks changes, it has wide practicality in close combat, high physical fitness, and strong recovery power. Balanced genre: a combination of the first two, but has not yet been fully promoted. You can also create your own genre, but you need to clearly describe its power system, focus, and weaknesses. Try not to be too perfect 😳 Everyone is welcome to watch and participate actively.

A silver alliance completely pulled this book from the edge of being sold on the street and brought it down the ranks of regular high-quality novels Congratulations to the author Congratulations to the book （*＾ワ＾*）

To be honest, the plot is very dragging, with no poisonous points and no advantages. The plot of a book like this is too slow to read. It is even more troublesome for the author to write a protagonist with a high IQ. Just like the first picture, the attributes of the protagonist are too excessive. As a high-IQ protagonist, the world has been in chaos for so long. No matter whether the protagonist has awakened or not, he will take the initiative to exercise. Even in peacetime, everyone knows the importance of the body. As a result, the protagonist is simply physically useless. Will such a protagonist have a high IQ? ? ? And a highly intelligent protagonist who doesn't even know how to use a pistol? Even if an ordinary person has never used it, at least he has an idea of ​​it! Therefore, the author's portrayal of a high-IQ protagonist is a failure. As a high-IQ person, when the world is in chaos, he can only live in a slum. He has no sense of crisis and is speechless. Even an ordinary person knows how to buy a knife for self-defense~~~

Read with wisdom. There are not many books that dare to say this. I am afraid that if you really bring wisdom, you will be sprayed with blood.

Come on 😳, I have done what a reader should do, and I can only rely on the author to do the rest. Gold will shine wherever it goes, and I will scold you bloody if you write poorly, but you have to hold on, and your health comes first. As for adding more updates, of course you have to add more updates. Pay them back slowly and in your own way 🤭

Being attracted by Baiyin Da Meng'er, I looked at him with a confused look on his face. This writing is truly profound and the author has extraordinary wisdom. I wait for mortals to retreat. Goodbye.

The books recommended by Baiyinmeng are generally not very good. Got ripped off again.

Reminder, the author is trying to write a protagonist with demonic intelligence, but the first three chapters show that the author is an ordinary person who cannot pass basic logic.

The key is that the average IQ of Qidian readers is no more than five

The book is really good, but it's a pity that I have a high IQ and am incompetent. In addition, the exchange of real names at the beginning of the script is a bit poisonous. This plot can be written at the end of the script to advance the relationship or to make others believe in a moment when I need to prove my ability. And a supporting character who is smart but doesn't have a high emotional intelligence tries to commit suicide when he comes up. It reminds me more or less of Curly Fu who exposes people's background at every turn. But Juan Fu is the protagonist, and the audience likes to see the protagonist expose the villain's background, but the supporting character exposing the protagonist's background will only make the audience disgusted. The more the exposure, the more disgusting... Really, this plot can definitely dissuade many people, such as me...

Author, I seem to remember you saying that Baiyinmeng will have 50 extra updates. I want to know how long you have to pay back this debt 🤫( ͡°ᴥ ͡° ʋ)

It can be seen that they put their heart into it, but in some places they forcefully create IQ, which is embarrassing.

Was bombed by the Silver Alliance!

