I May Be a Bit Strong

Good introduction, great content. Only the title of the book is because I have read several books with similar names but the content is not very good, so I personally feel it is a bit awkward.

It's been so long and no one has stepped on me in the fan list 😡

It's so vicious in the back, it's pretty awesome to persuade him to retreat based on his strength. I made a Wahuang to deal with myself, so I laughed. Maybe it's a setting problem. The protagonist can even steal a little bit of the way of heaven, but the one-ninth human emperor's seal affects the rules of the way of heaven, thus restricting the protagonist. Obviously, there are already ancient rules to pave the way. You said, if the Human Emperor's Seal was really that awesome, in the prehistoric setting, the human race would not always be a supporting role in the early and middle stages. And even if the Human Emperor's Seal has this ability, the enemy only needs one-ninth to agree with it, but the protagonist only has about three-ninths to agree with it, oh, but this three-ninths is not a real thing. There is no limit to that. Well! It's so fucking uncomfortable. It's so uncomfortable, 🐴✈️😁

Hello dear readers, "In the fantasy world, those who do not get married are gods." (˶‾᷄ ⁻̫ ‾᷅˵)? ? ? I am the little brother who has been trampled by thousands of people and has a bruised nose and face... Zhuge's little brother. Book title: "I may be a bit strong" Author: Jiang Tian Liao Kuo Commentator: Actually, my name is "Sheep Liangliang". (This book is (╯‵□′)╯┻━┻) First impression: What attracts me to this book is the recently popular theme "Killing Points and Adding Points of Martial Arts Secrets". Although However, after reading the introduction, I saw that I don't like the Zhutianliu world, but the world name on the introduction is actually quite interesting. This is completely the rhythm of fighting monsters and upgrading. So overall, I'm quite curious, and the author's avatar is actually used by me before. (Hilarious, hahahaha) In terms of writing style, it seems to be a relatively invincible story, and the description style should also bring daily interest. Introduction: [Ding! The real world has been successfully switched to the martial arts world, I wish you a happy life. His body ached, and writer Li He, who was following the Taoist Master doing the "Eight Parts of Vajra Kung Fu" in the video, was suddenly startled. Just when he was wondering whether he was hallucinating, a hot current rose up in his Dantian...  ...  [Ding! The world of martial arts has been successfully switched to the world of killing. I wish you a happy life. Li He stared blankly at the small ball of light floating on the body of the dying old hen in front of him. Ding, the killing value is +1. > Ding, get the skill fragment "Mind's Eye". ... [Ding! The killing world has been successfully switched to the monster world. I wish you a happy life.] Li He retracted his fist and looked at it apologetically. What should I do if this level 100 world-destroying dragon accidentally kills the ultimate BOSS... ... Story background: modern city (doomsday evolution) Story style: invincible + relaxed. Understatement. Brief review: My name is Li He, a newbie with extraordinary talent? On the day the story begins, a voice comes from heaven and earth, and the world begins to change dramatically. As the author of online articles, I am ahead of the starting line. Maybe it is because of my talent~ I have become a leader in this world, and I have met them on the way... ... Together they establish the order and rules of the doomsday to protect the world. But! The doomsday does not stop here! From the world of heroes to the killing world, to the world of killing monsters now... The game of doomsday will never stop. Although I lead the world, this game! Who is the master of the play? Summary of advantages: 1. The writing style is invincible and unrestrained. In the beginning, the protagonist enters the world's cultivation system with his own talent and ideas. Coupled with the problem of talent, he is destined to lead the whole world and become the invincible one. This posture and the setting of the protagonist also add a relaxed and daily style to the writing style. So the writing style is quite good and relaxed. Everyday invincible writing, with a slight smile. 2. The description of the character: Also because of the character problem, the protagonist shows a strange side when it comes to girls. Rushing. This attitude adds an interesting aspect to the book's daily life and the friction between the supporting characters and the heroine. It's very good. What I still remember vividly is the scene in the beginning where the heroine is beaten when she punches her. . 3. Substitution of themes and nouns: In terms of subject matter, I finally saw the one-punch superman theme that I wanted to see, and the friction was very surprising. In terms of substituting the nouns, the phrase "there are no heroes in this world" was very amazing, and some classical Chinese texts based on fairy tales were also used to increase the sense of fairy. (Of course you will be very emotional and excited. You need to understand classical Chinese (/ω＼)... I am a bad student, so I took a peek at this chapter. ) The shortcoming is the sense of substitution. Sometimes the sense of substitution is too strong. Footage is also a problem! This book can be said to be perfect in shaping the plot of the anime "One Punch Man". The protagonist also looks very bald at some points, and with the substitution of supporting characters, it can be said to be a fanfic. In terms of this strong sense of substitution, if some things are added, it will look quite uncomfortable. For example, the bald head should not be famous or have a family, and it has always been relaxed and understated. Under the premise of this kind of shaping, it feels that adding something will become a burden. But regarding this issue, after seeing it, I feel that it is a film and television animation, and the needs of the Internet are different. Although there was a section in the early stage that was quite uncomfortable to watch, it doesn't matter as you read on. The main character remains the same╮(￣▽￣"")╭ The direction of the story: As for the direction of the story, the world is always changing. Strengthening various things. But it is currently 230,000 words, and I have experienced three worlds. I think I will change the map here, which is the Ascension mentioned in the article. The opener! Break the game and become the carefree boy. Recommended audience: In terms of writing style, it is recommended to readers who like to read invincible articles and like the one-shot style and invincible but ordinary life Theme. In terms of the immortal version of the "One Punch Man" world, game skills and equipment are obtained to fight monsters (currently) Final summary: After reading it, it is as I guessed at first, it is an invincible article, easy to use for daily life. R>But there is something that surprises me! It is based on Zhu Tianwen's guess. Originally, I guessed that it would be like some Zhu Tianwen I had seen, and then keep changing maps and upgrading. Weird...╮(￣▽￣"")╭There is no emotional continuation. But in terms of changing the map, this book is just about reviving spiritual energy. I like this method of changing the map very much. It adds novelty to the story and does not abandon the emotional characters in the map change. Then in terms of subject matter, the setting of the world of "One Punch Man" is integrated into the main theme, and the background story is changed to Xianxia to increase the sense of substitution. Then some game elements are added to the later world to increase the diversity of the story itself. So combine it with this book. I still highly recommend the story of Invincible. The exciting words, the frivolous life, and the way to believe in oneself. Finally, let's have a BGM! The last episode of Baldhead is over! Everyone can do it, but they lack the courage to face invincibility.

