The Sequelae of Cultivating Immortality

I just read three chapters and I still feel like I don't know what to say. The writing style is not bad, at least it can make people understand what it is talking about, and the narrative is relatively smooth. There is only one typo in three chapters, so the viewing experience is still relatively good. The title and introduction are quite attractive, but compared to the title and the beginning of the introduction, they are a bit too mediocre. The background of the protagonist is explained in the first chapter, the aura suddenly revives in the second chapter, and then the protagonist and the dog fight each other in the third chapter. In fact, the character development of the protagonist is quite interesting. After the aura is revived, the first thing that comes to mind is his own interests, which immediately makes the character of the protagonist appear three-dimensional. This is also proved by the conflict with the dog due to a small friction. But this may be a poisonous point for some people. Although human nature is like this, some people don't want to see such a protagonist, and it would be too stupid to have a conflict with a dog later. The author said that he wanted to show that the resurgence of spiritual energy also had an impact on animals, but it wouldn't lower the protagonist's character to write such a plot, right? Even if you write a cliché plot like the protagonist passing by and seeing a child being attacked by a dog and then stepping forward to rescue it, it would be better to have more senses than it is now. Generally speaking, the performance of the first three chapters is relatively mediocre, but the plot is still relatively smooth. By the way, when I read the introduction, it seemed like it was going to be a comedy and light-hearted flow, but after I clicked on it, I found that it had turned into a serious plot flow. The name, introduction, and content of the main text are different and can easily impact readers.

Damn it, I always thought I was playing alone, but when I woke up, I actually received a 500-coin reward from book friend 7342. Then why does Mao only have two chapter recommendation votes from himself every day? Thank you. This is the first time in my life. I feel a little emotional, but the reward should be done according to my ability. If I can keep it to buy more ice cream for myself in the summer, the author will be very happy... So, the reward is not mandatory, and the vote can be regarded as some organic fertilizer. Thanks again to the garbled book friends (just remember the 7342 at the end)...

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Come on, it's well written, it's not enough to read.

I don't know what other people think, but I quite like this kind of food, it's tasty and filling. Collect.

The author is very diligent, so I'll give you the vote today.

I've read about ten chapters to leave a mark. The first few chapters are quite interesting, but some places are too tough. . . There is improvement in the back than in the front, keep working hard. Then this is mainly daily life, is there a main line? If there is a main line, it feels a little slow to progress.

Passing by, why does this book only have 10 fans? Why are there so few subscriptions? Isn't it ugly?