The Palm of Prehistoric Times Controls the Heavens

Chapter 1: What does it mean to be smiling? The main character is set to be an innate demon god, with a body size larger than that of the universe. His cultivation has the inheritance of Pangu Kaitian, and there is no shortage of resources. Before he was born, he could not hold the Chaos Spiritual Treasure with two hands!                                                                                                                                                                                                         The Xiaoao World, which is only in medium-large size ~ Small Thousand Worlds level, it doesn't matter what you want, besides! ! ! ! Before the main body was born, he started wandering around the sea of ​​chaos to relax? Isn't this plot setting a bit **?

The emotional scene in the first chapter can basically be said to be the end of the book. This kind of writing was okay in the early days of online writing, but now you actually want to use it. Most authors of Qidian male videos cannot write emotional scenes well, so they generally don't write female protagonists. You have an awkward start with an awkward emotional scene.

The high-end version of Great Luo is the end point, Pangu is Da Luo, and the saint is also Da Luo. It can be said that Da Luo is truly immortal. It can be said that there is no chaotic realm in Daluo. The low-end version of Honghuang is just like Daluo.

What world do you want Chen Jiutai to travel through? You can leave a message.

It's a pity that such an awesome existence sealed the memory in the final time travel. Then the memory of Pig's Foot's original body in the prehistoric era might also be fake. I really don't like this type of Pig's Foot that claims its own memory or cultivation.

Daluo Jinxian

I just don't understand. With such an awesome start, why did you go to Xiaoao Jianghu to level up? I'm really convinced. The writing on Xiaoao is so bad that I feel like vomiting when I see it.

Above the Great Luo, let's use the Xiantian Wutai as the realm division. Don't make some holy kings or holy masters. It's a bit embarrassing.

Yuan Heng Road, Lord of Glory, Yuan Heng, the lord of glory, that is the best novel I have ever read in Hong Huang Liu. It's such a pity for the eunuch.

Why do all time travels start with martial arts? Is it a water number?

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The good prehistoric era is turned into a cultivation novel, which is not putting the cart before the horse.

Now Lu Yun, now Lu Xuanhe, now Chen Jiutai. Can you write it well? It's easy to make a scene and persuade you to quit.

This novel left me speechless. I didn't understand why I wanted to go to the lower world, and I had to be reincarnated as a Daluo before I was born. Not even the incarnation of spiritual consciousness. Anyway, I didn't understand the meaning of this. You are writing about the prehistoric world and you need to develop the storyline around this theme. You should not talk too much about other worlds in one go. Anyway, I don't understand what you want to express to the readers. Don't deviate from the central direction of the story. You should write about its main trunk and then its branches around the prehistoric theme. It is like a big tree that extends around the center but does not deviate from the track. In short, deepen your creative skills, come on, author. Not suitable for me personally. Let's go first.

In one word, it's chaotic, the realm is chaotic, the plot is chaotic, the beginning is all lofty, and all the words written on it are all low-key.

I feel like I'm off topic. I'll mainly write about the prehistoric times. I'll just write a little profile about the small world.

Go to Diwu World to make a fool of yourself, why not go to Fantasy World? Will there be another Eighteen Dragon Subduing Palms at the end?

I don't understand. If you want to write, just write a prehistoric novel. As you write, it becomes an infinite stream.

To be honest, I feel like there is something wrong with the way you write it. The protagonist has a branch of his soul to travel to other worlds, not his whole person. If you write world by world like this, there is a problem. It should be interspersed with writing. Also, time travel and reincarnation are random, and a dog can be the protagonist. Traveling around the world will be as bizarre and interesting as you want.

I don't want to read the first chapter. The protagonist is idle and wasting several precious training time to increase his foundation before the birth of Yuanhui. The protagonist can't even think about it. I don't know if the protagonist's brain got flooded when he time-traveled.

Extraordinary prehistoric, the founder of the prehistoric god stick...? What else

Those who write rules will not read them unless they are logically understandable. The Tao is the Tao, and there is no difference between strength and weakness.

If you really want to play time travel and become the prehistoric xx people, you should have restarted the prehistoric world many times. What you are looking for is variables outside the prehistoric world. Maybe it is a certain big boss who keeps doing things over and over again. A different person comes through each novel, and then projects it to the earth in the form of a novel. After all, Da Luo has spread to all worlds, and every world has its myths and legends.

Let me be fair here. The protagonist did not travel through a low-level world in the early stage, but the demon-modified Xiaoao Jianghu. There is a world of cultivating immortals in it. The world level should be the same as Zhetian.

Writing more than 80 chapters in one world is too slow.

After reading six chapters, it's all bragging. Every quantifier should be accompanied by eternity, endless, or billions.

Ever since the fantasy world time travel has redefined Da Luo in novels. ,, Those authors who have been writing about 15 years ago can't make much money.

The water injection is serious, the number of words is watered back and forth, and it is tiring to read.

Don't be surprised by favor or disgrace, be careful in your words and deeds, and cultivate yourself.

Does the Chaos Demon have feelings? The protagonist is just an ordinary person. The souls of ordinary people are so fragile. The body of the Chaos Demon God is an aggregation of the laws of the Great Dao and the energy of chaos. Is it true that the soul of the protagonist will not be affected by the Great Dao and become a carrier of the Tao without emotions? ? ? I was poisoned by this emotional drama in the first volume.