Demon Hunter's Bizarre Adventure

The author, I want to say a few words! ! ! 1. According to your statement, the protagonist's memory has been modified. So if an ordinary otaku meets a character in an anime he likes, would he not like it? Moreover, at the beginning of the plot, Neil did not appear, so it is completely possible to accept the Lolita God, because the protagonist is not bad, has strength and handsomeness, which is incomparable with those harem Neil. So why should we have a female protagonist? Is it because the protagonist doesn't know if she can come back? Well, it doesn't matter if you don't accept it, but if you go to Neil, it will be poisonous. Maybe you think you need to give the Loli God a support, but you give away connections first and then women. Who the hell is the male protagonist? Who is Nero? Is Neil his father? Even my own father is not so proud! 2. Regarding the female protagonist, according to you, the protagonist has always been single in the early stage and gave up to girls. Then what kind of two-dimensional fan fiction is this? He was just a wage earner who used to be spectators and helped the male protagonist pick up girls! Moreover, there is no shortage of tragic female supporting characters in anime. The protagonist is an otaku. Generally speaking, if you have the strength, you will definitely change it. What about the change? If you continue to give in to your daughter just because you don't know if she will come back, then forget it! Maybe you will say that it is just a change, and the anime male protagonist will not accept it, but ah, distant relatives are not as good as close neighbors. Animation male protagonists are generally gentle and kind, so they will definitely take care of them, back and forth, haha, needless to say. Or should I wait for a while before the system can travel to the previous world, and I'm looking for the heroine. It's better to use love as the driving force, obtain tiles, and complete the system. After all, his memory has been modified. If he has no motivation, how can he become stronger quickly? Just rely on the phrase "I need more power"? 3. Maybe the author thinks that the original partner is very good, but you have to understand that in this book, Nero is the protagonist, and they are just supporting roles. Moreover, most of the love between male and female protagonists is accidental. They are strangers. Just like if you dream that the person you like will marry someone else in the future, will you give up on her now and become a wingman? Of course, if it's like Kurogiri Mikiya and Shiki-nee, then it makes sense for the protagonist to be a wingman, because the love between them is really sincere. Most of the love between male and female protagonists is caused by accidents. Just like Kirito and Asuna, if it wasn't Sao, if it wasn't the male protagonist who teamed up with Asuna, it would have been fine if they had been replaced by a capable person! That's why I say that the so-called official pairing is because they are the protagonists of the anime. However, this is your novel, and you are the one who decides the official pairing! 4. I also hope that the author will stop being stupid. According to your progress, it will feel like writing a world! It doesn't matter if it's free now. If it's not available on the shelves in the future, who is willing to spend such unnecessary money? What everyone wants is quality! Of course, if you are a human typewriter, the kind who updates thousands of words a day, I will pretend that I didn't say it, but it is obvious that you are not, so you know, hum! 5. If the author really doesn't want to break up the official match, please keep a distance from the heroine. This kind of ambiguity and then giving it away is really unacceptable. Or simply, let the protagonist have no opportunity to take advantage of it and let the original male protagonist meet the heroine first, which completely breaks the readers' minds. Who makes us like the heroine? Reading a novel will make you feel like you are the protagonist, which is really uncomfortable and makes you want to cry 😭. 6. Female supporting characters who are not heroines should try to reduce their roles as much as possible. A loli god who is not a heroine has nearly a hundred chapters of scenes. Readers will think that she is a heroine. As a result, you have to give it to the original male protagonist as a harem. Isn't this very happy? I don't understand a bit. From this point of view, the author wants to reduce the changes to the original plot. But if the fandom doesn't change the script, it's better to follow it. At least if you follow it, you will feel like you are the protagonist. In that case, why come to read the novel? Isn't it obvious? Because the novel will lead the plot to a happy ending, but you are making people feel uncomfortable like this. It is just like the "Supporting Character Survival Diary". It is just a supporting character, and all the benefits go to the original male protagonist. It is really uncomfortable (╯╰). 7. According to me, you can let the system give the protagonist a hope. It has been broken into pieces, and you can collect the fragments to restore the function. In this way, I think there will be no such plot of giving in to a girl! After all, according to your description, I still prefer lolita gods! I hope the author can read my comments. The recent plot is really uncomfortable. Some people here may want to complain that I think women are crazy, but when I think of the two-dimensional animation, the most impressive thing is of course the various beautiful and moving heroines. I want to ask everyone here, if you were in the same situation as the protagonist, would you let the woman, or build a big crystal palace, there is something between AC and AC in your mind, ok. Isn't this like first love? Although you know that your love may not last forever, you just want to love each other and are willing to fight together, don't you? Or, just because you don't have the ability now, you choose to let go, but come on, that kind of person is a natural spare tire. Of course, it is possible that he loves her too much, but I can't agree with it. I still hope that the author can let the protagonist have a bond and someone to protect, instead of blindly striving for a goal that I don't know whether it can be achieved. After all, many people only look at the present! Traveling through time and resurrecting everyone is too big a goal! It can't even reach the strongest combat power in Devil May Cry. If an ordinary person says he wants to make a hundred thousand, people may encourage him, but if he says he wants to make a billion, people next to him will just think he is a fool. I hope the author can set more small goals! Also, as expected, I still like Loli God. Please change the map quickly. It's too uncomfortable to watch. I hope the author can read and accept some of my comments, thank you very much!