I only believe that rewards can make authors work harder🤓🤓🤓

To put it bluntly, in terms of the plot of the first few dozen pictures, the author may have just started the book and has not found the rhythm of the book. There are quite a few flaws in character creation and insufficient foreshadowing, but the problem is not a big one (for a book of a certain age) and the plot becomes very smooth in the middle. More (to the latest chapter) later, the pace may be a little faster, but it is still getting better and it is still very comfortable to watch The summary is, take a look at the front, look at the middle for a while, and the back, mmp has not been "updated" (🐶Save your life)

The two things I like most about this book so far 1. The characterization of some supporting characters is also very careful. If I hadn't been in a hurry, I would have been more impressed by many of the supporting characters, and this book would have a greater positive significance for me 2. Some revelations about mythology and macroscopic fantasy. For me personally, it added some imagination to things in a given direction (the expression is still a bit biased), which is similar to an increase in experience or experience. In short, it is still profitable. There are some areas that need to be strengthened in the content of the book, but they are meaningless to me, so I won't point them out. It's enough to make some money from reading.

Very good, come on. Still pay attention to your health and do what you can. Keep it

There are a lot of references in the first 30 chapters that I would like to vomit, and it can no longer be said to be a reference, but how can I put it, the author has grown up very quickly, and I even wonder if someone else secretly wrote it. The first 30 chapters are really bad, but the rest are really wonderful.

I have read more than 30 chapters, and the content is quite interesting, but the writing level is not very good and it looks uncomfortable.

One day when the author was traveling, he passed by a stone tablet and found words on the back! I found out that it was left by a Taoist priest 200 years ago. I saw it said: Update as soon as possible, otherwise there may be trouble!!!