I have seen some things to say about the protagonist in Chapter 33. I hope it can give the author some ideas. I also saw some complaints about poisonous points. In fact, I feel that these are acceptable. They are not very poisonous. Some people complained about the protagonist wanting to protect his sister but not doing anything. In fact, I think it is pretty good. The author has explained the settings. The background is environmental mutation and can be practiced. So the first person is a successful mutation, and then he sorted out a training plan for people to continue to improve. Then the physical fitness of the protagonist In fact, exercise is useless if there is no awakening. After all, the foundation is there. At the same time, before meeting Tsubasa, the brother and sister should have been in a wandering state. It is not difficult to imagine that after meeting Tsubasa, the brother and sister have actually obtained safety guarantee. According to the background, only one year has passed from the emergence of Wing to the second world mutation (refer to the sister who is seven years old and is now eight years old). So it is understandable for the protagonist who has just ended his wandering life and has settled down for a year without doing anything. An ordinary person can also There is no utilitarianism, and it is impossible to use Tsubasa based on the character setting of the protagonist, so there is no problem for an ordinary person to suddenly have a strong backer and become dependent without doing anything. Of course, the attribute of the sister-protecting maniac shown in the later text conflicts with this. Maybe this is the reason why others complain about it as a poisonous point (pure speculation). Assuming that in order to avoid conflict, the best solution is for the protagonist to rely on the protection of Tsubasa to participate in politics to gain social status and better protect his sister. After all, the main character is set up. The character is a waste of action and has an incredible IQ, so entering politics is more in line with the character. Of course, this is just my personal hypothesis and cannot be established, because the protagonist becomes a character who guides the current situation. The experience of the protagonist in the following article tells everyone that the protagonist is a character who is pushed forward by the current situation. Therefore, although the protagonist's inaction in that year conflicts with the attribute of the sister-nursing monster, it is consistent with the subsequent plot, so this so-called poisonous point is a matter of opinion in my opinion. Currently it is known that the protagonist is a sister-protecting maniac with a high IQ and a growing character. He cannot be a hero and is moving towards a heroic attribute. The words heard by the protagonist of the second world mutation asked him to give up the dark pupil. This voice should be the protagonist of the future. The intermittent words also revealed that he is sleeping. It should be because he spent too much time traveling through the world. Combined with the chapter of traveling through the future , the protagonist's status should belong to a hero, but there is no good result, so the future protagonist asks the current protagonist to give up the Dark Eye, just to change the future. At the same time, the so-called death should also be related to the Dark Eye, so I specially remind you, now there is a question, is the protagonist's golden finger a high IQ or another self that has not awakened? In the first ten chapters, I thought the protagonist's golden finger was a high IQ, but now I hope that the protagonist's golden finger is another self. That legendary skill can also be regarded as a golden finger, but I think it is more suitable as a trump card. Let's first talk about why I want another self to become a golden finger. According to the setting of this book, the protagonist's spirit is 97, which is equivalent to seventh level according to the strength. Wings only belong to the fifth level but are already the master of the tomb. You can imagine how strong the seventh level is, but! In addition to the wide range of knowledge, the protagonist's attribute of 97 can only allow him to remember more things. According to the chapter on the Fire King, spells exist, and the attribute of 97 is completely that of the Master. Moreover, the protagonist's attribute of 97, when he meets Guan Yue, Jiang Xiaochuan can compete with him equally well. Are their attributes also 90+? Obviously it is impossible. If Goldfinger is a person with high IQ, the author can consider combining attributes with practice. Whether it is innovation or reform, it is the direction, and this book can be considered as an infinite flow. So in the struggle for high IQ, I only saw a fight between two people. If you feel that the scene is a bit too narrow and other people have reduced it to a background, the author can consider the breakdown and layout in a script other than decryption. A wise man will never have a bad overall view. If he digs holes in a script, takes advantage of the situation, and layouts like this, will it better reflect the overall situation? Then the protagonist's current enemies are Guan, Jiang, and a guy named Gu. Their status is too powerful. It feels too far-fetched for the current protagonist to encounter such a villain. Since it is an IQ novel, it should be easy to find out the future protagonist's growth experience and place of origin when Guan and Jiang travel to the future. From the author's description of the two villains, they cannot fail to think of this. Moreover, the future protagonist is also an enemy of Guan and Jiang, who knows you best. He is your opponent. So in the world of the current protagonist, the power of the Protagonist is so powerful. It is not difficult to find the protagonist in reality. His real name has been leaked. I have not read the following chapters. According to this ending, this time the script is closed. Jiang, the two must die, otherwise the protagonist cannot be safe and sound at the end of the script. Assuming that the two people do not die, the protagonist can only live in exile and remain anonymous, otherwise it will be a big poisonous point, this huge logical error. Now there is another foreshadowing. The protagonist in the future did not really die, and the protagonist went to the future long after his death. Can it be understood that this is a future where change has failed? There are many refutations about time, such as the banana peel theory and a bunch of theories about time. Since it is a novel, it is understandable to put down some common sense, but at the same time, I also hope that since the author is writing related things, can he not only put down some common sense, but also make better use of some common sense, so that it will be more exciting? I don't know either. Based on the above points, I hope that the protagonist has another golden finger, and I feel like I can let go of the high IQ thing. The author's writing style is quite good, and the plot and settings are being improved. There are so many pitfalls that have been buried so far. If I can add more in the future, I feel that this book will have a lot of potential. Good luck, author!

Can't you write the table of contents well if it's so brain-burning? , It made me want to jump back and forth to see what I would get after the return, but when I opened the box, I also found 3 waste items... I was really speechless~ I quit!

Born to be a dragon, the dust will be red for eternity. I haven't met the master emperor yet, but I am the only one who controls the void.

Write slowly. You can try to read the previous ones yourself and make some modifications.

In fact, I think it's pretty good. It has some shortcomings, but it feels like it's well-thought-out. However, there are really few people watching it.

29, 30 Inexplicably, his sister went crazy with murder and broke through to the fifth level. The writing was a lot of mess and I couldn't understand it at all.

Come and see, it's actually finished. .

The first script is watery at the beginning... Can it be considered a full-fledged character? If you don't like it, skip to watch 😄

After reading the first few chapters, I can only say that literary youth is a disease that needs to be cured

There are only three chapters left to order. Come on.

Yo, did I feed this book to death? I haven't had time to slaughter it yet, can I watch it?

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