Now that it has been tied, I have a few refutations of the comment section and suggestions for the author. As for the plot, I think the setting is good. DMC has a wide audience and is really handsome. The author's description of the protagonist is also very consistent with the character of a person who can work hard to achieve miracles. The protagonist's personality is also good. In the first chapter-adults know that they can't choose anything. The complaints let me know that this book should not be a waste house novel. The author's thoughts are relatively mature. Especially the protagonist's speech on relationships later made me fall into the trap. Love should be companionship and tranquility. Why do so many authors write about harems? In the past, I always thought that they were real-life wives who did not hold back, but later I discovered that most of the people who like these novels are under the age of 23. Look at the various discussions about "giving away girls" and "accepting girls" in the comment area, haha, man. The protagonist comes to this world and will not stay long. At this time, he is looking for a heroine and the protagonist has different views. He has a mentality of taking advantage of Hetias from the beginning. Moreover, he is looking for Belle to accompany the Loli goddess after he leaves. Can it be said that he feels guilty in his heart? This is not a gift girl! What is your mentality when it comes to giving away girls? What do you think of women? One time when I had a dinner at home, my mother told my sister that marriage is the most important thing in a woman's life (my sister is working in Changsha). I exploded on the spot. I said, "Sister, don't listen to her. You should have your own career and live like a woman like Qiu Jin. A real woman should not become Mrs. So and so, but Ms. So and Mr. So and so. There are many men in China, and there will be 30 million men for you to choose from in the future." Looking at your article, the author, you are the last person to compromise with this kind of thinking. As for the content, the world written by the author now seems to have various characters that are in line with the original work (key point). However, this is a so-called harem drama. The YY atmosphere in it is contrary to the protagonist you portray, so I suggest that the author pay attention to the choice of the world in the future. In addition, there are many reactions to the author Shui. First of all, the definition of Shui Wen as I understand it is meaningless description, which leads to repetitive and redundant narratives in the article, making the transition of scene descriptions stiff. After reading it now, I found that the author still There is a certain level of skill, such as the two-way description techniques and transitions in Chapter 44, as well as the details of the dragon's tail. The author's writing is good, but the author's description of the environment is too weak, such as the street description in Chapter 5 (a bit like a section of Notre Dame de Paris). ) Is like a blunt expansion after it was originally written. The two sentences are separated into one paragraph. It should be better to merge the remaining two paragraphs. Also, the description of the transition in Chapter 38 is too bloated. The number of words is okay now, but I hope the author can streamline it after entering V. The above comments are personal opinions and are only suggestions. The author please don't follow the readers, that will be really painful. Go your own way, come on.

To be honest, I still like the Crimson Queen, adding an engine system to the sword, what a stupid design, but for Nero of the Spartan family, the combination of power and violence, who can use this weapon except the Spartan family, no matter how strong you are, the three red engines will destroy the world!

Emmmm, the JOJO chapter is really not interesting enough. No matter in terms of rhythm, plot, or even stand-in design, it feels too far-fetched. It's as if someone else is writing it. Original characters are not bad, but it feels like a forced B-level. I don't know why the author wants to run into the world of JOJO, but I feel that it is at odds with Nero's character.

