Night Patrol: Police and Doctor

I don't know anything else, but this introduction is absolutely top-notch (doge)

Where is Shennong? What were the results of the poison test? Speed ​​reporting. 😐😐

Not to mention other things, the introduction is great.

I am a medical dog. I cannot comment on the overall quality of the book because I only read less than two chapters and stopped reading. The first two chapters are full of descriptions of medical terms and treatment methods and their details. However, in my opinion, it is more like the content that was cobbled together after consulting the information. It is not professional, but it will make people outside the profession look very high-level. But people in the profession look really miserable. Just a small personal opinion, don't comment if you don't like it. The following content may be very exciting. After all, I have already achieved good results. I still hope that the author will write more about what he is good at, and it is better to skip over what he is not good at.

Introduction: I'm a good guy, I'm a good guy The author in the book review section hacks himself, I'm a good guy, too

When I wrote this introduction, I just felt like shit 😂

Although the combination of police and doctors is old-fashioned, the system exchange is novel. After reading Chapter 35, tell me your current views. 1. Before Chapter 16 (or thereabouts), I was writing about surgery. There are many professional terms. The author is either engaged in medicine or has studied it carefully. Writing down the detailed medical knowledge of this kind of surgery can highlight the professionalism of the book, but most people don't understand it. The author spends a lot of time explaining medical knowledge, which is actually not very good. Just write a little bit. After all, this is a novel, and the plot still ranks first. 2. The writing style is lacking. I was writing about surgery earlier, which occupied a lot of medical knowledge. It was difficult to see or clearly feel the author's narrative description level, but when writing about the investigation, I could clearly feel the deficiency. First, the process of solving the case is written like a running account, and the language is somewhat straightforward and plain. For example, Jingye got ideas from the group and told Bai Qi, "After hearing this, Bai Qi was very excited: "That's great! Because of your judgment, you bought us a lot of time!" " Bai Qi said happily and turned to Bai Yixuan, "Go and investigate all the information about this great year. Soon, Bai Yixuan brought the information. " These words felt a bit colloquial and unremarkable The second thing is that the most important thing in the novel is that there is a conflict. Every time a problem is raised in the detective group, everyone solves it immediately and flatters the male protagonist. Not to mention that these are celebrities in the reasoning world. These behaviors are all OOC. This plot always appears and makes it seem that only the boss is responsible for solving the case, which is still boring. The third reason may be that the author likes certain words too much and always uses them poorly. For example, "report" appears several times in more than 20 chapters. Moreover, the two male protagonists are in a cooperative relationship. Is "report" inappropriate? But I think the part about the activities of criminals is very good. I think the writing style is also very good when writing stories in plot mode. Maybe the author paid too much attention to the system when writing the protagonist and ignored the protagonist's character activities. But in fact, the system is a cheat, but the protagonist is the center. 3. When I saw the previous surgery part, I thought it was a two-male protagonist. When writing about medicine, I mainly describe Jing Ye, and when writing about solving crimes, I mainly describe Bai Qi. Because of the system exchange, there will be some small plots between them getting along, and I think this setting is quite interesting. But when I saw the plot of solving the case, I found that only Jing Ye was written, and Bai Qi was only responsible for asking people to check the information. Maybe the author originally only wanted Jing Ye to be the male protagonist, and Bai Qi was just a supporting role, but this may not be so attractive. I think it is very good to write two male protagonists in this setting. No matter what kind of novel it is, the dialogue and exchange between the main and supporting characters or the two protagonists are very important in order to better reflect the character's personality. If you only describe one character, it will be too thin. 4. There may be something wrong with Baiqi Settings. As a captain of the police force, he must be capable. But in the first case, at least until Chapter 28, I couldn't see his excellence at all. When you encounter a case, you go to Jingye, and when you encounter difficulties, you go to Jingye. Why, you don't think anymore when you have a system? He said Zhao was the murderer, so you believed him? Even if you know he is right, at least think about it for yourself. Why do you believe and accept it so easily? People know the symptoms detected by your system, and they want to test them themselves. Why do you just go with the flow? This is really a big failure! The above is not enough, I hope the author can improve it. The setting of system exchange is really good. I still like it very much, but I hope the plot in the middle can be enriched. To be honest, if you write about the back-and-forth between prisoners and hijackers, or stories in plot mode, it can be described regardless of the language, environment, and action descriptions. Why do you pull your hips as soon as you get to the protagonist? Don't be limited by the cheating finger of the system You can't say that the whole book is like this without reading the rest. I believe that the author gets better and better as he writes, and I hope it will get better and better in the future!

，…！ Looking forward to more great works in the future

Is the reason for the million-dollar reward the introduction? 😄😄😄

I really like the dual male protagonists! Come on↖(^ω^)↗Come on↖(^ω^)↗