The author took a look and found that many of the previous chapters had been removed. After reading it for a long time, I thought that the content and the title did not match, and they were all later chapters. It's all chargeable…

The deliberate setting at the beginning of this book is indeed a bit uncomfortable. But since the protagonist Li He came to the surface in chapters 40 and 50, the rhythm has gotten better and better, and the author's writing has become smoother and bolder, creating his own style. Actually, at the beginning, I just wanted to see how long this "fake hero" could keep pretending, and what the final outcome would be. Fortunately, I persisted, otherwise I would really have missed a good book! I also saw people saying that we still need heroes in this age. In fact, the hero of this book is not a hero in the so-called sense, but more like a hope for mankind. A ray of light breaks through the darkness and despair. Finally, I hope you will be more patient when reading the first thirty chapters. Later, you will have the urge to lock the author in a dark room with a knife on his neck and let him code.

I think these two characters are well created. I saw a lot of people criticizing these two characters in this chapter. I really feel that they are brainless. Even if the king is a chuunibyou, he is also a chuunibyou who is willing to protect people and is willing to sacrifice. How many of those disgusting people can do that? To give you strength, I'm afraid I wouldn't have gone out on the streets that night and shouted, "My fate is up to me, not God," and "Heaven and earth are unkind, treating all things as stupid dogs," and then go around burning, killing, and looting, and euphemistically calling it "the strong are respected." The king got the 5,000 points from the protagonist. First, the protagonist didn't want it, and then he filled in the 5,000 points before buying Yi Jing Jin for the protagonist. He didn't know that the protagonist had already been to Shaolin, but he did so, and in order to protect innocent people, he went to fight even though he knew he would die. The bigger idea of ​​sending a message to the protagonist was to delay time and let the protagonist come back to deal with the martial arts idiot. How many people can do this kind of behavior? And in the early days of the disaster, there were murderers everywhere and people were panicked. Isn't it right to put together a banner to reassure the public? Don't talk about it, there are still S-class people, the sky is high and the emperor is far away, no matter how powerful it is, what's the point of not being around? Moreover, he never wanted to monopolize this honor, and the protagonist was unwilling to come forward. King had already passed out when fighting the martial arts idiot, but he still held back forcefully. It was the protagonist who controlled King's body to receive this honor. From the beginning to the end, the protagonist doesn't care, and King also feels that he deserves it, and there are only some keyboards in self-orgasm. And a person who is so selfless and on the verge of death twice still wants to train himself desperately in order to protect innocent people, what else do he want? There is also the heroine. The heroine is the kind of person who enters the protagonist's life silently and cultivates feelings step by step. She said that she wants points for the protagonist, which is more like a joke. She also identifies the protagonist from the beginning to the end without any behavior or mentality of a green tea bitch. The "mentality" is very important. She also protects the protagonist outside and will not be shy about her own attitude. It's unclear, she just wants to be with the protagonist and won't be ambiguous with other people (a goddess-level existence, if she wants to be ambiguous, she only needs to express her attitude a little, and a lot of people are waiting, but she doesn't, and directly cuts off everyone's thoughts). At the class meeting, the other party directly attacked the protagonist because he looked down on the protagonist. She bought clothes for the protagonist without any nonsense, and she usually doesn't cause any trouble to the protagonist. And if you want the protagonist points to buy Yi Jing Jin together, you only mentioned it as a joke. Do you really think that others are as brainless as you? And the protagonist is not portrayed as a dog-licker. It is said that the heroine was attracted by the strong character of the protagonist. Sorry, the heroine was much stronger than the protagonist at the beginning. Maybe it was because the protagonist knew how to practice martial arts better. Later, her mentality slowly changed. After going to Shaolin to take Yi Jing Jin, she was completely defeated. She just didn't say it, but it can be seen in daily interactions. Moreover, life is nothing but daily necessities. Working together step by step is a real marriage. It's not the kind of book that you want to read where the protagonist's eyes flash and the woman becomes ecstatic on the spot. A heroine who sacrifices herself for others and protects innocent civilians (including a bunch of keyboards) at all costs, a heroine who is relatively realistic, neither a bitch nor a green tea, more careful, and able to protect the protagonist. Before going to the class reunion, she spent a lot of money to buy a set of clothes for the protagonist. When the protagonist's sister came, she knew that something was wrong, so she did not tell her face to face, but discussed it with the protagonist in private. Is this kind of heroine called poisonous? Do you have to make trouble for the protagonist, do this and that at all times, and have an ambiguous relationship with other men to avoid being poisonous? Or do you want to be the kind of RBQ who is so smart that he will die when he sees the protagonist, who doesn't care about anything and becomes the protagonist without asking any questions? At least I think the descriptions of these two characters are good. They are not mindless, nor are they bad just because they are individuals. The heroes are all seeking petty profits all day long and trying every means to harm the protagonist. I really can't understand those who say it's poisonous and disgusting, those who like to read selectively and ignore it, and those who spray it before they finish watching it. It's really amazing!