The fifth part of JOJO has just finished, and I unexpectedly found this book. Sure enough, stand-ins are attracted to each other 😏

Some suggestions for the author: don't just focus on some Chinese comics or movies interspersed with Japanese comics. You can also engage in games such as Honkai Impact III Arknights, League of Legends, Gunslinger, and DNF. These are worlds with relatively complete background stories and worldviews that are useful for improving the protagonist's strength.

I haven't read it yet, but I'm looking forward to it. The subject matter is very attractive to me. Also, does the protagonist know how to gel his hands?

Today's supplementary episode, that sun god is so rampant, the author should update it quickly, slap him in the face 🙂

Reading... Well, I feel good. The author can go to the book recommendation circle and recommend it himself.

Thoughts after reading Chapter 42: 1. The author's writing style cannot be said to be extremely bad, but it's not much better. It's on par with most of the authors from the days of Fighting to Break the Sky. Please try to omit some unnecessary explanations and dialogues that make people feel awkward upon hearing them. After all, a paragraph is okay in Japanese, but in Mandarin it feels a bit retarded and can't match gentleness. (This is why I always like to call Japan a country with chuunibyou) 2. The free chapters don't matter, but the paid chapters will not be justified if a large amount of water is poured into it. Don't tell me whether you want to read it or not, or that the author has difficulty and doesn't have time to improve. Since you earn this money, you must present your best to readers. This is the most basic professional ethics. 3. I like the "Devil May Cry" series very much. I have played every one of it (except for the Gaiden DMC) and have played through at least 5 games. I can barely be considered a hardcore player. Although many years have passed and the technical techniques and clearance strategies have long disappeared from my mind, I still think it is the best. I will not allow anyone to leave a stain on my best memory. That's all, since we had a wonderful encounter at the starting point platform, we also hope to have a happy ending. I wish the author's writing skills will keep improving, and I wish this book will become a god! Herewith, yours truly!

Spartan family motto: 1. Before the battle begins, you must stab yourself with a knife to show friendship. 2. When you obtain new props, you must perform them in public for the audience to see. 3. It doesn't matter whether the sword skill does high damage or not, but it must be gorgeous! Those who do not meet the requirements above 4 will be kicked out of the house.

To be honest, the reputation of the company is not very high. The reputation of the land bug is just that, and the power system is just average. The author can end it like this and drop the land bug. Because JOJO and Devil May Cry are already pretty hardcore. The author of 2333 definitely hopes that the audience of readers will be wider Of course, it is better to go to which world is famous in the world. Niche is good, people who like it like it very much, but there will be far fewer people watching it, so it is recommended to go to which niche game world and anime world readers should wake up. Of course, the risk will also increase. After all, these anime have many fans, and the heroine or the plot direction will be a headache. But obviously the advantages outweigh the disadvantages. People who don't know about the niche world in the book read the book as if the author is having fun. After all, the audience of JOJO Devil May Cry is quite small. In fact, those of us who understand the jokes are fine with the comments, but those who don't understand will have an extreme headache. . . If you want to go into the game world, then I recommend Nier (I won't say that I like 2B). The key is that Nier is famous and has a complete world line, which is convenient for fan creation. Then anything from Dark Souls, Monster Hunter, Taiwu Scroll, and Wolf can be used. He has extraordinary power and many fans. Since the anime world is infinite, the daily series cannot be left, so FGO, Starting from Scratch, Magic Forbidden, Battle (to be honest...) Or restricting the protagonist's extraordinary abilities to Anshiju, Kotetsu, etc. If the author writes about a niche audience, consider Kamen Rider (funny), the best in the world. In the end, I'm just a passing Kamen Rider, above.

According to the author's reaction, the heroine will appear in the Red Eyes Chapter (the next chapter of Heroes). The next article is JOJO. Guess who the heroine is. I won't tell you (*￣m￣)🤐

Let me solemnly declare that the protagonist is not Li ***, and I don't like to be a tauren. The lack of writing skills makes you feel that the relationship between Nero and Hestia is love. My fault, I'm sorry. Nero knew that he would definitely leave this world, and he didn't know if he could come back. If he flirts with Hestia, who attaches great importance to feelings, and then runs away, no one really likes such a protagonist, and he has no sense of responsibility at all. You must know that Hestia is an eternal god. So, Nero's feelings for her are somewhere between family affection and friendship. He was "boki" at the beginning and couldn't stand it. Is it normal for a heterosexual man to be like this when faced with Hestia's unconscious benefits? Or do everyone think this is abnormal... Is this considered teasing... In Chapters 27 and 8, Hestia firmly refused to come closer and hug her, and she did not sit on her butt like in the original book when she updated her ability values. At the beginning of Chapter 28, Hestia began to notice this and hugged her without moving. The plot about Bell has been explained, the cashier who takes care of Hestia, and also to prevent the family from disbanding. It only cost 20,000 mandarins, and there is no further description later. Hestia only has family affection and no love for Bell, which will be revealed in the plot later. In the final analysis, it is my own lack of ability that leads to misunderstanding. I'm sorry.

