King of Supernatural Elements

Comments on Chapter Three: Chapter One I feel that the work is not integrated enough. It mainly depicts the emotional aspect and is not attractive to readers. Chapter 2: The content of the work is adequate, but the explosion of the cause of the incident is a bit far-fetched, but the writing feels good. Chapter 3 The content and picture feel need to be improved, and other description techniques need to be enhanced. Comment: Generally speaking, the first part of this work is not attractive enough. I hope the author can round it out a little more. If you have any questions about other aspects of writing, we can communicate with each other.