I don't quite understand the early rhythm. Strength = Points = Resources. Then you keep one hand during the test? Saving one hand means saving one's hand in terms of hard power. It's just like other students who have special methods for solving certain types of questions, but others never save one's hand during exams. They only save one's hand in the opening test. How many years ago was this routine? Is there really such a person? I don't quite believe it.

To sum up objectively, the first 50 or so chapters of this book do have a lot of problems, both in terms of rhythm and detail processing. However, after the 50 or 60 chapters, the style of the book suddenly changes, the plot begins to become smoother, and the logic and sense of satisfaction suddenly improve a lot. It feels like the author has a system, and then Then I suddenly made a few clicks on my writing ability, and my ability improved overnight... Emmm, coupled with the author's already good writing style, the plot suddenly became exciting. Generally speaking, for readers who like plot-based novels, but have been persuaded to give up, I can only say that it is really a pity.

Why can I buy the Yi Jin Jing from Shaolin Temple online, and it's mailed from Shaolin? Tell me what's going on in this world?

Is there a plot about pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger? What are you watching? The test is just to try out what it's like to have no internal strength. Why do you have to understand that pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger? How strong you are is felt by the protagonist in fighting. He doesn't know how awesome he is. Why do you have to say it so that everyone knows that you are so strong? Just let nature take its course.

The writing is very to my liking, and the three views are very correct.

So Hou Yi destroyed nine controllable nuclear fusion reactors when he shot the sun?

What the hell have you been writing lately? Is Invincible written as a conspiracy? Nausea

It's strange, why are a group of trumpets saying that the writing is not good? , I would like to ask you to tell me that you are suffering from inflammation first, and no matter what the book is, some people will find it unpalatable or some of the content will be disgusting, but even if a dish is eaten by 100 people, about half of them will find it unpalatable, let alone a book. It is difficult to agree with others. Anyway, I feel that the writing is okay. I hope the author will not be influenced by others, and can the plot not be too delayed...

It was okay in the beginning, but when I started to see the game world, it wasn't much to look at. Moreover, this girl-controlled protagonist made me feel chills when I saw him, so he arranged for his sister to fall in love with someone, and the protagonist was sulking. This kind of plot should be uncomfortable for readers who are female fans, and disgusting for readers who are not female fans.

The author has no idea about the number of people. Why don't you go find an ant nest on the roadside and kill 3,000 ants to see what 3,000 lives are like? He went on a rampage to commit crimes and killed more than 3,000 people. It's outrageous.

I've caught up with the update. Except for some problems with the character creation in the early stage (which came back later), the other plots are pretty good. Keep up the good work. Also, on QQ Reading, can authors receive subscriptions? Are they fully subscribed?

In the first few chapters, the heroine's appearance was too embarrassing. A classmate of the opposite sex whom I haven't seen for many years We chatted for a while. The male protagonist's attitude when selling books was indifferent if not ruthless. Why is this girl so good at licking? In the end, she stayed at the boy's house. Then when I saw the introduction, she was still the female protagonist.

Don't worry, keep writing. As long as it doesn't collapse, I bet your book will get better and better. Now that the writing is good, there are very few novels with self-consistent logic, let alone the same level of invincible novels. Don't worry, it's normal for seedlings to be less exposed. Old bookworms who have the habit of fully ordering usually won't read it until it is on the shelf. I read this book very comfortably. The original invincible novel with this feeling is still a small world. Ah, by the way, the protagonist now feels like he is sitting in front of the stage... Anyway, come on! I'm optimistic about you!

I'm going to collapse after writing this. I saw it was a mess and all kinds of unreasonable. The title of Human Emperor can be used as soon as it is obtained without the consent of the people. The rest of it is just to create conspiracy theories just for the sake of writing. It is extremely poisonous.

Personal opinion, it's quite beautiful and has a positive outlook 🙂

I am also a member of the full subscription. Can the author give me some advice?😭 No matter how support it