It is not strange to play with memes, but if the density of memes is too high, it will affect the reading experience.

When I read Chapter 12, my only feeling was that it was too long-winded! God is so verbose, irrelevant things, irrelevant words, and irrelevant things have become a large proportion of each chapter. Until Chapter 12, the main storyline is still at the starting line. A lot of nonsense, useless descriptions, useless explanations, etc. Occupy 95% of the content. Why do you have to nag like this? Can't you write without nagging? Unfortunately, I invested in the new book as soon as I read that the subject matter was okay.

Author, has anyone told you that you are really good at trolling? The protagonist will definitely challenge the trolls when fighting. After the fight, you can even finish half a chapter by having a barbecue. If the paid chapters are still like this, I will not dare to subscribe.

I don't think it's necessary to rewrite. Why should I pay for a piece of garbage? I can just make the heroes named Fat Man and Little Boy and the enemies named Hiroshima and Nagasaki.

I'm really convinced ┗┃ ■ ┃┛, as for that, as for that, it's as simple as killing a Goblin, spawning monsters and upgrading, and you spent two chapters before making a single slash. I'm really worried to death. Why are you thinking so much? Just cut it. If you don't decide, cut it first. How can a goblin have so many mental activities? Do you know that injecting such a large amount of water will easily kill my enthusiasm for reading, and my fans will easily fall off <(｀^´)>

Comrade the author's release time is just right. I saved 9 monthly passes last month and just used them up on the 31st... Why do you want to put it on the shelf after the month? (Although I know the release time is uncertain) There is no way... Forget it! I can only exchange it for 1,000 coins... (I'm a poor man, I mean!)

I think it's too watery, maybe too procrastinating. It took more than twenty chapters to get to the main theme. Oh my god, and the screen is full of jokes. It's like the author wrote it under the condition of unlimited self-generation. 🙂

Maybe the author is a killer and has failed the mission 🙂

Should we let the protagonist go to Devil High School in the next world? I think the identity of the protagonist, Devil, should be interesting.

Do it every day. Reward five hundred. Hey hey hey (ºº ). The author also needs to update soon. (｡･㉨･｡)ﾉ♡ I love you so much

After entering the JOJO chapter, I couldn't stand it even more. It was too uncomfortable to watch. It was not the uncomfortable feeling of being full of interesting information and broken chapters like the reincarnation paradise next door, but the indescribable feeling of embarrassment after reading one chapter and still feeling nothing. I'm really sorry, the author, I really can't stand it anymore. There is no problem with the subject matter and the protagonist is acceptable, but the narrative rhythm and chapter processing really make it difficult to think of continuing to read.

The second and third son asked: Loli has not been accepted. He advises that the power of the Holy Grail, the power of the goddess, can nourish the soul internally and raise the bloodline externally. It can also be used as a three-female husband to form a pvp team. He also advises that there is a female named Azi Kuya, and Qingshui Shou (first) is in the middle. It is not beneficial, but she must be blessed, so she can figure it out. Sigh: How can I be happy to help the harem?

Good reviews from jo chef. Come on!

It's too watery, and the world is too long. I personally don't like Woying very much, so I keep it. It's been a few months, and I'm wasting my time on Woying.

Eunuch books can also be featured in new book selections. Editors now have their brains kicked by donkeys.

A rant from beginning to end! He also foresaw the future of the ** system. The system that was introduced in the beginning was not the ** system that was blown up. Now the male protagonist wears the ** system and embarks on the road of getting stronger and revenge and adding two strokes. In the end, he becomes stronger and the sealed memory is opened. He cannot accept it and becomes a psycho. In the end, the ** system, the male protagonist's soul, a small broken ball, and a small broken ball are beaten to ashes! The setting at the beginning is enough, but the male protagonist's IQ is second to none! Toxic to me Goodbye